Maneet SS Woh Pyare Lamhe pt4 updated pg 6

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Hello Guys, this Nilima. this is my First ever SS.just trying to write something. i am not a good writer but will try my best. Hope you guys like it.



Woh pyare Lamhee..

14th February, 2011

It was a most wonderful day for Maan and Geet. They were waiting for this day since they started dating. Here Maan was getting excited to go to Geet home with barat and here Geet was blushing while getting ready becuz all the girls were teasing her.

Suddenly Rajji came running, "Didi...Didi...Barat came"

All girls went to see the Barat along with Geet.

Geet stood on the terrace with all the girls looking at her handsome would-be hubby! (Just for few hours ;))who is sitting on horse and few guys are dancing on front of it. Maan looks at Geet opening his "sehera" and winks, Geet understand what he means and smiles and blushes,

Soon Every Rituals takes place and Maneet Get Married, and soon bidai happens and geet cries a lot with her family, Maan feels sad looking at Geet, when they sit in car Maan takes Geet in his arm and consoles her. Anni and Vicky smiles looking at their love.

Very soon they Arrives at Khurana Mention, Maan's Mother Welcomes them and they take blessing from All the elders and after all the Rasam of ring finding and kumkum hand print and all the most awaiting arrives for Maan, Their Suhagraat!

Maan slowly enters their Room. And looks at Geet intensely. Geet feels Maan's eye on her and feels all shy. Maan stands by the door and keeps looking at Geet. Geet thinks, "yea aise kyu dekha rahe hai? Kuch karate kyu nahi??

Maan understands it and walks forward and sits the bed and puts his hands on Geet's hand which is resting on her knees. She turns all red and understands what is in his mind.

And Maan says, "Geet kya hua? Tumhe yaad hai na maine tumhe kya kaha tha?"and smiles mischievously'

Geet understands and hides her face in her hands, maan moves forward and removes her hand from her face and says, not today geet, aja koi sharm nahi, koi rukavat nahi, aja hame ek hone se koi nahi rok sakata, na tum na yeh duniyawale.

Maan slowly moves forward and kisses her forehead and following by nose, her cheek and finally takes her lips in his. He was waiting for this day since so long. He slowly moves to take all her jewelry off of her. While doing so, he notices that Geet looks tired, so he ask her, "Geet are you all right? Tum bahot thaki hue lag raho ho!"

Geet was tired, but she knows, that Maan was waiting for this moment since very long so she denies it and says, nahi Maan, I'm completely all right. But Maan understands that she is just saying it for him. So he says, Nahi, Geet u are looking very tired, letz go to sleep, we will continue with these, aur tumhe to meri saath puri zindagi gujarniee hai aur tum meri chinta mat karo, mai to sab vasul kar luga with interest don't worry my sweety.

Geet turns all red. And stands to go to change and goes to cupboard and takes out her nightie, (wahi who pink wali Punjabi dress) Maan sees this and says, Geet do u need any help? Geet looks confuse and dosnt understands what he means and says, nahi maan thank u, apne to jewelary nikal din a vo to sabse bada kam kardia, ab to kuch bhi nahi hai

Maan's like "ohh god, iss ladki muje kitane dino se janti hai, phirbhi.. Lekin kaise bhi ho, iski yahi masumyat pe to me marata hu" and goes to look for his own dress. Mean while geet changes and freshen up and comes out looking breath taking to maan, maan also changes and comes to bed and looks at geet with all desires but controls his desire seeing her all wore out.

Geet says, Maan muje pata hai, apko iss din ka intazar tha,I am sorry that bcoz of me, app'.

But maan stops her and says, Geet maine itana itzar kiya to thodi dair aur sahi, usme kya hai, aur mere liya tumse jayda kuch bhi important nahi hai. Geet looks at him and thinks no matter since how long I have known him but he never fails to make fall in love with him more and more.

And then Maan takes geet in his arm and says, Geet officially, from today, ajj se sari raat tumse hogi aur subha tumse hogi. Jis din tumarha chehra nahi dekha vo din din nahi hoga mere liye geet looks at him and says Meri bhi Maan. And Maan says Letz go to sleep geet, kal se hamri zindagi badal jayegi,chalo sau jate hai. And softly kisses her and geet happyily responds him. And they both doses off to sleep.

Precap: Raat abhi Bakhi hai dosto..;) 😉

Hope You Guys like it. Please Press LIKE button and comment please.

Thanks you guys. Especially Madhavi.

you can find a FULL SS here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1720732/maneet-new-ss-woh-pyare-lamhe-complete





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awesome start.
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