Maneet SS Woh Pyare Lamhe pt4 updated pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
i hope live soon
she too much
maaneet scene cute
amazing part
love it
waiting waiting
thnaks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ritzy09

great update...please don't shorten it...there are many post wedding FFs on Maneet but mostly have a story line where both of them are not in love and struggling to build thier relationship

this is a new flavour and you should continue. I am sure people will comment and like as the story moves forward
moreover it should be about expressing what you feel
One suggestion - you may want to break your post in paragraphs and start different conversations from new lines. This will make it easier to read


Thanks buddy...

u really encouraged me...

i will write it

yes, i noticed that i have kind of wrote every thing in one paragraph, that is very confusing to read, next time,i'll try to make it clear as possible. thank u for ur suggestion, i appriciate it

thanks again


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmake11

i hope live soon

she too much
maaneet scene cute
amazing part
love it
waiting waiting
thnaks 4 pm


i know,bua will be out soon
thank for commenting
will try to update tomrrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhavipatil

lovley update dear ...superb ...love it to the ... awesome ...



Thank u madh...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome, beautiful part.
loved it.
bua is so bad.
loved maan's mom -dad
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
the update was superb
realy cute
and that bua 😡 hate her..
i really hate these kind of people.. stupid people
but really loved the update
do cont soon
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Woh Pyaree Lamhe...
Part 3

Maan sees the love geet is getting from his family, (except from bua and her family). He smiles and Geet looks at him and both smiles at each other. geet leaves for kitchen to clear up the dishes and maan looks for excuses to go near her. While everybody was moving to living rm, maan is sneaking to kitchen. And bua notices that maan is not coming with them.

Bua- maan bte tum kaha ja rahe ho, chalo na living rm me bedte hai!

Maan- umm'.bua me'.umm ap logo ko join karata hu, me pani pi k ata hu

And b4 bua can say anything he quicky leaves from there, prerna (maan mother) understands and smiles

In the kitchen:

Geet looks a little bit happy after prerena(maan's mother) and anurag (maan's father) and dadi's love.

She is taking out the left over khir in a bowl and smiling. Maan is standing on the door and looking at her.

she self talks, "maan ne to kuch ka kaha bhi nahi k unko khir achhi lagi ke nahi, unko shayad acchi nahi lagi" but maan comes there from behind

and

says, "kya baat kar rahi ho geet, muje to geet itni achi lagi k'.

geet says, "k'?

maan moving toward her and geet getting drawn into maan

Maan, " k muje'..

Geet. "k apko'..

Maan, "k muje tere'.

Geet, " k apko mere'''.

Maan, " hoth chune ka maan kar raha hai!"

Geet takes a sec to take in their little talk

And she realizes and blues really hard and says

Geet, "kya??? Maann'. normally log aise mouke par hath chute hai, naki ho'. But stops and looks down blushing hard. Maan smiles and puts his hand under her chin and makes her look up in his eyes

Maan, "abb me kya karu, muje hoth chuk maza ata hai, lekin ha,sifr meri bivi k huh!" and geet smiles shyly so maan takes that as yes and moves forward , he was almost there just at that time,

Anni (Maan's sister) came and closes her eyes and says, "maine kuch nahi dekha bhai"

They look surprised and sees who is it

Maan slowly mumurs geet hears but anni cant hear is "GR8 isi ki kami thi, subah se yeh log mere romance ka band baja rahe hai,lagata hai muje honey moon ka jalda hi intezam karana padega!"

Which gain makes geet to blush'and slightly hits him on his arm

Geet quickly moves away from maan and tells to annie, "are anni, avo na, vo maan to aise hi kuch dudne aye the (to find something).

Annie, " kya bhabhi, KM ki hava o ko bhi pata hai ki MSK kabhi bhi kichean me nahi ata, aur ajj unka pura ghar chodke kichean me hi kuch khogaya!!!strange na'''.!

Maan geet understands what she means and maan looks at her with stern face and anni looks scared then maan smiles and annie is relieved.

Just then Prerena calls them and they all move toward living rm and maan is trying to hold geet's hand but she doesn't let him, and maan pretend to get angry,but geet softly kisses him on his cheek and moves a little ahead, and Maan smiles. .

In afternoon:

Geet enters in their bedroom and immediately was brought in maan's embrace, geet gets surprise and maan slowly bolts the door.

Maan, "kitani der lagadi geet!me tumhara kab se intezar kar raha hu."

Geet. "sorry janu, vo niche der ho gayi, vo bua nikal ne hi nahi de rahi thi"

Maan gets furious and says, "ye bua ki to me'.."

But geet say, " Maann'' jane dejiye na,ab me aa gayi hu na, bolo kya kehna chahte the app?"

