M/G FF 4: With All My Love & Heart Forever PG 100 - Page 69

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Posted: 14 years ago
Oey krishna ki ladki...ub jaldi bata teri story koan si thi? Listen don't think what people will think and all...we thought too but we went and ahead and posted it despite the fact on few likes it but they do na...i'm willingly dieing to read ur story na...plz pretty plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love Swayam too. He's so sweet and cute :)

hehe, the one with maan and geet of course. I wrote it in like fifteen minutes before the deadline.

I'm such a lazy person. I have
so many random ideas but Im too lazy
to write and post them. I will write something by the end of next week, I promise.
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
1500!!!!!! :) all thanks to you girls and Devi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sab log kahan gayye? Donde esta?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I love Swayam too. He's so sweet and cute :)

hehe, the one with maan and geet of course. I wrote it in like fifteen minutes before the deadline.

I'm such a lazy person. I have
so many random ideas but Im too lazy
to write and post them. I will write something by the end of next week, I promise.



Ok chalo ub jaldi se naam bolo...my friend is over thats why me missing out from here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG 99...😲

That means i have to post my epi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok it me to spam now...
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Posted: 14 years ago





The moon was beaming another night as destined to do so every month. The days turned to week the weeks to months and months to years. The roller coaster of life never stable when it comes to two strong-minded individuals. But what kind of life if there is the certainty that your breathing would be more stronger by day as you grow old with the partner that assured you to give you the reason to breath again and again. Thus, the life has turned for him with his sona, his Geet. She has given him the reason to breathe; breathe for her if not for anyone. As both Maan and Geet, continue creating loving memories with one another and people around them. Every day was a new day to learn more about one another. Geet surprised him in every way possible; it was never a dull moment ever since she came in to his life. She was not an ordinary woman, as his Dadima said to him, "Maan Beta, Geet jaisi aur koi tumeh bha hi nahi sakti. Wo har maino mai tumhari sangini hai ise humesha apne se bandh kar rakhna." He chuckled on that thought. It seemed the opposite, as Geet has tied him to her not the other way around. His life has been rotating around her, with out her he is not him. Not only has she handled him, but his home and the business.

It was the night that gave him Dj vu, all of a sudden he felt the need to step out of the crowd and he walked out the back of the hall that lead him to the pool. It felt as if he was living the moment again, the same serenity, the light breeze and the moon lit night. He placed his hands in his pocket, took deep breath, and ogle up to view the beauty of the heaven. The rustle near by got him out of his stupor and he turned to check what was it. As he stepped closer to the near by bush, he heard some low mutters as well. Instantly he knew what he would be facing. As he cornered the bush with the smile on his lips, the view was spectacular, adorn in white, with the tight dark curls blocking the view his angel looked adorable. He approaches and bends down to unravel the fabric; the softness of it reminded him the very first night where he saw her first time. Startled with the sudden appearance, she lost her balance and topple over he immediately caught her before she hits the floor. He clutched her tight in his arms, and she clinging on to him for her life. He murmured softly, "Open your eyes love; you are fine see I got you I will never let you fall." She opened her big round eyes just like, "Soma, Soma, where are you beta?" "Oops, Papa its mamma." I'm here mamma." She giggled in her naughty way. Maan chuckled too with her; just like her mother, she was full of life.


His 4-year-old angle that was his world, it was her and her brother Somkar's 4th birthday. They were twins. Soma was by few minutes older than Somkar.

He remembered the night when they were conceived it was a full moon. It was the night when Geet had successfully graduated her degree. He wanted to surprise her by celebrating her achievement and he had set up the celebration on the roof top just for two of them exclusively and how it ended was the result of these two precious souls in his life. He smiled at the memories of that night, as if it was just yesterday. That's how he named his kids resembling with the Moon a symbol of their eternal love. He saw his Geet turning the bush to reach up to them. She looked magnificent day by day; his heart never forgets to skip whenever he sees her to date.


He stood there with his daughter in his arm and waited for Geet to join them. "Soma, didn't I tell you to stay inside and not to wander around without letting me know?" She scolded her daughter lightly. She turned towards Maan and smiled, "Maan aap yahan aur main aapko ander dhondh rahi thi." Maan just stared at her not sure what to say, he simply pulled her with his other hand and kissed her on her cheek. Soma giggled at her father's openness. Geet turned red the same hue he never seems to get over with it. "Maan ye kiya kar rahain, kuch to sharam karo." She pouted and folded her hands. "Why should I have shame? I didn't do anything wrong. Loving my wife is not something I'm ashamed of. And if you are concerned of our daughter," he leaned closer to her ears and whispered, "well she is the result of my love to you." With that he looked straight in those hazels that glisten with shyness.


Geet opened her arms and circled around Maan


including their daughter and leaned forward to kiss his cheeks and hearing their daughter laughing yet again she kissed her and Maan joined with her kissing on the other side. They all laughed and walked towards the entrance to join with the rest of the family and guests who waited to celebrate the birthday of their kids.

Seeing the happy family around Dadima wiped the last string of tears to thank god for showering such blessing upon her home and her family. She couldn't ask more and would leave the world happily with no regrets. Her heart was on ease now seeing his grandson having his own bundle of joy and making her great grandmother.

Adi and Pinki joined the celebration, with their children. They got married the same year as Maan and Geet right after two months of their marriage. They had two sons and the third on its way. Adi simply adores Pinki and never leaves her side or call every few minutes to check on her. He has also established his name in the well reputed business owners and Pinki insisted to be a housewife.

Agustiya and Ayanna had their ups and downs in the family way, after struggling for few years they had finally decided to adopt a child and they adopted a girl. They seem to be happy to have her in their life.

Sasha too finally got settled in her life; they found out that she left the country the same time when she had messed with Maan and Geet and got married just last year to a business tycoon in Mauritius.

It's a complete happy family with normal ups and down. A fairy tale we all wish to happen in real to call it and they live happily ever after.


I hope the restless hearts are at

peace and I lived

up to their expectations.

I had such a hard time writing

these 1141 words and was so skeptical to

publish. Well it's out now, and

can't do much about it. Till I come up with

another dream, do leave me a

comment or two. And I again thank you for

supporting my immature writing

and

encouraging me to continue.


PS: MEANING OF THE NAMES

SOMA -MOON RAYS SOMKAR - MOON LIGHT


Edited by Newdime - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have impeccable timing! 😛

Awh that was a beautiful ending! I loved the pix! And the names you picked for the twins were quite original, first time I've heard of them actually.
And I'm glad everyone had an happily ever after in this FF! I enjoyed reading it and I hope you dream up something new real soon!
Edited by Limerance - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesome shona
luved d endinggg
n really different names for children
luved them
n waiting for u start a new ff

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