Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 50

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

abhi mujhe rona aa raha hai... main baad mein comment karoongi

*edited*

fiza... pehle toh humein yeh aisa laga ki jaise humare saath dhoka hua ho... hum yeh samajh rahe the ki yeh mayank wo nahi jo ek ladki ko shaadi ki raat aise chhor gaya tha... balki yeh toh koi aur hai jo uske beete hue kal ki parwa naa karte hue uske saath apni aane waali zindagi guzaarna chahta hai... isiliye hum thode udaas the...

lekin hum aapse yeh kehna chahte hai, ki jo gunaah mayank ne kiya, unse liye hum unhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte, aur humein is baat pe naaz hai ki nupur ne wohi kiya jo hum karte... yeh baat soch kar humara khoon khaul uthta hai ki unhone nupur se halala karne ko kaha... kisi insaan ki soch itni ghatiya kaise ho sakti hai?? nupur ne jo faisla kiya woh bilkul sahi faisla tha...

shaadi zindagi ka ek hissa hai... zindagi nahi... shaadi ek khubsurat rishta hai jo do dilon ko eksaath baandh-ti hai... iski ahmiyat jiti ek ladki ki zindagi mein hai, utni hi ahmiyat ek ladke ki zindagi mein bhi honi chahiye... agar koi shaadi kaamiyaab ho, toh uska shrey ladka aur ladki dono ko jana chahiye, aur naakaamiyaab ho, to uski zimmedaari bhi dono ki hi hoti hai... lekin, yeh behad afsos ki baat hai ki humesha ladkiyon ko hi humesha zimmedar thehraya jaata hai... humesha ek ladki se hi ummeed ki jaati hai ki woh apni zindagi bhulaakar dusron ke mutabik zindagi jeeye... aur haan... shayad kahin naa kahin, humpe yeh hukumat ka haq humne khud-hi unko diya hai... unki hukumat ke tale humara wajood kahin kho gaya, aur humne use kabhi dhoondne ki koshish hi nahi ki...

fiza.. hum dua karenge ki kisi ladki ki zindagi mein aise din naa aaye... aur agar kabhi aaye... toh usmein apne taqdeer se ladne ki utni hi himmat ho jitni nupur mein thi...

yeh kaafila humaare saath baantne ke liye shukriya

~jiya~

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Shabash meri sherni...
Mujhe darr tha ki itni happy ending dene wali fiza kahin mayur ko mila na de...Honestly speaking this ws the first time when i wanted mayur to be separated (bolte hue bhi kitna ajeeb lagta hai)...And u just chose my way...

Par tumne ek kam baki rakha...Ek slap kyun nahi dilwaya mayank ko...He wants to make her married with an another guy and then remarried her...What a cheap and disgusting person...Iske baad ek slap to banta hi tha...But very well written...The dialogues r well justified...U didnt make nupur to let her self esteem go down...And i truly loved it...

I really appreciate ur epilogue...Thank god ki mujhe kabhi aisi line nahi sunne pari ki 'aab aur padke kya karoongi, abhi to shadi ki umar ho gayi' and all varna usse pakka i hour ki lecture sunni parti...Actually our society is not this much conservative...

And today i want to share u something...I hav an aunt (maasi) who got married in an age of 20. After the marriage my nanagi got to know that her husband is unemployed and all the information given ws fake...That time my aunt ws pregnant...In that state she completed her study and got a job...But her husband ws soo cheap that he suspects her and physically assaults her...That day she left him with her son, gave him divorce and today she is a successful woman...Not only that he also gave her son a secured life...I feel very proud of her and found myself lucky that im her niece...
I think all woman shud be like her and believe that women r not made just to praise her family...She has her own individuality and hold same importance in society that of a man...

Ok now i stop...Bohut zaida bol liya maine...I just cudnt help...Sorry...But im thankful to u that u wrote this story, also chose muslim religion and present nupur as a strong character...

Hey guys

First of all thnku so much to all of u for the immense amount of love n effection u showered at me with WAJOOD….how much I was apprehensive before publishing it n how much I was overwhelm with ur coment u just cant imagine…

I m turning bad..havent rplyed to u all….only few I gues….but it doens mean I don't honor ur love.. ur coments …the meant a loot ..loot more thn just few words….they r expression n conection from my pen to ur heart….

To those who called it my best..im honored…n for those who appreciated ths kind of writing..lov ya …n to warn u im planning a set of such thngs mayb next mth ….

Oki as my readers are scared n mad at meeting to much with this fiz ..whos these day giving all sad sad thngs…so to manofy my readers….after ages I thng I have cum up with sumthng romantic…so here its is an OS just fro mere fun

Lov ya

N pls leave ur precious comnt..

Fiza….

PERFECT IMPERFECTION

Sitting ideally in office ..i have nothing to do.no its not like tht ..i have atleast 40 files n 20 assignments pending….. three dead lines to achieve wch I need to within 3 days…uff I just can figure out where to strt..is this fair ..so much of work load at a skeleton size…..

A smile appears on my face…skeleton size….ahhh so hate this tag line on me…thnks to u …u always call me soo….ohh ..sorry pardon me these work loads are giving me symptoms of amnesia ..i forgot to introduce myself .. I m a a girl frm a middle class ..in copopertae firm….no I have no responsibility doing so just for entertainment …moreover its abt need n necessities…to make life the best..…..so im here today ..geting dam bored ..just due to tht stupid idiot moron…

Ya ya….apparently speaking he is on a higher position thn mine…kinda boss…but who takes tht man as tht…no wonder how he become a senior manger here….suuch a care free attitude at such a high level….but thts also the reason his team can work differently..being in cooperate world u need new ideas to attrct people n clients…..

