Ajeeb rishthey-(hu-ju-KSBKBT)Chap-5 pg 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
tama- thnk u for ur comments
thnx maheen n otherz ...
even im busy wid my czn's shaadi preprationz...will update ven i get tym
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
hi friends im back wid my update!!!!!
so here's CHAPTER -4

Gautam-Damini's room

Gautam- damini kya hua???dar ne ki koi baat nahi hai

Damini- gautum'..12 saal pehle ki baat yaad aa gayi thi'..

Gautum- damini''jo hua so hua''

Damini- nahi gautum'.uss haadse ki wajah se hi'ganga ko iss ghar se jaana pada'..aur aaj namratha bhi ghar mein hai'

Gautum- damini'..kuch nahi hoga'..

Namratha who was standing near the door was hearing all this'

She thinks- yeh chachi aise kyun bol rahi hai'..mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai'.zaroor kuch baat hai jo sab log mujhse chupa rahi hai'..pata lagna padega

She walks to her room'..she was in deep thoughts...

Damini's words are still in her mind''

Namratha- kisse poochu mein'..aakir kaise pata chalega'

Right then trupti comes

Trupti- kya pata lagne ki soch rahi ho tum?

Namratha- isse aapka matlab?

Trupti- mein tumhari maa hoon

Namratha- ohh really???kab se??? for your kind information meri maa ki naam Ganga virani hai'..trupti virani nahi'.

Trupti- lekin ab who sis ghar mein nahi aur haan ab mein tumhari baap ka patni bhi hoon toh bhalaayi isime hai ki tum mujhein apni maa samajhle

Namratha- my foot!!

Trupti- toh tum aise nahi maanegi'.haan n she holds Namratha's hand tightly'..😡

Namratha- chodo mera haath

Right then raj comes in😊

N says- excuse me!!!

Trupti ses him n leaves namratha's hand n goes out of the room

Namratha(in her mind)- thnk u soo much raj!!

Raj- woh mujhe kapde iron karna tha'par iron box nahi hai'.

Namratha- ji who neeche hai'..mein leke aati hoon'. n she goes downstairs

Namratha goes to Raj's room(she has the iron box in her hand)

As she enters the room'.she stamps on the roller skater n her leg slipz

Namratha screams'

Seeing this raj comes n hold her'.

They both share an eye-lock❤️!! After a minute he leaves her

Raj throws away the roller skater'''

Namratha(says)- iron box

Raj- ohh

Then'..raj n namratha together sayz- Thank you!!!

They both smile😊''.

Raj extends his hand- dost???

Namratha too extends her hand her sayz- sure!!!

Right then Viren comes out from the wash room

Namratha sees this n she takes away her hand'n tells- Raj mein aapse baad mein milthi hoon'..

Saying this she leaves the room

Viren- kya pakh raha hai???😉

Raj- yaar abhi abhi dosti banaayi hai'aur tu hai ki'.

Viren-ki'..kya kya

Raj- bas bas'.hume office jaana hai

Raj n Viren goes downstairs''.

All the Viranis were about to have their breakfast

Tulsi- raj,viren tum dono bhi yaha betho

Raj n viren nod their heads'.

All viranis have their breakfast

Mihir- raj,viren aap dono aaj rest karo'kal se office aa jaana

Viren- par'

Karan- papa theek keh rahe hai'waise bhi tum dono bohot thake hue lag rahe ho

Raj- theek hai uncle''

In namratha's room

Namratha still thinking damini's words''.

She walks towards the window'.she sees Raj talking to a servant'.

Namratah- yeh Raj raghu se kya baat kar rahe hai'..

Jaake dekhthi hoon

Namratha goes down

Raj(to the servant)- tum logon ko toh mein achi tarah se jaanthi hoon'pehle yeh sab dekh lete hai phir chori karte hai

Namratha- raj'kya hua???

Raj- namratah yeh chor hai

Namratah- raj'theek se baat karo'

Raj- namratha,Yeh meri i-pad churane ke koshish kar raha tha.

Namratha- raghu tum jao'.

Raj- par

Namratha- raj,raghu koi chor vor nahi hai'.usne yeh ipad shayad pehli baar dekh raha hoga'toh who usko ghor se dekha hoga

Aur haan'.tum aise kisiko underestimate kabhi mat karna'yeh ameer-garib ka difference kabhi mat leke aana''always think positive!!!

Raj-hmmm'''namratha'.sorry!!! woh actually'(namratha cuts the convo)

Namratha- sorry mujhe nahi'..usse jaakar kaho

Raj- hmm.,'usse bura laga hoga na'.

Namratha- aur nahi toh kya''

Raj- thnk u namratha

Namratha- u're welcome'ab jao toh sahi

Raj smiles n he leaves

Precap- Raj is about to enter his car'.Right then Namratha comes n ask whether he could drop her in a place

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Edited by awesumsonia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Hey Sonudii..🤗

Awesome update as usual..👏
Was feeling to kill Trupti when she was hurting Namratha..😡
But glad that Raj came..😃
Both are friends now..Yiippee..🥳
Loved all RN moments.. Cutest scenes..❤️
I liked how Namratha made Raj understand and he felt guilty..😳

Waiting for their love story to start..😛
Continue soon..😊

-Bidz❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
once again verrry nice update dear...
loved it...
awesome👍🏼...
conti sooon...
Posted: 14 years ago
#65
gr8 work.keep it up.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

gr8 work.keep it up.thanks for pm 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
hello...🤗

once again such a great updtae...!!

loved it..!!

thnx for pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
luved it aisa lg raha tha perh ker jaise kumkum sumeet bol rahe ho excellent waiting for next part
Edited by maheen55 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Isse kehete hai tez nazar... CID dekh dekh kar tu bhi ekdum unki tarah bolne lagi... Choti si choti baat tere nazar mein aa hi gayi bacchu... 😉😉

Waah waah! Maan gaye madam ji aap ko... 😆😆
Haha! Just kidding.. 😛 Dont mind! 😃


Hahahaha 😆 Thannkkk u Bidz ji ... 😛 😉

n Also thanxx to CID ... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: ankita2804


Hahahaha 😆 Thannkkk u Bidz ji ... 😛 😉

n Also thanxx to CID ... 😆


Hum ne toh sirf aap ki tareef ki hain...sacchi waali tareef!!😆
The pleasure is mine ji!!😉

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