My first OS ever...DIL KA RISHTA- pt 4-5 on pg 13 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ana56

lovely update dear

let me guess

sumit will stop kum kum and will offer help

m just guessing

thnx for the pm

and continue soon

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Ghuncha, nice one yaar...


suspense pe aake rok diya... waiting for next OS...😍

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Hey Ghuncha🤗..

I would definitely love to read this OS for sure!! The intro and the first part were really good!! Beautifully written and well described!! 👏 ⭐️

Loved the situation here and Sumit-Mayank phone convo was just too good!! ⭐️ B/w, why am I having a feeling that Sumit's family are going to Kumkum's house to see her? 😉 Lets see what you write!! 😆

Waiting for the next part impatiently!! Please post a long update next time and don't forget to add me in the PM list!! 😳

Love,

Bidushy!! ❤️

Originally posted by: adeela786

yaar ghuncha can't beleive its ur first OS... 😛 😛
superrrb..
.fantastic story..loved it

.eagerly waiting for d next part ..update it sooon...

..and if possiible pm me also.. 🤗

HEY...

Sumit: Excuse me! If you don't mind, can we stay here...I mean together?😕

Kumkum: Sorry?😕😲

Sumit: I meant that I've to wait here alone till the water is drained and you have to wait till morning for some convenient way to go home...right? So...can we share a few moments together, so that we won't get bored?😕

Kumkum was speechless...she had no reply at all...absolutely blank...😲😲😲

"How can anyone be so straight forward...? Directly to the point?" she thought.😲

Sumit felt guilty. 😳😳😳

"I shouldn't be so frank... I guess she's angry" Sumit thought...

Sumit: Sorry... Kumkum: OK... Both speaks together...😳

And there was silence all around.

Sumit: No, I didn't mean to confuse you...😳 I just wanted to... I mean...just to spend our time well... I hope you didn't take it wrong.

Sumit: Sumit Wadhwa😃

They shake hands...😃😊😃

Sumit: Lets sit there...( he showed her the bench lying on the bus stand.)

They sat there ...

The conversation began...😊

Slowly they came to know about each other...

Sumit was a MBA final year student... just a few months were left for his studies to be completed. And then he had decided to help his dad in his family business. He is the only child of his parents. And, unfortunately, he had lost his mother few years back. He resides with his dad and dadimaa... His dadimaa is rigid to get him married as soon as possible to a girl of her choice. But, he is entirely against it. And he is trying to sort out this problem. He is a very shy boy, and is unable to express his views to others. Yeah! He shares a lot with his best friend, Mayank.

On the other hand...

Kumkum was a law student, studying in Pune. Her family is in Delhi. She is a very charming girl...loves to live her life the way it comes to her. She is the only daughter of her parents and has a brother, Anant, who is also a student. She is back home not because she has any vacations, but she is in leave as her parents chose a boy for her, who is coming to see her the next day...and she is really excited about it.

BAATON HI BAATON MEIN WAQT KAISE NIKAL GAYA...KUCH PATA HI NAHI CHAL...

The clock stuck 3:30 am...

While she was talking, Sumit felt something different for Kumkum... USKI PYAARI PYAARI AAKHEIN USE BAHUT KHOOBSURAT LAG RAHI THI... CHAND KI ROSHNI MEIN WO AISI LAG RAHI THI JAISE WO CHAMAK CHAAND KI NAHI USKI HO...

Sumit had never felt so for any girl... He was not able to understand what was happening to him... He just kept on looking into Kumkum's eyes... and infact...WO TO ITNA KHO GAYA THA KI USE Kumkum KI KAHI BAATEIN BHI SUNAI NHI DE RAHI THI...

Suddenly...

Kumkum screamed...: Anant...😲

Sumit looked up; He saw a 19 yrs old guy. He was Kumkum's brother.

Kumkum ran to him...

Kumkum: Anant, you are here? How did you come to know?

Anant: Di, I'd been searching you for hours and then I found you here.🤢 OK... forget it...its too late...lets go home, everyone is tensed...

Kumkum: Ya sure... hey, just wait...

Anant: What happened?😕

Kumkum: Come with me... Meet MR. SUMIT WADHWA...😊 He is the guy, who helped me a lot. He was there with me the entire night. Gave me a great company... 😃

Anant shook hands with Sumit... and kept smiling...as if he knew something about him...

Kumkum: Why are you smiling?

Anant: Nothing Di...just like that... Actually, when we meet someone, you should greet with smile, right?😊

Sumit: Yeah! You are absolutely right...😊(Sumit smiles in return)

Anant: OK Di...let's go...

Kumkum: Yup.

And then Kumkum departs with Anant...

Here is the end of the part...

Guys, u all keep guessing... KI AAKHIR KYA HAI WO JO Anant JAANTA HAI...? Why was he smiling...?

I hope I've not disappointed you guys...I hope you all have enjoyed reading it...

If yes! Do hit the like button...

Will meet you in the next episode...or u may call next part...

Till then... keep smiling...😊and keep commenting...😊

All your appreciations and criticisms are most welcome... 😃

Do let me know, if I need to improve somewhere, in any sense...

Will wait for your replies eagerly. 😃

With lots of LOVE..❤️

GHUNCHA SHABBIR