khanak ka armaan UPDATED p4, pg11 written by yumna

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Glad you liked it veenz if your good your cameo may get extended ;) and you don't have to read it all x

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-Veena-

@-Veena-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: rafia 24
Glad you liked it veenz if your good your cameo may get extended ;) and you don't have to read it all x

Oyyyee i want to keep reading.. can you like give Armaan and Veena footage..

*runs*🤣🤣.. kidding!!!

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

It awesome... all the parts are amazing.👏

Possesive,romantic.courageous,jealous,loving.spontaneous( as always),hot ... a perfect husband😍

khanak beautiful,simple,honest,loving,faithful,her smile & eyes😍

the most adorable couple

u've penned so beautifully that all their qualities reflect.

Luved all the parts.

plz keep writing... continue soon.

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

LMAO yumna it was awesome!🤗 OMG it was hilarious! Doctor Armaan is so cool and bechari Doctor Veena :( haha@ 4 inch stilletos lmao! SO veena!! haha

@Veena: This is a Shanak FF okay! No footage for Doctor Veena hehe and did you read the first 3 parts?

Yumna you've done a brilliant job! Brilliant!!🤗🤗

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Haila...Pg11 walla was HIGHLARIOUS...esp the HOUSE reference..I guess the rest was to keep Veena happy or woheva..hmph!!

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: -Veena-

Omg.. omgg.. omgg.. omggg

I am in it.. sooo close to Dr Armaaannn *diesss*.. Like really *diesss*

My dream come true.. I will make a copy of this and give it to bhagwanji for putting my next janam with Armaan together.. *sigh sigh sigh* *dies*

Oyyee btw.. do I have to read all the updates to get to this yaaa.. can I read only me and Armaan! ROLFINGGGROFLINGG ROFLING..

Kiddinggg!!!

Gosh woman

Learn to read in between the lines!

*rolls eyes*

Destroyed the whole point of the darn write-up!

When is your birthday?I will write you a novel with you and Armaan as hero heroine🤢

And make you sing and dance around trees

And make goo goo eyes at each other

And have rain dances

And whatever else you want!

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: saaaz
Haila...Pg11 walla was HIGHLARIOUS...esp the HOUSE reference..I guess the rest was to keep Veena happy or woheva..hmph!!

Thank you!

At least someone was able to see beyond the fact that Veena and Armaan was in the same line.

Oh and got the House reference! I had been wondering whether I should have made that insult for Armaan a bit more obvious.

@Bee

Thanks jee!

Now can you or Rafia write the next part and finish it??😆

Edited by -SYS- - 14 years ago