MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

abt continuing d ff after maaneet meet is like .. dont drag unnecessarily ...

n u can continue unless u dont create probs between them ...

Thnk u for the comments 😃 I vl try not to drag the story...I promise no MU between MAANEET.I think i hav already made them stand above all that...The only thing that come between them is their ego...once they break it they vl be one forever...Lets c how time tests them...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nazsij

ye sameera devil ki murder kardoongi...i hate her...poor geet yaar kithna kuch suna...maan jaanega tho kya hoga sameera tho geya...

Murder 😲 lets c wat Maan vl do...
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Thank u to all who have commented & pressed the like button😃

Hope u vl encourage me always...


PART 29

Maan was driving into Akbar lane one of the posh areas of Delhi where the Khurana Mansion stood proudly. He was turning to the road leading to his mansion when he saw her running aimlessly with tears in her eyes😭...they were not just tears...those eyes that could speak volumes were screaming in pain... His heart stopped beating when he saw her in such a condition.He lost the control of his car and it was goin to hit a tree when he managed to put a sudden brake and it stopped just one inch before the tree.
Adi: Sir r u ok?any problem?
Maan:hmm..i hav an important work.Tum ek kam karo.Give this watch to dadi.Me thodi der me a jaunga.
Adi:ok sir.
The moment Adi left,he turned the car and drove fanatically.He halted when he saw her petite figure wandering a few distance away.He quickly got out of the car and ran to her,Geeett..ruk jao...
He ran to her and caught hold of her by her waist.
Maan(cupped her face): mishty hua kya he? Y do u luk so stressed? Aur tumhare ankho me ye asu kyu? Jawab do Geet?
She was still in her thots...about her family...the care the love they showered upon her...but today...endless tears poured down her eyes😭 😭 😭...
Maan(shook her): Geet tum kuch bolti kyu nhe? Hua kya he? Geet meri taraf dekho...

Thats when she lukd at him.His eyes...his sharp almond brown eyes...met with hers.She felt a strange energy passing through her body when she lukd at him.Wat was she cryin for? Wat was she lacking when she had all her world in those eyes...His eyes had all that she had been craving for...the care of a mother,the warmth of a father,the protectiveness of a brother,the compassion of a friend and above all the love of a true lover...Wat else could she ask for...Babaji has given her everything...he has given her Maan.
She wished she could just drown in those deep eyes...which would shield her from the whole world.She wanted to feel that...feel him...their togetherness.She hugged him tightly.


Geet: Maan mujhe kabhi akela mat chodna...plz mujhe chodke kahi mat jana.😭

Maan was surprised.How could she even think that he would leave her when he himself cant stay away from her even for a second.He was ready to fight with his death if it dared to separate them.
Maan:nhe Geet me hamesha tumhare sath rahunga.

She was feeling better now but her body was becoming too weak to withstand all these stress.She was about to faint when he took her in his arms.He carefully placed her in the car and drove back to mansion.He was totally confused by her distressed state.But then he thot may be she is missing her family.Watever it was he didnt want to ask anything that will give her pain.All he knew was that she is in pain and he should be there to sooth her.

Maan took her from the car to the outhouse.He was carrying her in his arms.He made her lay on the bed carefully.He took her jewels away and kissed her forehead.


Maan:u need rest Geet.I vl come later.

He was about to leave when she held his hand.She didnt say anything but her eyes were pleading him to stay.He saw that and how could he deny those innocent eyes.He sat next to her on the bed.She raised her head and rested it on his chest.He hugged her lovingly.It was makin her more demanding.She wanted to melt in him. She slowly kissed him on his chest moving upward and simultaneously unbuttoning him...Maan groaned & his hands were caressing her gently. He wasnt sure whether she is physically strong enough to bear his passion but the longing in her eyes told him that all she needed now was him and only him.He laid on the bed and soon she was all over him.He watched her lovingly as she undressed him.



