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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansijani21

amazing !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansijani21

amazing !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

awesome!!!


loved it ...con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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❤️lovley update dear ...plzzz continue soon waiting for update ...love it ...love you NIL...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

really liked this SS of urs..
would love to read more..
cont soon
Noor



thank u dearrr

will be updating in a while
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhavipatil

❤️lovley update dear ...plzzz continue soon waiting for update ...love it ...love you NIL...👍🏼



thanksss madhaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilu710



thanksss madhaaa

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hey update fast waiting

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you guys for urn comments and support, I really appreciate it. But I am not getting much responses so will end this soon. Don't worry I will complete it; it's just that I will shorten the story. So, cutting my bakvas here's ur update for today………. Hope u like like it!!!!

It was probably midnight; Maan-Geet was cuddling up comfortable. Geet 's head was resting on maan's chest and maan was holding geet by her waist, geet moves and little and turn her back to maan, maan also moves and hugs her from back. Both are still sleeping. Suddenly geet feels maan's breath on her nack. She moves her head to see maan's face resting on her neck and he is sleeping peacefully. She smiles and caresses his cheek. Maan is sound sleep. Her eyes travels to his eyes, nose, his cheek and finally rests on his lips, she feels like to kiss him, but controls her urges, as he might wake up. She completely turns and comes to his embrace and put her both hands on her neck and admires him. She remembers how they have spent their college days, she used to be a book warm and he, Maan was a college dude. He was a most popular guy in the college. And how they fall in love. She smiles at that thought.

She is recalling all their lovely moments, how he fall in love with her at first sight. Yes, it was a love at first sight for maan, but geet was too busy to look at any guy, she was scholar student. She is remembering ever cute little lovely moments with him. And she doesn't even realize when she falls asleep. In early morning, maan feels geet very close to him, he opens his eyes and see's geet almost hugging tightly and peacefully sleeping. He smiles and thinks of mischief and starts to kiss geet on her shoulder which is almost close to his face. She is till sleeping, he starts to give her wet kisses and even she doesn't response, and bites her, she suddenly screams "ahhh.." maan suddenly closes his eyes, and pretends to sleep, geet understands his mischief and moves a little and hits him lightly and says, "MAAN…" and stills pretends so, she thinks of something and moves closer so her breath falls on his lips, he thinks she is going to kiss him, but again thinks, no she never takes first steps, but still pretend and waits for her action. She comes closer and brushes her lips with his. She gets surprise and opens his eyes and geet's like "caught you!!!! I knew u were awake!" "badmash…….. "Maan smiles seeing her smile widely. He moves again a closer, there is not even an inch space btwn them. Geet understands what is he thinking and closes her eyes and moves closer, which maan takes as her YES. And takes her lips in his. And he moves on top of her and starts kisses her passionately and she also response to his kiss like there is no tomorrow. He moves a little down and starts kissing her collar bone, shoulder, her neck and keeps giving her wet kisses here and there. His hands travels to her back to unzip her kurti, right at that moment, they here a loud bell sound. (mandir ghanti) and they hear someone singing a morning bhajan.

