Ajeeb rishthey-(hu-ju-KSBKBT)Chap-5 pg 11 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!! UPDATE PLZ!!

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Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bidzy will updtae this week...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here's chap 5 of my FF
WELL IM UPDATING THIS AFTER A VERY LONG TYM...HOPE U ALL WILL LYK IT...
n ya pls bear wid me...if there are sum mistakes😊..If u guys have lost teh touch abt the story...then pls chk the older updates too...
CHAPTER
Namratha's still thinking abt damini's words

Nams(in her mind)- damini chachi kya bataa rahi thi??? Yeh aag aur mujhse kya lena dena hain??????

Mujhe pata lagana hi padega

Right then she gets a text msg frm her friend reena

She reads it'..

Nam- wow!!!!iska matlab hain ki Aaj mein mom se mil sakthi hoon'coool'.

N she goes to change her dress'

After a while ..she comes down'.

Tulsi- namratha kaha jaa rahe ho???

Nam-Woh daadi mein'.(right then she sees sahil)

Ah'.daadi mein'woh 'shopping ke liye andheri jaa rahi thi'..2-3 ghante mein wapas aa jaungi

Tulsi- theek hain beta jao'.

Namratha smiles

Namratha goes out'.raj stops on d way

Raj- kaha jaa rahe ho?

Namratha- andheri

Raj- ohh chalo'mein tumhe drop karti hoon

Namratha makes a weird face.

Raj"(notices it)"- kya hua!!!

Namratha- tum aise baat kar rahe ho jaise ki yeh tumhara apna gaadi hain!

Raj laughs'n says- mihir sir ne kaha ki mein yeh gaadi use kar sakti hoon ok?

Namratha- ok ok'..ab chalo

They reach andheri

Namratha- bas bas yehi ruko

Mein yahaan uthar thi hoon'..

Raj- ok

Namratha- byee

Raj- byeee'..

Raj leaves

Namratha goes into an office

Nam(to the receptionist)- kya mein Ganga madam se mil sakthi hoon.

Receptionist- ji'.aapke paas appointmet hain

Nam- ahh appointment to nahi hain...par aap unse kaho ki reena ki ek dost aayi hain

Receptionist calls ganga '

After a while:

Receptionist- theek hain aap jaa sakthe ho

Namratha is feeling happy n at d same tym tensed n even emotional'..

She opens d door of ganga's cabin'.

ganga- aayiye aayiye'reena ne mujhse kaha tha ki uski ek dost mujhse aaj milne aayegi'

kahiye kya naam hain aapka

(Ganga hasn't seen namratha since years'.as she wasn't in Mumbai n sahil didn't tell ganga about namratha's whereabouts)

Namratha- ji''NAMRATHA'.NAMRATHA SAHIL VIRANI

Ganga is shocked!!!!!!

Ganga- namratha!!!! Meri bachiii

Namratha- maa!!!

N they hugs'both get emotional

Namratha(crying)- maa aap ghar vapas aao na plz

Ganga- nahi namratha mein nahi aa sakthi'..

Namratha- kyun maa'kyun???

Ganga- kyunki''''.

(she stops d convo)

Acha who sab chodo '..tum mumbai kab wapas aayi

Namratha- maa aap meri sawaal ka jawab diya nahi'.

Ganga- woh beta

Suddenly namratha phone rings'..bhoomi's name flashes on d mobile screen

Nam- helow!!!

Bhoomi- namratha tu ne mujhe baataya kyun nahi ki tum shopping ke liye jaa rahe the

Nam- di..woh mein

Bhoomi- acha jo bhi hain '.mein andheri inorbit mall ke paas khadi hoon

Tum kahan ho'

Namratha- ahh di mein apni dost ke saath hoon'.mein 5 minutes mein aati hoon

Bhoomi- theek hain

Namratha- mujhe jaana hain maa'chalthi hoon''

Ganga nods her head n hugs namratha''

Namratha had a wide smile on her face

Namratha(thinking)- kitne saalon ke baad meine mom se baat kiya hain'

Im feeling so happy''.

Par maa ghar wapas kyun nahi aana chaahthi???? Iski wajah kya ho sakthi hain???

Mujhe hi dhoondhna padega

She goes to the mall'bhoomi n namratha both do a hell lot of shopping

Later in the evng

Namratha was thinking something

Raj enters her room

Namratha- raj!! Tum yahan!!!

Raj- kyun!! Yeh no entry area hain kya!!!

Namratha- arrey woh baat nahi'lekin ladki ke kamre mein bina permission ke gussna achi baat nahi hain

Raj- really????? Acha theek hain'.aage se dhyaan rakhega

Namratha- toh batao'yaha kyun aaye ho'kuch kaam tha kya???

Raj- aah nahi'.actually viren nahi haina mere saath

Nam- viren kaha gaya????

Raj- aah unke dost ke ghar

Nam- ohh'tum kyun nahi gaye

Raj- ahh who actually dost matlab fianc

Namratha- ohhh''she smiles

Raj- mein bohot bore ho raha tha'toh socha ki apna nayi dost se mil loo'.

Namratha- ohh'.toh iss liye tum yahan aaye ho

Raj- nahi'.jhaadoo pochne aaya hoon

Namratha- hehehe POOR JOKE

They have a long chat'..they smiles ,they laugh,they quarrel

Bhoomi n architha sees them together'..

Bhoomi(to architha)- arrey waah'inn dono ki setting to ho gayi'.thnk god!!!

Both of them smile

Precap- Raj namratha hug 😳😉😳

HOPE U ALL ENJOYED READING THIS UPDATE..PLEASE DO POST UR VALUABLE COMMENTS HERE...

n ya new readers psl press the like button of 1st post in d 1st page..so tht i may add u to the PM list :)

Edited by awesumsonia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good one sonu... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulousss work👏👏👏
loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wid...😉
4 pm me...😛
me 4 that...😃
ur updates r wid
...😛
me dears...
so much.....
really
&
dear...👍🏼
tons of 4 u dear...
at last wishing u
dear..😊...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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