My first OS ever...DIL KA RISHTA- pt 4-5 on pg 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks friends...😊
Thank you everybody who replied...
thanks a lot for all ur comments, suggestions and appreciations...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was very busy with my preprations of daparture to the hostel...which is going to be very soon... just few few days more to go...😭
Well, thank u so much for bearing with me...
luv u guys...🤗
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Edited by GhunchaluvsSuKk - 13 years ago
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Scene one...

On the way to home...

Kumkum: Anant, why were you smiling so much? Sumit would have felt something odd...

Anant: Oho! What's the matter di... you are thinking so much about him...hmmm...???? What's going on?😉😛

Kumkum: Oh just shut up! 🤢 There's nothing like that... but you shouldn't have done so...OK...

Anant: OK..OK...Sorry...fine...happy...

Kumkum: Yeah... (Smiling)😊😊😊

Scene two...

Sumit was sitting alone on the bench...thinking about Kumkum...with his eyes closed...

Suddenly, he looked upon his watch...😲

Sumit: Oh God! Its quarter to 5... OH NO!!!! Dadimaa is gonna kill me...🤢

He rushed to his car...

He was about to start his car that...the cell phone rings...

Sumit: Mayank...now? He's still awake...? (Sumit thinks...)😕

He picks up the phone

Sumit: Hello

Mayank: Where are you Sumit? I had called you almost twenty times.

Sumit was shocked: WHAT? (He checked the phone, and found 23 missed calls by Mayank.😲

Sumit: Oh God! Really sorry yaar... actually, I was outside and my cell was inside the car...

Mayank: What do you mean by outside? Where were you Sumit?

Sumit: I was with Kumkum...and...

Mayank interrupted in between...

Mayank: Who is Kumkum?😲

Sumit: Will you let me speak?❓

Mayank: OK...GO AHEAD...

Sumit described everything to Mayank.

Sumit: Yaar...really

She was damn beautiful... 😍I had never felt so for any girl in my life. I don't what is happening to me...

Mayank: Hmmm... 😃I can understand... Well, first of all you go home, everybody is tensed about you. We will talk on this later. OK.

Sumit: Alright, see you tomorrow... I mean today..😛 .bye...

He disconnects the call and drives to home.

Scene three

At Kumkum's place...

Everyone was relaxed to see Kumkum back at home safely.😊

Kumkum in her room...

Wiping her hair with towel...she had thoughts of Sumit...😍

She puts down her towel and says to herself.." why I'm I thinking of him... We were together only for that very moment...not anymore.."

Sitting near the mirror...

Sumit's face moved in front of her eyes...

Kumkum: What's happening to me...why am I thinking of him... Forget about him Kumkum.

Kumkum's mother enters...

Maa: Whom are you talking to?

Kumkum: No one... I was just...

Maa: Ok.. leave it. Go and take rest. You were awaken full night. And you have to look fresh for the evening too...

Kumkum: Ya maa...

Kumkum's mother leaves.

Kumkum lying on the bed.

"Excuse me! If you don't mind, can we stay here...I mean together?

I meant that I've to wait here alone till the water is drained and you have to wait till morning for some convenient way to go home...right? So...can we share a few moments together, so that we won't get bored?"

These were Sumit's words...

Kumkum was thinking of Sumit again...

How can a guy be so straight forward... He's definitely not like the other boys, he's different. He is very loyal, he's is so open-hearted, so calm...and...OH GOD...not again...I'm thinking of him every now and then...Oh...Forget about him Kumkum. You are going to get married soon... Your biggest dream is just about to come true... and you are thinking of someone who's not yours...

Kumkum puts the pillow on her head...😕

At Sumit's House.

Sumit reaches home well, Dadimaa was waiting for him.

Dadimaa: Sumit are you fine beta?

Sumit: Hmmm...

Dadimaa: But why are you looking so upset?

Sumit: Nothing Dadimaa, I'm tired...🥱

Dadimaa: OK..then go and take rest...I'll see that nobody disturbs you.

Sumit goes to his room...

In Sumit's room...

Sumit was lying on his bed. Kumkum's face was in his eyes and hee voice was ringing in his ears...

Her cute smile and her beautiful eyes...were making him go crazy...🤔

Suddenly he gets up...

He says to himself: Stop it...what I'm I doing? She's not mine. She's going to be someone else's. Today the guys will come to see her and if he chooses her... Sumit stops for a while...

Why am I feeling so odd? So what if the guy chooses her, she'll get married to him and will stay happy always.

MAIN TO USE THIK SE JAANTA BHI NAHI, PHIR PYAAR HONA TO DOOR KKI BAAT HAI...

What, Sumit screams suddenly... PYAAR... MAIN KISI SE PYAAR NAHI KARTA...NAHI..NAHI...BILKUL NAHI...🤢😕

Ooohhh...KYA HO RHA HAI MUJHE...😕

I know it very well that she can never be mine, but why I'm I thinking of her again n again...

Sumit was getting restless and unquiet...

Seeing no other option, he rang Mayank.

Sumit: Yaar, I've gone mad...definitely mad...

