MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 42

Mehak this last part was mind blowing....😊

It touched me to the core😊

I never expected Mayank to commit suicide but then again i realised that if he did stay with Nupur, she would never have gotten over her past enough to forgive the person who ruined her life....so i guess you did end it in the best way possible....though i would have loved it more if it were a happy ending...because i love happy endings...but sometimes we just have to veer off the normalcy of life and see beyond things.....

So an Awesome end to another Awesome story😃

Another feather in your cap, lady...and one you totally deserve👏👏

Cant wait for your next ff...remember what you had told me you would write about next??😉😉

Fantastic update Mehak 👏👏

shocking end i thought they would meet but then also it was brilliantlly written.........love u

OMG.....mehak i never expected this kind of ending.......i never thought that mayank is going to die😭.....i am still in tears.😭......though i know every story cant have ahappy ending.....especially this one...coz what mayank did is unpardonable.......he can never be forgiven for it.........but seeing mayur like this hurts alot..........but this has to be ur best ff mehak.........i loved reading it.........used to wait eagerly for an update.........now dat it has come to an end nd dat too such an end .......i am feeling very sad............but i am looking forward to read a new FF by you ....that too a happy nd romantic one.................do write a new one soon mehak......we all are addicted to ur FF's ...........😊

shocking end , but nicely written Mehak. next time we want a sweet & happy ff please.

I'm shocked. I didn't think Mayank would die at the end. But I think it was an apt ending for this story. Though I hate it when MN have sad endings, I must agree that for this ff, it was the justified ending. I wasn't sure how u would make Nupur agree to get together with Mayank after knowing that he was the one who raped her. No girl can do that with her heart.

Mayank died😭 but it was a justified ending. Forgiving a rapist is completely impossible and I'm glad that you showed this instead of nupur forgiving him, them getting married and living happily ever after like a Hindi movie.
Rape is unforgivable. Mayank committing suicide was shocking, but he was a weak character from the start so again it's justified.
Beautiful FF, come back soon with a serious FF but a nice and happy shappy ending. 🤗
Keep up the great work baji 🤗

aw am crying it's just ah i don't have words i am speechless ur a greatttttttttttt writer

mehak........

ok finally me here to giv my detailed reply n view😃😳😆😆

i loved d slap...........he totally deserved it.......😃thnx for that...i so wanted that.........