Maan understands who is it and gets irritated. And geet chuckles looking at his plight. She tries to move little and get off the bed, but maan holds her and asks her" bahot hasi aa rahi ha tumhe, ruko abhi dikhata hu" geet" maan plzzz muje jaldi taiya hoke niche jane dijiye, varna sab kya soche ge,ke nahi nahi dulhan kitani late ahh rahi hai. Maan " mera naam keh dena, aue vaise bhi tumhe pata hai na,koikuch nahi kehega, tum sab ki favorite ho!" Geet "maan,I know, lekin abhi sare mehman hai ghar me vokya soche ge??? Maan "whatever,hame kya unse?" and starts kissing her again, but she stops him and pleads him to leave her. Maan doesn't want to leave her but seeing her making a cute baby faces leaves her. Geet kisses him last time and goes toward bath room and starts to get ready. Mean while maan again goes back to sleep. Geet comes out wearing a very beautiful Red net saree. And starts putting on her bangels and starts to put her sindoor and bindi but stops and looks back at maan but he is standing right back and picking up sindoot box and applying on her maag, and puts her bindi on. She smiles widely and asks," apko yaad tha?" Maan, "geet MSK apna vaada kabhi nahi bhlata!" geets shakes her head and stands up and stands front of him tells him to go to sleep, but he is like " jaldi kya hai geet, pehele muje meri energy dose medicine chahiye" geet understands his what he mean and asks, "what are u talking about???" maan is like ,"achha, abhi batata hu" and kisses her with full force and leaves her until they het out of breath. And then he looks at her and asks, "smaja me ya ki aur batau" Geetwho is blushing gets red and say " nahi, abb ap jayiye and taiyar ho jayiye" he asks "geet, can u give me shower?? w/ cute baby face!" geet say, "NO, ur not a kid, now go"and pushes himto bath rm and turns and selftalks, "I wonder, how will I manage when a little maan will come?" maan who is looking at her hears it and says, 'ohooo Geet,itni btabi hai jr ki, cholo abhi se taiya suru karate hai, I promise mai bada ho jauga jab tak vo ayega!" geet s turns and looks at him and gives him fake angry face and Maan goes to bath room. She smiles to herself and takes out maan's cloth and one last looks at mirror and goes down stairs, where every body are present and moving toward dinng table to get break fast. One of the bua sees her and says" oho nahi malkin aa gayi,bhai phool bichao koi inn ke liye! Kyu geet bahot jald ahh gayi tum,maine to socha tha ke ajj to lunch ke time pe tumare darshan hoge!" geet feels bad hearing that and has tears in her eyes. Maan's mom sees this and immideatly goes to rescue her,and says, " kya nandaji app bhi, bechari thak gayi hogi, pichare 1 week se kitani busy thi, marriage preparations and rasam me, akha lag gayi hogi! Looking at geet,"geet beta koi baat nahi, tum chalo mai tume agali rasam batati hu" and takes her away. Bua makes faces, and says"hum ne bhi shadi ki hai, sasural gaye hai , hamene to khabhi aisa nahi kiya! But geet and maan'smom ignores herand goes to kichen. Maan'smom to geet , "bata tum bua ki baat ka bura mat mann na, vo to aisi hi hai! Im sorry behalf of her" geet stops her and say,"maa ye app ky akeh rahi hai, I understands, she has ful righ on me that's y she said th at na,it''s okk, now tell what I have to do!!! Maan's mom smiles and one agaiin appricited maan for choosing geet as their bahu. And says, "beta u have to make something sweet to make all these people's bitter mounth" and both sas-bahu giggles. Maan Mom's goes out showing her all the utensils and stuff. Geet decides to make khir since maan love it. and starts making it. Every body is waiting for it. And maan comes down, he decides pretend to look all upset front of geet. He comes and sits in middle sit which is for head person. usually , on the other side, his dad sits and other maan. Maan asks everybody, "good morning, hows everybody?" everyone smiles and and says "Goodmorning" mean while geet comes and serves every body khir and break fast and maan is trying to steal glances from her to show her that he is angry/upset,but she is not even looking at her, then he realizes that she is sad. He thinks, "subha to think thi,isee kya hua, abhi preganant bhi nahi hue ki mood swing ho and slightly smiles." And then he understands that something must have happened, he decides to ask her later. Finally geet comes tohimand serves him khir w/smile. He looks at her and smiles and asks her to have it for herself and sit by him, she shooks her head for No and looks at everybody, so he can understand, just by then bua intervenes their little eye conversation and says , "tik hi hai, kuch khass nahi hai,khir" and maangeet comes out of their eye talking looks up. Maan'sdad says, " nahi koki( maan's bua) khir to bahot acchibanni hai.to geet, "bte geet apne to bilkil apki saas ki tarah khir banae hai and looks for money to give her as sagun. And maan'smomsmiles and says, "kyoki vo meri bahu nahi beti hai, kyuogeet beta!" geet smiles and has tears inher eyes and immidiatley wipes it, b4 maan notices it,but he does see it. Maan'sdad gives her shagun, follow by maan'smom and dadi, " who blesses her and gives her their khandani gift. This little session is going on,and while this blessing session is going on,maan sees bua making faces and understands what might have happen and feels like to kick her out of the house but hold back himself tofind out whole truth. And looks determine.

Precap: Maneet moments ……………..

Thank you guys for reading this ss. I appricaite it. Im a sorry,if I made u bore orcouldnt standon ur expectation. Plzzz give me ur comments and suggestion if u want to see something special. Every thing is welcome. Thanks again……………..

Thank You Madhavi!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update...please don't shorten it...there are many post wedding FFs on Maneet but mostly have a story line where both of them are not in love and struggling to build thier relationship

this is a new flavour and you should continue. I am sure people will comment and like as the story moves forward
moreover it should be about expressing what you feel
One suggestion - you may want to break your post in paragraphs and start different conversations from new lines. This will make it easier to read
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovley update dear ...superb ...love it to the ... awesome ...

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