khanak ka armaan UPDATED p4, pg11 written by yumna

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok this is going to be a faltu topic mainly aimed at dearest Veena and
so that I could interact with you beautiful ladies again after my lond
studying hiatus which i will regretably have to retreat back into mid
June lol.

Ok so back to the topic at hand so I know it is finally friday and today
we will finally see which idea the creative had selected and having
read through your awesome suggestions for the episode/ maha epi I
thought of the following idea.

Khanak is out shopping for some ghar ka samaan e.g sabsi's and shaan is supposed to pick her up from the market when she was done. she rang him 15mins ago informing him she was done he had yet to show up. whilst perusing the various stalls she comes across a child who was obviously homeless from his attire, he was being beaten by a large rugged man for stealing an apple, khanak could not bear to see the innocent child being beaten in that manner, poor boy was only hungry it was not his fault he was destitute and had to resort to stealing in order to survive in this cruel world. so she decides to step in and try to help the child

Khanak: ' what is the matter, why are you beating this poor child'

vendor grunts back' its none of your buisness lady a street rat like him deserves all the beats he can get especially for stealing from my stall'

khanak gets annoyed at the mans rude response and stands in front of the boy just as the vendor was about to slap him across the face.
khanak ' what did he steal, i will pay on his behalf just leave him alone.

the vendor gets even more frustrated with khanak and barks back
' move out the way lady like i said before this is between me and the boy, no body steals from Ghabbar singh' 😆 (sorry couldnt resist)
he then pushes her out of the way when she suddenly collides into a man who prevents her from falling down. as she grabs hold of his jacket she makes an attempt to look up at his face to say thank you, but she gets lost in the strangers great big green/ brown eyes (veenz im not sure what colour his eyes are as im sure he wears contacts in the show lol) he then puts his hands on both her arms making sure she is ok and gets a chance to stand up straight before he walks over to the vendor

armaan ' apologise'
vendor' you must be kidding and that too to a woman over a peasant' - he chuckles at his own response
this makes both khanak and aramaan angry
armaan whilst clenching his fist ' say sorry or suffer the consequence'
the vendo looks a little distressed ' why what is she to you'
armaan 'she doesnt have to be anything to me for me to stick up for her, a woman should always be respected especially when they are the ones who give life -how would you like it if someone misbehaved with your mother or sister? all this lady did was try and help this unfortunate boy who only stole from you for sustenance its not like he was stealing jewelery that he could later on sell he clearly stole out of sheer hunger'

a small crowd starts to build up around the scene.khanak starts to tear up at this act of humility and thinks wow there are still people out there who look out for each other for the sake of insaniat. the vendor starts to reflect and feels uncomfortable but being the stubborn man that he is refuses to apologise.

this was the last straw for armaan who then in a swift move fly kicks the man😆 (haha had to go bollywood style lol) sending the man flying back. he then walks over and grabs the man and drags him over to where khanak is who is now hugging the little boy and says 'apologise or theres more from where that came from'

vendor grudgingly and through gritted teeth apologises and then the crowd clap and disperse. khanak the child and armaan walk away as they do so
khanak ' thank you you really didnt have to step in like that i could have managed but neverless i really appreciate the way you stood up for me and this masaum child (whilst saying this she holds on to the boys hand'

armaan' there is no need to say thank you i was only doing what i felt was right, i would have done that for any woman in that situation'
khanak ' what is your name, aap karte kya?'
armaan' my name is Dr Armaan malik - the dr gives away my profession'
they both share a small laugh.
armaan' it was nice meeting you miss...
khanak ' khanak, khanak khandelwal'
armaan' ok miss khanak i need to run off to my clinic i will drop the child off at the hospital so that they can tend to his wounds
khanak ' ok thank you once again'
armaan' no problem heres my card if you ever need any other assistant ( not knowing khanak was married and thinking she is very pretty so why not try lol)
just as he and the small child walk away, shaan walks in and passes them oblivious to all of which has just occured
khanak looks at the card- DrArmaan Malik
Senior Cardiologist Consultant
Khanak ' wow Dr malik dil ka dr' and smiles looking down at the card
shaan ' kaun?'


haha hope nyou guys liked it im too tired to write in a jealous shaan response so heres my task to anyone who would like to take part, from this point on decide how shaan will react after hearing about the incidence and to khanak meeting him again

have fun writing looking forward to reading them, and veenz you especially have to write one. people gush or slate our dil ka dr as much as you want veenz wont be able to do anything as she is not going to be around lol😆

part 2 written by the amazing beeni and 3 shaan's jealousy pg 5 and 9


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok.. so the topic heading got me😳😆.. Nice one for OS... Way to get my attention!!!!

I have not read anything.. will do so soon.. everyone is outside waiting in the car for me.. LMAOO!!!

Lovezzz Raf!! <3~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Rafia and WB!!!!

I would love to see a J Shan so possessive of Khanak and all.Can't wait to read what the talented writers here have to say abt this.

BTW,u all should see the movie trailer of mere yaar ki shaadi hain by Imane.It has KT,YM and KSG!Can't get any hotter I guess!two hot guys for a simple girl lol.

Edited by SPN_JD_Addicted - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rafsss 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 super loveeed it... I seriously want the creatives too incorporate this idea... it will be awesome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LMFAO


I am not liking Armaan...period!!!!!!

and as for story...ummm i suck so i won't be writing it! lmao
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Eee .. .
Veenator is So Gonnnaa Go Overboard !!!!!
Rafffy .. Loveeed it . ..Great Ideaa ...
Creatives ...Yeh dekhoo ... and Kuch karooo .. LOL !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lmao veenz I knew the tittle would get your attention thank smitha and bona I could have written it better without sooo many mistakes but was rushed I wasn't planning on writing an OS it just turned into one. Love you girls
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks shalini and Rooj and all girls even if it's an idea write and if I have time I will try an expand on it ok need to go to the bank lol-ciao and muah
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bye Rainy!!!

have fun!!!

ill think and reflect upon it! lmao
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome Rafia!! LOVED it!!! i can give the next part a try!! :D but not now after i go home i have to leave now :( but if anyone else does it good enough i will continue from there!

Haha rafia yyour timing could not have been more perfect!! Veena SAWWW it! LMAO! haha

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