Maan smiles naughtily and says, "kehena nahi karana chahata tha." And hugs her passionatley

Geet, "kya?" (meri buddu geet)

Maan, "ye'.."

And starts kissing her passionately, and blocks her on wall and starts giving her bites on her shoulder and neck!

Geet is loosing her self but controls and pushes him and says, "Maan, ye kya kara rahe hai aap?"

Maan, "apni bivi ki pyarr'." And starts moving toward her again

But geet, "Maan abhi nahi, dekhiye aise din me'" not able to finish and starts shying

Maan understands but teases her, " din me kya?, infact mere liye to accha hai, me tumhe acchi tarah dek''" but geet puts her hand on his mouth.

And says, "Maan aap bhi na!"

Maan, "Me bhi na kya?, ha...! bahot sexy aur irresistible hu na, I know, MSK ka charm hi kuch aisa hai.tum to chanti ho na, college me kitani ladkia muj pe marati thi, mere ek touch k liye, lekin ye kambkat dil tumpe aa gaya"

Now geet faking upset and say, "accha, tochale jate na unke piche, maine thodi apko mere piche piche ane ko bola tha" and moves away

Maan self thought, "aree yaar ye to upset ho gayi, manana padega"

And goes after her to manofy her

And says, "oo meri jaan to bura maan gayi, sorry sweet heart, me to aise majak kar raha tha,

tumhe to pata hai agar, tum na hoti to iss sine me jaan na hoti, aur iss duniya me maan na hota"

Geet suddenly stops him and hits him lightly on his chest "MAAN, ye app'"

And starts crying

Maan, "aree geet, tum kyu ro rahi ho, sorry baba, I am sorry janu, see i am also doing this and starts push-ups"

But geets turns away and maan counts but soon geet turns and hugs him and cries

Maan sees this and says, "sorry na sweet heart, aaj se kabhi ais nahi kahuga, tumhari kasam" and geet smiles and he returns to his mischief and starts kissing and falls on bed

and geet surrenders herself, just when maan was about to open her blouse hook at back, anni knock the door and says, "bhabhi'. Bhabhi bua apko bua rahi hai" and maan-geet comes out of their act, and geets blushes

Maan gets frustratd and says, "ye bua ki to kal hi tickets katavani padegi patiyala ki, nahi to ye MSK ko bahot bhari padne vali hai" while geet is escaping maan says, "geet abhi to tum bachi gayi, lekin ajj rat ko me tuhe nahi choduga"

and also moves toward door, since geet went to bath room to set up her saree, and after that they went down stairs!

In the evening:

It's Mannet's reception.

Lots of people have come, Maan's and geet's college friends, their family frends and relatives. Everybody is coming one by one on the stage and congratulate them. After that they have a couple dance and then everybody is busy in chatting, and maan sees his chance and keep giving geet pecks on her cheek and sometimes on lipes, but being careful that nobody sees them, becoz he doesn't want to make geet embarrass.

At the end when they everybody was about to retire to their rm maan was getting excited to go to rmbut dadi stops them, but

maan says, "dadi abhi nahi bahot nind aa rahi" and pretend to yawn

but dadi understands and says, "bete, muje pata app natak kar rahe hai, lekin hum bhi appki dadi hai, ye to app k fayade ki baat hai, lekin agar app nahi sunna chaht to'.."

but maan immidealy comes and says, "kya dadi, apitana keh rahi hai to batae yeh"

dadi smirks and gives him a envelop. Maan looks disappointed and says "dadi''"

but dadi cuts him and says, "ander kya ye to dekhi ye"

maan disinterstly looks in it and after he reads a papers and sees tickets he smiles widely and hugs dadi immideatly and says "Dadi, U R JUST GR88888"

and geets thinks "iss me aisa kya hai jo ye itna kush ho gaye"and goes in look in the paper and reads and understands and looks down shying

dadi hugs both maan and geet and says "Yes, it's ur honeymoon tickets and u guys are leaving now, anni and Vicky ne apke kapade sab pack diye hai and vi sab apke gadi me pahoch gaya hai app sirf fresh hoke jayi varna.

Maan and geets both smiles and does what dadi says them to do and wishes her good night and geet takes blessing from her. and both goes to their RM to get ready to leave. Maan is on the 7th heaven and drags geet to rm and asks her to hurry up. Maan is Very much excited and thinking about his naughty thoughts.

Precap: MAANEET off to honeymoon😳. And think what cloths did anni and Vicky pecked for them !!! hahaha 😆


Thank You guys for your comments!!! i appreciate them. Hope you guys like this part, i hope i am not making u bore, if it's too slow, them plz let me know, i move the story. Thank you again.


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Edited by nilu710 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
lovely part
love it & enjoy reading it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
This is so cool ...loved it!!!
Beautiful part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Awesome update. 👏 👏
loved it.
waiting for next part. 😃

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