Ajeeb rishthey-(hu-ju-KSBKBT)Chap-5 pg 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
plzzz anju...don tk me otherwise... m not interfaring ...but these questions juss came to my mind... 😕


n if there any suspense...thenits ok... 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
but really ha...I musttt say...HATTSSS OFFF...u FF waale...

I cant even imagine of writing a story...

agar story soch v lu...to Baapree...!!!
itna sajake kaun likhega... (m veryyy lazy 😛 ) ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
@ankita- well abt saahil nt hating laksh n nakul there's suspense...it will b unfolded soon!!!
n ya trupti doesnt have any child...nw dont ask me y...i'l mention abt it in my later updates..ok??? have patience...n ya hu-ju is Hussain n Juhi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
like the episode waiting for next nd i think he is sumeet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ankita2804

Anju , m in lil doubt...



**who's Laksh n Nakul's mother... if its Ganga...then aint Sahil hates both of them too...??? if he don hate both of them...then why...??? if he hates them...then is it their uncles who r helping them...(as in business/job)

**If Laksh n Nakul r nt Ganga's sons...then why r they interested so much abt her...??

**Wat about Trupti's child...does she hav any...???



Isse kehete hai tez nazar... CID dekh dekh kar tu bhi ekdum unki tarah bolne lagi... Choti si choti baat tere nazar mein aa hi gayi bacchu... 😉😉
Waah waah! Maan gaye madam ji aap ko... 😆😆
Haha! Just kidding.. 😛 Dont mind! 😃
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

frnd...😛

4 comment sooo late......
ur update was
, , , ..😉😃..
u done a
..👏👏👏👏..
...👍🏼
i really ...,...
..😃😳.
4 PM me...
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lots of 4 u.🤗..
jaldi jaldi update karooo
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
@tama-- thnk a lot ofr u awesum comments.. well im a bit busy wid ma examz...will update soon :) :)
Posted: 14 years ago
#48
pls update soon after you exams.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

hiii buddies...after a short gap...im backkk

here's Chapter 3 of our FF

Chapter -3

Namratha goes to her room'.shuts the door'n start crying lyk anything''

After a while..she takes a bag from the cupboard n take a photo of saahil n says

Nam- dad im sorry'mein jaanthi hoon ki meine galat bola'lekin aapke pyaar pane ke liye aur maa ko iss ghar mein wapas lane ke liye mere paas koi aur raastha nahi hain'..n she cries'

Meanwhile saahil goes to his room'..he remembers namratha's words'right then

Trupti- sahil tum theek toh ho?

Saahil- haan'''.haan mein theek hoon..

Trupti- jabse namratha is ghar mein aayi hai'tab se tum'

Sahil cuts the convo

Sahil- trupti pls mein iske bare baat nahi karna chaahtha'.

Trupti 'par sahil aj subah se tum kaafi pareshaan lag raha hai'isliye meine poocha

Sahil- mein kyun pareshaan lagega'woh meri beti hai'

Trupti- par tumne usse kabhi apni beti maana nahi hai'.

Sahil- trupti bas'.waise bhi mujhe neendh aa raha hai'.good night'

Trupti- good night'

(She says in mind)- namratha mere raasthe mein ek kaanta hai'usko kaante hataana hi hoga 😡😡😡

Next Morning'.

Karan-nandini's room

Karan- nandini''..mera coat kahan hai'

Nandini- arrey chillao mat'.tumhari wardrobe mein hai'

Karan- maalum hai'

Nandini- agar tumhe maalum tha'toh mujhe bulaya kyun'

Karan(holds nandini's hand..n brings her close to him😉)- bas aise hi'.

Both of them share an eye-lock'..

Nandini- karan..chodo naa'kyun bacho jaise harkat kar rahe ho?

Karan- kitni dino ke baad yeh pal mil raha haina'toh chodne ki mann nahi kar raha hai'.

Nandini- acha??? Mere paas na ek dawaai hai'.yeh bimaari jaldi theek ho jaayega..

Karan- kaunsi dawaai???

Nandini- yeh lo'(n she tickles him😆)''..

Karan- nandini bas bas 'plz yaar'.

Nandini- hmm..kaisa laga'.

Karan- kaafi acha tha'.

They both laugh'.

Karan- acha nandini'.aaj hamare business partner Mr.Malhotra ke dono bte aa rahe hai'.toh mein,gautum aur papa un dono ko pick up karne..airport jaa rahe hai..

Nandini- ok'..hmm..kya who dono yaha rahenge???

Karan- haan'.ek kamra khaali pada haina'.

Nandini- theek hai''mein uss kamre ki saaf safaai karti hoon'

In the kitchen'.

Damini- maa'woh dono ladke hamare office mein kam karne aaya hai kya??

Tulsi-hmm'...woh dono humare gujrat ke office mein kaam kar rahe the'kuch kam ke silsiley mein hi who dono yaha aaya hain

Right then namratha n bhoomi enters'

Namratha-kiske bare mein baat kar rahi hai???

Tulsi- woh beta humari business partners ki bare mein baat kar rahi thi'.

Namratha- ohh'

Damini was standing near the gas stove'Accidently her pallu(of saree) was near the flame'it catches fire..,'bhoomi sees it'

Bhoomi(screams)- chaachi''

Tulsi n namratha tries to put down the fire'after a few minutes'they succeed in extinguishing d fire..

Damini seems scared'.

Tulsi- damini daro mat'.sab theek hai'kuch nahi hua hai'.

While they were extinguishing the fire'they didn't hear the door bell ringing'

Now namratha hears it'n she runs to open the door'..

As she opens the door..a guy fall on to her'..she at once hold the handle of d door n screams'..

The guy is staring at her'..seeing this she gets angry n sayz- dekh nahi sakthe kya???

The guy comes back to his senses'..

Namratha- mein tumse pooch raha hoon'..aise hi kisike ke ghar mein guss jaat hai kya??

Guy- oh helow'.meine bohot baar bell bajaya tha'koi aa nahi raha tha..toh meine socha..ki kuch gadbad hai'.toh meine darwaaza thodne ki koshish ki'datz all

Namratha- by the way tum ho kaun???

Right then mihir comes n sayz-

Mihir- raj!! Iska naam RAJ MALHOTRA hai'

Raj- hii (saying this he extends his hand for a shakehand)

Namratha- hi'..n they shake hands'

Right then karan,gautum n another guy enters'

Karan introduces dat guy as Viren..raj's bro'

Gautum notices damini'

Gautum- damini'tum theek toh haina'

Namratha- ah..chaachu,chaachi ke pallu mein aag laga tha'..magar kuch hua nahi'sab theek hai'isi wajah (looks to raj) h um darwaza kholne mein late ho gayi thi

Mihir- thakur jii laak laak shukar hai'''

Tulsi- raj,viren'aap dono ke liye'kamra thayyar karke rakha hai'.jaake fresh ho jao'..

They both take their luggage n goes to their room

Precap- Namratha sees Raj talking rudely to a servant'she gets angry n scolds him

Edited by awesumsonia - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
#50
excelent update.pleas continue soon.thanks for pm.

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