For her,even a small gesture of him felt so soothing.Let it be the way he was lukin at her or the slightest brushin of fingers as he undid her clothes...the passion in her grew more and more as she found solace in him.Her lips travelled all over him from head to toe.His body jolted as her lips touched his...😳

This was a new feelin for him.They have made love several times but it was always him going wild and she would just go on with his passion.But today it was her.She is the one in command and guiding.He was more than happy to surrender himself to her will...as it was generating some new feelings in him and he was gettin excited like never before.As he couldnt take her on top of him anymore he pinned her on the bed and got on top of her yet again filling her with his love and washing away all her pain...😳

After reliving their passionate moment again and again as he laid on her panting and sweating,
Maan(in his ever seductive tone):Geet..umm..(panting and getting himself lost in her loose hair)why is it so... special today?



Geet:may be this is the last time!
He immdiately raised his head and lukd at her frowning.He got off her and laid beside her.He made her turn to face him.She covers herself with the spread.
Maan: Geet tumne aise kyu kaha?
She saw a pain and anger in his eyes.She knew she would never tell him.
Geet:nhe wo bas mene aise hi..
Maan: Geet akhir baat kya he? Tum ghar se bahar kyu ja rhe thi? Aur tumhe aise kyu lagta he ki aj ke baad hum sath me nhe honge?
Geet: nhe Maan aisa kuch nhe he. Me to bas apne ap se lad rhe the!



Maan: kuch kaise nhe he Geet? Jabki tumhare ankhen saaf saaf kehti he ki koi to baat he.Aur ye me pata lagake rahunga..ha!
Geet: Maan ap ye kya bol rhe he?(pretending to be happy) aur waise bhi abhi phero ka waqt ho gaya hoga.Apko ab chalna chahiye Maan.

Maan was frustrated.He knew she had some pain but y is she refusing to open up? He knew there was no way to convince.She is so stubborn.He didnt say a word and got ready.
Maan(in a firm tone):tum nhe aoge?
Geet:umm...i'm tired aur chakkar bhi a rhe he.
Maan:ok to me bhi nhe ja rha.
Geet: Maan,she is ur sister!
Maan:aur tum?
Geet: Maan ap jao. Dnt worry i vl b fine.I vl cal u ok.
Maan still angry at her😔. He turns to leave but comes back to her.
Maan(cups her face): Geet ek baat yad rakhna agar Maan ne apni mishty ko kho diya to wo ek pal bhi nhe ji payega... ha Geet.
Sayin this he left her.Geet closed her eyes in pain.She knew she cant leave him ever.She was ready to die for him.But her self-respect was even above that.
Geet(self-talk): But i vl even give up my self respect for my Maan.I cant leave him like this.😭

Maan entered the mansion.He wasnt interested in attending the ceremony.
Dadi: Maan ap kaha the itne der?
Maan:kuch nhe dadi wo ek zaruri kam tha.
Dadi:ok beta.Shukar he atleast ap ab to aye.
With that dadi went to the mandap.

Maan(self-thot):kis se puchu? Kaise pata karu aj Geet ke sath akhir hua kya he?
Thats when Nakul called him for havin food.
Maan: Nakul Geet ka khana outhouse bhijva dena.
Nakul:lekin sir Geet madam to ghar chodke chali gayi na?
Maan:kya??😲 (he was shocked to the core) Geet ghar chodke chali gayi? Kisne kaha? Aur wo kyu jayegi? Nakul sach batao. Kisi ne Geet ko kuch kaha kya? Akhir baat kya he?
Nakul:wo sir aj...wo dining hall me wo..Geet madam..

Nakul lukd down.He couldnt say anything more...
Maan(shouted): Nakul batao!😔
Nakul: sorry sir wo badi mem sab ne mana kiya he apko batane se.

Nakul left.

Maan was even more worried.Till then he had thot she might be missing her family but this was something else.And why would dadima hide it from him? His mind was revolving with several questions.All he could make out was watever hapnd is not good & had hurted Geet badly.He need to find out who was responsible for all these.

Annie came to Maan for her bidai.She hugged him and whispered to him, "Bhai chahe koi kuch bhi kahe ap Geet bhabhi ko jante ho na? Unhe akela mat chodiye bhai.Apko,is ghar ko aur hum sabko unki zarurat he bhai.Unhe wapas laoge na bhai?😭
Maan:par Geet to mere pas hi he.
Annie(excited):Sach bhai? 😊Bhabi wapas a gayi?
Maan: wapas a gayi?Par Geet gayi kab?😔 Annie akhir baat kya he?
Annie:wo bhai aj jab ap bahar gaye the tab...
Just then Mrs.Rathode intervened.
Mrs.Rathode: Annie beta apke bhai se baki bate ap kal reception me kar lena.(to Maan)bura mat manna beta.wo mohrat nikal rha he.Aur hume apne beti ko dhoom dham se ghar bhi to le jana he.
Maan:samajta hu Auntyji. Chalo Annie.

