Ajeeb rishthey-(hu-ju-KSBKBT)Chap-5 pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Awsome start !!!!!!! Loved to see you started with Mihir ... my fav fav !!!! All the bestest for the rest !!!! I loved it 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
wooo sonia great ff yar
i loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

thnk u all for liking my FF..will update it soon :) :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
nice starting..😊
waiting for more😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice story but dont like the Viranis with Juhi apni Juhi to Wadhwa family k sath achi lagti hai . waiting for nxt part .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely start...loved it...

waiting 4 next...

thnx 4 pm..

payal_
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@maheen,payel - thnx a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnk u friends for ur comments...here's

CHAPTER -2

Namratha's room:

Architha knocks the door n ask- kya hum aa sakthe hain???

Nams- hmm…nahi……

Architha n bhoomi shocked

Namratha smiles n says- aao!!!

They all sit …..

Bhoomi- chal bol…..teri college lyf kaisi thi???

Nams- achi thi…

Bhoomi- kisise pyaar karthi thi kya???

Nams- pyaar??? Kabhi nahi….mom-dad ka pyaar theek tharah se mili nahi na..isliye mujhe pyaar ka matlab nahi pata…..

Right then Baa comes in

Nams- baa aap itni saari seedhiyan chadke aayi????(meanwhile she takes baa's ashirwaad too)

Baa- namratha beta…mein bhi tum logon ki taraha jawaan hoon

All 3 sis says- ACHA???? N they laugh

Baa- acha beta,mein yahan tumhari kamre mein yeh thakur ji ki murthi rakhthi hoon..jab bhi dil mein koi sankat hoti haina…toh thakur ji ko bol dena…woh tumhe zaroor madat karega…..

Nams- theek hai baa…

Right then nandini comes n says- agar aap logon ki baat cheet khatam hogayi toh…plz neeche aa jao..khaana thayyar hain….

They all go down…...on the way…..nandini closes namratha's eyes with her hand…

Namratah- array yeh kya kar rahi hai….

Nandini- ek min w8 karo na..tumhe sab kuch pata chal jaayegi…

They reach the dining table

Nandini removes her hand….

Namratha….see her fav dishes in the dining table n is smiling lyk anything(she looks too cute when she smiles…just lyk dis-)

Nam- aap log mere liye yeh sab banayi???

Tulsi- haan….humein laga ki shaayad tumhe yeh sab pasand aayegi???? Agar tumhe pasand nahi aayi..toh hum yeh vapas le jaathe hain..saying this she takes the bowls…

But then namratha says- arreey nahi nahi…meine kab kaha ki mujhe pasand nahi aayi??mein sab khaaloongi…

All laugh…..n they all have their food…

Later in the evening,,, namratha is arranging all her stuffs in her room….just then she feels something on her shoulders…she turns her head towards the left…she sees a snake on her shoulder n she screams out badly….Eklavya(who was standing behind her) started laughing..

Eklavya- namratha,tu plastic kii saap se bhi darne lagi kya….

Nam- bhaiyya……..

Eklavaya runs from there…namratha takes a broom(to beat him) n runs behind him….they reach downstairs n then namratha is still running behind him…(afsos..she coudnt get him).whiel she's chasing .namratha reaches in front of saahil…seeing her saahil moves away…namratha too didn't bother abt him…she catches hold of eklavya's collar n give him a small slap(nt painful)..n then they all smile….

Nakul- agar tum dono ka khel khatham ho gaya toh kya hum baat kar sakte hain???

Nam- bhaiyya aap log fresh ho ke aao. Uske baad hum baat karenge….

Laksh- theek hai…

Later laksh n nakul enter nam's room

Nam- aap log itni jaldi fresh ho gaya???...hmmm….waise eklavya bhaiyya kaha hain?

Laksh- who apni ipod dhoond raha hai…kam se kam 2 ghanta toh zarror lagega usse apni i-pod dhoond nikaalne mein…

Nakul- acha who sab chodo namratha kya tujhe pata hai ki maa Mumbai mein hai…

Nam- haan bhaiyya…mujhe pata hai ki maa iss sheher mein hi hai..aur kis company mein kam karte hai…

Laksh- tujhe kaise pata???

Nam-meri ek dost ki dad ke company mein hi mom kam kar rahi hai…..3 mahine pehle jab meri dost ke saath mein unki dad se milne office gayi thi..tab mein maa ko waha dekhi thi….par unse meri mulaakaat nahi ho payi….

Laksh- umm….dad se baat hui???

Nam- nahi bhaiyya…….aakhir dad mujhse baat kyun nahi karna chaahthi?

Nakul- shaayad tujhe dekhkar unhe maa ki yaad aata hai…

Nam- jo bhi hain bhaiiya…agar dad mujhse nafrath karta hain…toh mein bhi unse nafrath karoongi…dikha dungi unhe ki unhone apni beti ko kitna dukh pahunchaaya hai…

Laksh- tu kya karne waali hai???

Nam- pata nahi……jab dad se miloongi,tab uske bare mein sochungi

Nakul- hmmm….mujhe na bohot bhook lag raha hain…toh kya hum neeche jaake dinner karte hain?

Laksh n nam- theek hai chlathe hai….

All the viranis are having their dinner together (sahil n trupti are also wid them)

Later( by 10pm) namratha comes out of her room…she sees sahil walking towards his room…they come face to face.

Namratha- dad mujhe aapse baat karni hai…

Sahil- mien kuch sun na nahi chaahtha

Nam- dad sun na padega…

Main jaan na chaahthi hoon ki aap mujhe avoid kyun kar raha hai??? Aakhir meine kiya kya hai….kya mein aapki beti nahi hoon….

Saahil- angrily says- bas namratha…

Nam- with a scorning smile- kam se kam meine aapke moo se apni naam toh sun liya…

Aur ek baat aap kaan kholkar sun lijiye…warning jaisa kuch hai-------------------------main aapko ehsaas dhilaake hi rahugi ki aap apne beti ko kitna dukh pahunchaaya….uss waqt aap bohot pachthaaoge…

Saying this nams leaves….sahil stood there shocked n confused

Precap- Somebody rings the doorbell….namratha opens the door…As soon as she opened the door ,a guy fell on to her(guess who😉)…namratha screams n then held her hand on to the door

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: awesumsonia

@maheen,payal - thnx a lot


u r welcome...😊

payal_


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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wow...great work...👏

loved it...

wondering wht ll be the next...

thnx 4 pm...

payal_
Edited by pearl10 - 14 years ago

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