My first OS ever...DIL KA RISHTA- pt 4-5 on pg 13 - Page 2

Originally posted by: ayeshajee

Congratulation dear for the wonderful OS I hope u rocks like tama and i really looking forward to it

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Originally posted by: zaryaabJuhi1b8

first of welcome to the writing updates😃
Congratulation dear for the wonderful OS I hope u rocks like tama and i really looking forward to it 😃😃😃

Thank you sweety...for such a warm welcome...😊

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

hey dear...

well i did tell u previosly i am very excited about ur FF/SS...

just waiting for u to update the chapters soon...

and congratulations on this FF...

IF is an great place for talented people...

love yaa loadzzz...🤗🤗

update soon...

Hi di...😊

Originally posted by: ar.arsh

gr8

thank u dear...😊

it really sounds interesting... waiting for ur OS. 😍

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

it really sounds interesting... waiting for ur OS. 😍

oh so sweet of u di...😊.

Thank you so much for liking my efforts...😊

Intezar ki ghadiyan khatam guys...😊

Congratulations like the characters, ff name waiting for 1st part

Story begins...

Its raining heavily... There is water all around. A girl is standing at the bus stop waiting for her bus... That girl is none other that our very own KUMKUM SHRIVASTAVA.

Suddenly she saw a car standing at a few distance away. She got a little frightened in the beginning...but somehow she gathered her courage and decided to ask for help.

Scene two...

"Oh no yaar! It's not so... whatever you would say, but I won't agree to go there... I mean its not the correct time to get married... I have to finish my studies, though the last year...its doesn't mean that I'll get married... And, for a successful married life, we need to understand our partner naa... How can we just... uff..." The voice choked...

This was none other than our Hero...Sumit.

On the other side of the phone...was his best friend, Mayank

Mayank: Relax dude... Who has told you to marry the girl at first sight. Listen, we will go to her house...and will see her...and then will refuse giving any excuse...Simple...

Sumit: Mayank, it's not so simple... you know Dadimaa... She is too strict... She will not leave me... WO TOH MERI SHAADI KARWA KE HI DUM LENGI...🤢😡🤢

At that moment there was knock at his car's window pane...

Sumit: Mayank, just hold on...hmmm...someone is knocking the pane...

Sumit pulls down the window pane...and found a girl standing.

Sumit: Yes please...

The girl was Kumkum...

Kumkum: Sorry to diturb, actually I needed your help... If you can, please...

Sumit disconnects the call telling Mayank to call later...

Sumit: Yeah...for sure. How can I help you?

Kumkum: Actually, I had been waiting for my bus for long, but it hasn't arrived yet. If you don't mind, can you please give me a lift to my home?

Sumit: I'm extremely sorry, but I can't. Actually due to heavy rain, I'm unable to move forward...there is water logged everywhere... and don't you know, you won't get buses or auto-rickshaw today...as it's a strike...which may continue till tomorrow...

Kumkum got highly worried... She turned and was just about to move, when her step stopped by Sumit's voice.

Sumit: If you don't mind, where do want to go? (coming out of his car)

Kumkum: No...It's OK... I've to go to Delhi Cant.

Sumit: Oh! That's too far... How will you go home now?

Kumkum: I'll manage... let's see if I get any rickshaw or something...

Sumit: You won't... I just told you it's a strike...and it's really difficult to get any public transport today, and plus it's raining... I guess, it's impossible. You will be able to avail them only by tomorrow...or probably later...🤢

Kumkum: No... I have no knowledge about it... Actually, I'd just returned from hostel...just three hours back...

Sumit: And your guardians, they must be knowing...why haven't they informed you?😕

Kumkum: Because my phone's battery is low...and we couldn't contact...🤢

Sumit looks into her eyes. He could see her eyes a little wet...and tensions on the face.

Sumit: If you don't mind, you can use my phone. (Offering his mobile)

Kumkum had no any other option, except to accept his proposal.

She called her dad up and clarified the situations.

Kumkum: Papa, don't worry... I'll manage to be there tomorrow morning anyhow... I'll see if I get any hotel or something to stay tonight.

Papa: Ok beta... take care of yourself...

Kumkum: Ya papa...don't worry...Bye...

She returns the phone back to Sumit...and says "THANKS"...😊

And Sumit gives a beautiful smile in return...😊😊😊

Kumkum was about to leave...suddenly...

Here ends the part... Guys, keep guessing whats gonna happen further? Will meet you and Sumit-Kumkum in the next part...😊

Hmmm...so how was it? I just hope, I lived upto all your expectations... If not, do let me know, where I need to improve and how...😃

All yor critisms and appreciations are most welcomed...😊

Will try my to fulfil all your expectations...😊

With lots of Luv...❤️

GHUNCHA SHABBIR