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Posted: 14 years ago
I love these two Characters Maheen-Zeeshan...
Awesome update Kinza, I enjoyed it to bits.. My second fav. update...
Maheen finally accepted it was indeed a date ... 😳 It was such a pleasure reading...
Update sooon Kinza...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay ALLAH that was so cute n outstanding update Kinza loved so much moheen n zeeshan moments thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww
so sweet update.
really very cute
continue soon
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u people .. from this part starts the REAL story .. 😳
Chapter # 11:

Although Maheen wanted to go home alone, but Zeeshan's insisting that he will follow her if she won't let him walk beside finally ended up as a sweet sight, where they both were walking, again hand in hands.

"okay now byee", maheen finally pulled her hand away from his grip and rushed towards her home, which was a few feet away.

She was about to press the doorbell when due to a sudden impulse she turned back, expecting that Zeeshan would be standing there but he was NOT. Maheen was shocked, she expected him to be standing there, atleast waiting until the door is opened but he was NOT. She desperately scanned the whole place within her sight but he was not there.

Sensing something shattering inside her, she pressed the door bell vigorously, trying hard not to let those tears flow down her cheeks.

Ahmed Malik opened the door to find Maheen with a completely deserted expression on her face, "hey dad!", she said slowly and rushed to her room before his dad could bombard her with questions.

Reaching the room, she just threw herself on the bed.

This is completely ridiculous, she thought, why is she so sad and hurt. He did drop her home but she wanted to keep waiting until she had entered, but - DAMN IT!!.

She closed her eyes firm and hugging her pillow tight to herself, she hid herself under the blanket, this time not able to hold back the tears. She was hurt and she was disappointed, and she knew this was insane behavior.

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"May I come in?", she asked in a plain voice and Zeeshan greeted her with his trademark smile, "ofcouse maheen", he stood up and walked towards expecting a hug, but maheen quietly stood by the table, taking out her note pad, "yesterday we didn't discuss anything, what next do I have to do?", she was stiff and dry.

"hmm, so u have a problem of short term memory loss?", he asked sitting on the table, and she raised her eyes to give him an angry glare, but her eyes couldn't convey that, instead it showed that's he was hurt.

"can we start the work?"

"what happened?", he asked, raising his head to see in her eyes again, but she jerked his hand, "stop flirting and I need to work, my ..", and her words were cut short because her instructor had placed his lips on hers' - softly.

The world around her again came to a halt. She kissed back without any delay but then in an equal rush she pulled back, remembering last night, "I hate you", she said slowly with a displaced breath,

"OMG!, whyyy/", Zeeshan whined playfully, wiping her tears which were flowing down her cheeks, and then kissing the marks those tears left on her face.

"you take a girl for a date, kiss her in rain, pick her up in front of a hundred people,. Drop her home and then u left without seeing that has she entered her home or not, couldn't you wait a minute longer .. atleast I could have entered my home", she said still in a slow voice, looking in his eyes which were sparkling with a naughty twinkle, "hmmm, demanding girlfriend", he slipped his arm across her waist while resisted, but not good enough to push him away, "yes I am demanding, you should have..

"I was there maheen, I left when u entered your home", he said increasing his grip around her, "don't lie!!", she said with tears shining again, "you were no where!"

"I was there", he softly wiped her tears again, "okay as a proof, I guess your dad opened the door right?, he was wearing a blue .. ummm .. navy blue cardigan", he said smiling and maheen was startled.

"but I looked everywhere, you were not..

"I was there .. you just don't see good things around you maheen", he kissed her softly again and this time, unable to hold herself, she hugged him , holding his sweater tightly in her hands and Zeeshan rubbed her back.

"from next time, I'll make sure I leave after you sleep", he said chuckling and maheen hit him on his chest, "move now", she tried to push him and he did move away, after stealing another kiss from her.

"okay now back to work", he announced and then started dictating her the points and she stated take them down, quietly and obediently, without arguing, not that she was agreeing with all his points, she was just too busy noticing and admiring him, but then scolding herself for acting like a love-sick girl, she just got back to just listening him.

You need to prepare this report by next week", he said, closing his laptop,

Two weeks!!", she said joyfully closing her pen,

"why two weeks?, this is such a simple work", he was staring her with strict eyes.

'because I have a bad habit of taking advantage of people", she winked at him and left the office, leaving Zeeshan with a smile.

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Life had suddenly turned beautiful for Maheen. She had started welcoming her days with a hope and ending them with a smile Zeeshan had indeed been successful in bringing a smile on maheen's face. Although she had no idea where the relation was heading, but still she knew that she wanted to meet him every day. The progress since the past two months in their relation was nil, except for the fact that Maheen, after a lot of pasturing and a lot of kisses, finally agreed not to stay out of home after 9.00, so consequently they had shifted their dates to lunches.

Discipline and aim - maheen never thought that these two things will return in her life.

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"I want to come to your home", maheen suddenly announced having the fully engrossed Zeeshan in typing in complete shock.

"what?", he had to ask again ,

"I want to come to your home", she repeated and Zeeshan flaunted his trade mark smile, which every time used to touch the chords of her heart, "ofcourse sweetheart, anytime", he said.

Although the use of the word "sweetheart" used to earn him a frown from maheen, but he knew she used to feel butterflies, so he kept on using it.

"okay then, today you are going to cook me a yummy meal at your place", she was ordering and Zeeshan was nodding obediently.

"and it will be dinner..'

"maheen ..

"come on Zeeshan, I have not been out at night since the past two months, today it's okay!, and no arguments, I'll see u at night", she kissed his cheek and left.

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For a change, Maheen decided to give all her jeans and sweaters a break, and instead dressed herself in a simple brown knee length skirt, with quarter sleeves, tying her hair in a high pony, applying gloss and black eye pencil, she was perfectly ready to meet him.

Looking in the mirror, she felt satisfied and hoped Zeeshan will like her new look. Taking a deep breath she came down stairs, where her father was as always ready with questions, but seeing a strange and new twinkle in her eyes, he let him go.

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Walking down the street, she was nervous. "Oh come on maheen, it's Zeeshan, you meet him everyday!!", she chanted this along the way, but still couldn't calm her nerves.

She knew today was different. It was new. It was special, but one thing she didn't knew was that .. it was also forbidden.

Chap 12 - Pg 47

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
mulan. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW... BEAUTIFUL UPDATE KINZU!!!! THIS STORY IS GETTING BETTER DAY BY DAY!!!! AND ZEESHAN AND MAHEEN ARE SIMPLY TOOO GOOD!!!!!😍LOVE U BESTIE!!!!🤗
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee update :D
yaar hope they'll be together n koi prob na ho :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww maheen n zeeshan r just d cutest...it was all so magical n beautiful..!!
though,the last line n ur note is scary!!
do cont asap...m very curious, Angel!!!!
tc...<333
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Posted: 14 years ago
m loving da story...bt da last part...😕
kinzi plzz i dnt want maheen to get hurt

tc
loads of love
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii sry yar main reoly nahin kar saki coz we were shigfting to anothre city so i couldnt come online last week but m here now and ur FF is awesome and this update is mind blowing ggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt kinza
thanks for the pm

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