Annie left lukin painfully at Maan.By the time all the guests left it was 4am.Maan couldnt sleep.He went to the gym and started doin tai chi.
(angry Maan bgm...)


Maan(self-thot):Jo dard mene Geet ke ankho me deki uski wajah kya ho sakti he? Aur agar kisi ne jaan puchkar meri mishty ka dil dukhaya he to me uski ye haal kar dunga ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhega!
Arghhh!!!
He roared breaking a huge ice bar!😔😔 ( šŸ˜ )
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It was 5 in the evening.Guests started arriving as the reception party was announced to start at 6.Sameera & Sharma have arrived as early as possible as they have pursuaded dadima to announce Maan's marriage during the party.The media had already flooded into the mansion as it was one of the rarest occasion when they were allowed in the mansion.
Maan was monitoring the security system with Adi just to make sure that everything was ok.It was then a thot struck to him.
Maan: Adi, bring me the CCTV footage of dining hall.
Adi:s..sir aj ka?
Maan:nhe yesterday afternoon.
Adi:ok s..sir.

Adi brought the cd to Maan's room.He switched on the TV and was shocked.The love of his life was being ruthlessly insulted in his own house! She who owned him...his queen...his love...his mishty...whom he MAAN SINGH KHURANA dared not to hurt even with a word...was being talked so low😔...and was accused of cheap things by people who didnt even have the right to stand in front of her😔 😔 😔.And his own dadi was supporting them...
His eyes were red with anger.He clenched his fist.He gritted his teeth in anger.He roared in anger, Aaargh! & smashed the TV! 😔
He stormed to the outhouse.Geet was sitting on the bed wearing a simple white salwar suit.His heart skipped a beat when he saw his angel.But he closed his eyes when he remembered the pain she had been through.
He held her wrist.
Maan: Geet chalo mere sath!
Geet:kaha?
Maan: waha jaha tumhe hona chahiye Khurana Mansion.
Geet:par Maan..me kaise waha? Dadima ko acha nhe lagega..aur waise...
Maan: Chup bilkul chup!
Geet:par Maan..
Maan: tumne suna nhe mene kya kaha?Chalo mere sath.



She couldnt disobey his stern,masculine voice. She simply followed him as he was almost dragging her by holding her wrist.

The party hall was packed and Sharma was about to announce his daughter's marriage.
At that time the angry Maan entered the mansion roaring like a lion,"Sharmaaa.."😔 😔
Dadi:Maan ye kya tamasha he?

He looked at her angrily...😔



Maan:dadima BAS ek aur shabd nhe warna me bhul jaunga ki humara rishta kya he!
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HOPE U LIKE THIS PART. PLZZ.. PLZZ.. PLZZ.. do comment.I'm eagerly waiting for it.

Plzzz dont kill me...already i made u wait so long for Maan's reaction and couldnt show it this time.But as u can see this part was unavoidable.Meanwhile i saw 29th june 2011 episode after writing this...Wow after a long time i felt the excitement seeing angry MAAN...and the mysterious enemy... šŸ˜ ENJOY GHSP MAANEETIANS but plzzz dont forget to comment on my FF...😊 I can see that the number of people in the view list are far more than those who comment and LIKE it.Plzzz give me your response they are very valuable for me...


PRECAP: Geet missing!😲
Maan shattered! 😭


Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd...
lov it...
lov maan angry mode...
thanx 4 pm
precap izz scary...i dnt want seperation...aww
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good that Maan used his brains n got to knw wat hapened with Geet
Geet was in so much pain
Good that Maan found Geet before she went missing
But precap says she will go missing agn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved part 29 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
maan know what happen to geet.
precap is scary.
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Posted: 14 years ago
simply awesome update...
loved it to the core ...
the precap is scary...
hope everything ends well

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update... scary precap...

Thnx for the comment 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!

Loved how Geet felt that Maan is everything for her ...

Good that Maan found out just in time!

But Geet missing?😲 Again a sad update next!

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