My first OS ever...DIL KA RISHTA- pt 4-5 on pg 13

Hello friends...😊

I'm GHUNCHA SHABBIR, a huge Hussain-Juhi fan, actually, I guess you all know this very well.😛😉

For past few days I was thinking to write a ff, as writing is my passion, but I'd dropped the idea as I'm to leave for my hostel very soon.🤢

But my very sweet friend, Tama asked me to write an OS instead. So, I'm here with a short story...a short love story actually, on the two awesome people...KUMKUM and SUMIT.❤️

Well, its my first written update,,,hope you all like it...😕

Plz comment whether you like it or not...and do suggest me if I need to improve.😊😊😊

All the critisms and appreciations are most welcomed. Please do...😊

And yes, don't forget to hit the like button, if you feel to do so...😛

FRIENDS...😊

Here is the Banner of my OS...

first of welcome to the writing updates😃
Congratulation dear for the wonderful OS I hope u rocks like tama and i really looking forward to it 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94

wow ghum
first of welcome to the writing updates
intro was fab
waiting for the update darling!!

Originally posted by: ana56

wow dear

congrats for the os

i likeed tht

and m looking forward to read it

so continue soon