My first OS ever...DIL KA RISHTA- pt 4-5 on pg 13

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Hey Ghuncha🤗..

I would definitely love to read this OS for sure!! The intro and the first part were really good!! Beautifully written and well described!! 👏 ⭐️

Loved the situation here and Sumit-Mayank phone convo was just too good!! ⭐️ B/w, why am I having a feeling that Sumit's family are going to Kumkum's house to see her? 😉 Lets see what you write!! 😆

Waiting for the next part impatiently!! Please post a long update next time and don't forget to add me in the PM list!! 😳

Love,

Bidushy!! ❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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adeela anwer

@adeela786

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

yaar ghuncha can't beleive its ur first OS... 😛 😛
superrrb..
.fantastic story..loved it

.eagerly waiting for d next part ..update it sooon...

..and if possiible pm me also.. 🤗

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: AmezingJuhi

jaldi se next part update kar yaar...we waiting...jaldi karna ok...

lov ur concept...

hi Thanks dear...

will update soon...😊

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: RockingHussain
wow dear...very nice strting dear...
just keep it up my frnd...

ja kal juhi hussain ki profile me comment kyu nehi karti hai yaar??

thanks dear...😊

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: HussainJuhi
what an story yaar.keep it up gunu.

thanks yaar...😊

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sukklover
...Dear...😊.

4 PM me...

same time 4 late n short comment dear...becouse m so busy..😕..

dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️.

updates r just , ...

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i just... ...

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...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.

4 ur ...👏👏👏👏 gr8 gr8 Dear...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

just wanna ......🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

last time said... ...

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...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃.

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

Awww...

thats so sweet of u Tama...😊

itne pyaare comments ki ummid sirf tum se hi ho sakti hai...

thanks for all the wishes...and appreciations...😊

main aur kya likhun...kuch samajh nhi aa rha hai...

aaammm...

bus itna hi kahungi...

I love you yaar...😊

muaaahhh...

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: arjun-forever
aww...ghuncha aww...awesome part tha...kumkum-sumit...were fab...and lolzz...mayank his best friend...

luv u for this update...🤗

thanks di for ur kind visit...😊

thanks for liking my os...😊

ya...I told na...Mayank will have an important role...

so that was it...

and I love you too...