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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update...your FF is really light hearted and I love reading it with my morning tea...it puts me in a good mood...
Thanks for the effort and please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome yaar..
i too wanna book tickets for that bua
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls add me to your pm list thanks
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Part Four


The whole family comes out to bid them good buy.

Dadi hugs maaneet, and geet bends to take blessing, but dadi stops her and says, "jiti raho beta, and All the best!"and geet shyes.

Then they move towards mom and dad, and they both hug them. Prerena touches geets cheek and "enjoy beta and maan, be good, meri beti ko jyada tang mat karana" and smiles mischifly looking at geet and winks

Dad also hug them both and says, "geet agar tumhe ye jya pareshan kare to muje ek phone kar dena, dekha phir me kya haal karata hu iska" and maan says , "kya' dad app bhi?" and everybody laughs

Anni and Vicky hugs them and says, "ALL THE BEST, bhaiya and bhabhi"

Maan hits both of them on their head. And finally they move toward bua.

Bua makes faces and geet looks a little scared of her and bends to take blessing from her.

Maan thinks, "it's a time"

And says to geet, " geet , acchi tarah se bua ka ashirvad le lo, kyoki jab tak hum vapas ayege, bua to jaa chuki hogi unke ghar, kyuo, bua?" bua looks surprised and says, "aree nahi nahi beta app log'"

But maan cuts her in middle and says, "nahi bua we understand u also need to go ur home, we understand don't worry"

And to Vicky "Vicky, Mene tumhe tickets di hai bua ki, bua ko achhi tarah airport pe chod ken a huh"

And before bua can say anything, they go to their car.

Everybody understands about maan's plan and smiles. Nobody likes bua but bears w/her as she only daughter of khrurana.

And everybody says, "BYEEE''''''.."

And they both sits in the car, and car leaves toward airport.

And maan takes geet in his embrace and holds her hand and says, " R U Ready baby?"

Geet smiles and looks down blushing indicating as YES

They finish all there required procedures and boards their flight

There Honeymoon place: Caribbean


And as they are going destination, geet rests her head on maan shoulder, as time passes maan also doses off and put his head on geet.

They arrive at their hotel.

Geet is looking through the their honey suite

There rm is like this (rest u can imagine as u like)




While geet is discovering her room, maan is admiring looking at geet

And while geet is looking out of the window to see the view, maan comes and hugs her from back

Geet smiles and maan asks, "baby, kaisa laga apna honeymoon suits?"

Geet turns and says happily, "bahot accha, I love ittt"

And both hugs each other.

Maan says,"so sweetheart r u ready for tonight?"

Geet blushes and says, "umm''.. nahi I am very tired!"

So Maan says, "koi baat nahi, uska bhi solution hai mere paas, pehele tum fresh ho jao, hum kuch kha lete hai,baat ki baat baad me dekhe ge" and geet nods, and looks for their bag for fresh cloths, but gets shock to see her cloths, and maan's and blushes and maan also turns to see what cloth geet is taking but he also gets surprise.

Maan see the clothes and says, "aree wahhh''. Maan na padega mere bhai-beheno ko kya packing ki hai" and geet hits him lightly "MAANNN'''" and hides her face in her palm.

And maan smiles and continues to tease her, "but geet hame to in kapdo ki to zarurat hi nahi padegi''." And geet looks at him confused and maan continues "kyuo ki hum sara din bed me hi to rahege''.." and geet again blushes and hits him and says, "aahhh geet, dheere se'''"

Geet asks, "itni zor se lagi?... Aur ye kya apko itne me hi laga gayi?" hahaha and laughs

Maan says, "geet mera hota to koi baat nahi,me to tumhare liye keh raha tha"

Geet look at him confused so maan continues, "kyoki mere dil me to tum rehti ho na, tumhe chot lag gayi to me ye bardast nahi kar shakata na!"

Hearing this geet looks at him lovingly and side hugs him

(BTW let me tell u what cloths did anni peck for geet, it's all short and too much reveling cloths and lingeries. And for maan all shorts and t-shirts)

Now geet comes back to the topic, Clothes!!!

And says, "abb me kya pehnugi?"

Maan says, "geet, it's okk na'.. it'not that bad, aur vise bhi tum shadi se pehele college me to pehen ti thi na to abb kya??, yaha pe dadi aur koi elders bhi nahi hai to kya and (huskily) muje bhi tumhe inn kapdo me dekhana hai" plz geet

Geet smiles and nodes and leaves for bathroom to fresh up

Maan orders dinner and they both eat and after they are done, maan is about to stand up, but geet stops him and again makes him sit and moves closer to him and says, "I know maan, mene apko kaha tha ke me tired hu, but I am ready, me to apko aise hi '''."

But maan stops her and says, "geet I know lekin tum sach me tired lag rahi ho, ajj hum sojate hai, baki kal se me tumhe aram nahi karne dunga"

And geet smiles and kisses him

follow by a hug

and says, "I love you maan"

And maan says, "I love you too shona"

And picks her up and put her on bed and takes her in his arm and both doses off in little while.

 

Next morning:

(plz image this couple as Maaneet)

Precap: Maan geet finally becoming one!!! 😳 ahem ahem scene

Thank you guys for ur comments, i am sorry i wasnt able to reply them. keep commenting and i hope it's not boring. hope you guys like this part.


plz hit LIKE button

Edited by nilu710 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
lovley update to hot ...dear fab ...love it nil thank you for lovley update ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesome,beautiful part.
loved it.

so maaneet in honeymoon.
continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

good that bua living

what beautiful fantastic
part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
wow loved the ff...
very interesting...
pl cont soon...
can u pl add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Awsum story dear. Loved it. Pls pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome...add me..waiting for nxt part

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