Mayank: Calm down Sumit, what happened...?

Sumit: Wo Kumkum...USNE MERA JINA HARAM KAR RAKHA HAI YAAR...

Mayank: What????

Sumit: Ufff...I mean, she is coming in my dreams, not letting me to take rest even... OH...I'm so unquiet, please tell me yaar...what shall I do?

Sumit was feeling dizzy...

Mayank got tensed for Sumit.

Mayank: Sumit, relax... MAIN HOON NA... HUM AAJ SHAAM MEIN BAAT KARTE HAIN. 😊

Sumit: OK... Where shall we meet?

Mayank: Coffee House.

Sumit: Yeah...I'll be there at 7 pm.

Mayank: Take rest and just chill... Bye.

Sumit puts down the phone and fell upon his bed.

In Kumkum's room.

She was sleeping on her bed.

Four legs, I mean two pairs...were coming closer to her bed...slowly...

"DIII..." there was a huge shout.🥳

Kumkum started up in sleep.

Kumkum: OH GOD...GUNJAN...(she screamed)😲

Gunjan... Kumkum's cousin ( Bua's daughter)

Gunjan: KAISA LAGA SURPRISE?😃

Kumkum: When did you come?

Anant: Di, Gunjan had come before you you arrived. She came two days ago.

Kumkum: But where was she since morning?

Gunjan: Di, I was at my friend's house. Actually it rained so heavily that aunty didn't allow me to go.

Kumkum's mother enters...

Mother: TUM LOG BAATEIN HI KARTE RAHOGA YA KUMKUM KO TAYYAR BHO HONE DOGE. LADKE WALE AATE HONGE. JALDI KARO BETA. (and she leaves)😊

Kumkum gets nervous.😳

Anant: Di, get ready and come down soon.. (he leaves)

Gunjan: Di, what happened? Why are you looking so confused, it was your dream to get married na...so e=why are these expressions coming on face?

Kumkum tries to smile...and😳

Kumkum: No, I'm fine and... glad too...

Gunjan: That's good...get ready...fast...

Gunjan goes to the wardrobe and takes out a beautiful red-golden coloured sari.😊😊😊

Sumit was fast asleep.

Dadimaa enters.

Dadimaa: Sumit, get up beta (sitting near Sumit and tickled his hair gently.

Sumit felt motherly touch and slowly opened his eyes.

Dadimaa: Sumit, CHALO UTHO.😊

Sumit: eeehhhmmm...🥱🥱🥱Dadimaa...please let me sleep a little more...(Sumit making cute faces...)

Dadimaa: No ways, just get ready fast...we got to leave.

Sumit was so surprised:😲😲😲 But where?

Dadimaa: Your dad has a business party, we have to go there. So, be very quick.

Sumit: But Dadimaa, why me... I mean what will I do there? I'm not required there, its dad's party, I don't want to go please...😕🤢

Dadimaa: No Sumit...Don't be so rigid Sumit. You know after your dad, you are going to own this company, so you have to attend this party...otherwise you know your dad. So get readu fast...no excuses...

Dadimaa leaves and...stops at the door seeing Sumit holding his phone.

Dadimaa: Whom are you calling now, Mayank is also coming there. (she leaves)

Sumit: What??? USNE MUJHE BATAYA TAK NAHI AAJ KE IS PARTY KE BARE MEIN...(he thinks)😔

He rings Mayank.

Sumit: You cheat... why haven't you told me about the party.

Mayank: Just relax. Dadimaa rang me an hour back and informed me about it. I was totally unknow, don't blame me yaar...😕

Sumit: Oh...sorry...🤢

Mayank: Its ok...get ready, we will meet there.

Sumit cuts the call.

Here's the end of the part.

So, how's the part?

What do you think is gonna happen?

Will Sumit be able to get Kumkum back in her life? Will they ever meet?

I hope I've lived up to all your expectations.

I hope you all have enjoyed reading it. I've not disappointed you people.

If you liked my effort, do hit the LIKE button.

Will be waiting eagerly for all you replies.

See you all in next part.

Till then keep smiling...

Lots of LOVE,❤️

Ghuncha


Edited by GhunchaluvsSuKk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys...

This time it is a long update...😉
I hope you will enjoy...
thanking you for all your love and support...
GHUNCHA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear

i loved it

and u knw wht i think there is no party

and actually sumit is the guy whom kumkum s family is waiting for to see kumkum

and may be dadi ma doesnt want to argue with summit on shaadi issue so she lied to him
Edited by ana56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ghuncha nice update yar itni dher baad ki or zyada ki toh maza hi a giya keep it up dear or summit is too muuuah
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear i loved it gr88 wrk dear 👏⭐️


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Posted: 13 years ago
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s0ooo0 nice 😛 magar kumkum ki to kise or kye sathe shadi horahi hn ab kya hoga🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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are Ghuncha, tu yeh hamesha suspence pe aake kyun pause karti ho?

i was reading this update so fondly again u stopped at this point.

liked ur Os well. superb work. eagerly waiting for next update. do PM me. don't forget to PM me.

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