Im getting bored ….no wht do u thought I missing him…noway nt at all..it has been 25 days he is out of contact …first on an meeting thn his sum stupid cousins wedding out of town …even nopt real cousin sum old so called brother of him

How could he …just imagine 25 dyas …n im fed of handling all this on my own…where to star t n wht to do first I just cant figure out…….

Nupur: Ahhh…idiot ..ullu…

Mayank: Slow down skeleton size…..i have a reputation here…if u have right to say so doesn't mean ..evry one shud listen to it …

Nupur: Get off mee

Mayank: Why….wht happen dam tired ..sorry yaar I know I have been non reasonable to u …so many work on a skeleton size .nt fair haina…….

His hands where on my shoulder n he was pressing my back bone ….ahh so relaxing I tell u this is….i closed my eyes ..n relaxed a bit…its always make me feel so heavenly

Nupur: Ohh freak….dead line is just 3 days later n ur here standing n seducing a girl…

Mayank: So wht just relax a bit…u know tht work is just for a day….

Nupur: Acha leave me…

Mayank: Why ..ur angry on me…

Nupur: Noo.its just….

Mayank: Just wht….

Nupur: Shut up…

Mayank: mischievously leaning close ot her….Ohh so u will get losst n the moment n thn u will feel week …n thn nupur just imagine wht had happen..mein kisi ko moo dekhny k laiq nhi rehta…uff…he threw himself on his chair n lughed …n got file right on his head

Nuur: tumhara moo wasy bhi kaun dekhn chata hai

Myank: tum… I know u missed like hell

Nupur: stop irrating ME N GET ON THIS PRESENTATION

Myank: ohh to hell with it….ther is news for u …

Nupur: why im smelling sumthing fishy …he nodded in ys….sharam u want to be alive na….

Mayank: no dear..im already dead in love…n fro the news/..im getting engaged on sat

Nupur: freak…u have lost it …this sat in two days

Mayank: yes ..i so wish it can be 2morow..but stupid pandit….she glared sorry….he said on sat ….so another 2 days…

Nupur: mayank…sat ko product launch k presentation hai

Mayank: Bahr mein gai tumhair presentation…madam engagement happens once in life n thee stupid presentation ery now or than ….

Nupur: Mayank …this my dream project

Mayank: N tht mine….samhji

Nupur: Tu jao aur apna dream project complete kero mjjy mera kernay do …

Mayank: Ji nhi ….acha suno na…mjh se laro maat hum jaldi se yeah kam khata kertay hain phir mera kam shooro….

Nupur: Aur engament k timing k kya hoga …

Mayank; Yar woh hum dinner nhi attend keray gay bs..aur jakay engagement k kahan kahy gay…

Nupur: Hmm…aur koi choice hai kiya

Mayank: Nhi….kam kero

They bth get engrossed in work n then finally completed there report..on product launch completed…it was true whn bth of them joined as a team them finish there work in few hrs rather any other who takes day….but this was a big thing for bth f them n when the finished there work it was alsmot night

Nupur: finally v r done…so relaxed

mayank: ur relaxed n im freaking out …..pouting ab meri shoping k kiya

Nupur: im hungry

Mayank: shopping ….

Nupur: food

Mayank: we will have sumthing from take away ….thn will shop…oki skeleton sixe

Nupur: acha chalo man layti hoon

Mayank: thnku …waran mein kauwara hi reh jata

So wht to shop first

Myank: ladies frist

Nupur: wht….not the bridal attire..n thts so not with me …pls

Mayank: yes….tu try ker k kaun dekhy ga …meri fianc k kayal hai k mein jo pasand kero ga ach hi hoga

Nupur: ji nhi us k kayal hai k….tumhari baqwas commentary suny se behatar hai tum hi pasand kerlo….

Mayank: thts so unromantic of u…..chaloo….

The went inside n evry1 was out….the contradiction of choice….he wants to slect a fully embedded typical bridal wear n she wants to slect a modern one….sunmhow to the shopkeeper luck tht thy agreed on an out fit…whos colour was of mayank choice n styling of nupur…

Next was maynk turn n on tht she didn't even question neither he argue…this n area where he completed trust her…she selected a smple n clasy dress for him wch has its traditional touches init…..

Lost n tired they where resting in the car at 11 in night on the car seat…..

Mayank: thak gai….

Nupur: hmm….

Mayank: u have grown old…

Reciving a slap on his arm the chuckled

Nupur; Chalo ab gahr tu chor mjhy

Mayank: chorny k lyan yeah hath nhi tahama

Nupur: phir shoror hogaya yeah ….not any other dialgiue plss…..

Turning towards her …..oki as u wish …..

………………..

He took her hands on look at the….the were empty

Nupur: kya hua….

Myank: making an irrating fce …kahli hain

Nupur: tu….ohhh….kal presentation hi….mehndi kasay lago

Myank: meri engagement hai……zayada imp…samhji…khir look on whom I wasting time…..

Next day was the day of product launch…nupur was on cloud nine as it went extremely well n mayank was on cloud 11 as it went goo n moreover " aj meri engemennt hai"…

Nupur: uff mayank…itna tu bbc ny prince William k shadi k bhi raag nhi gaya jitna tum engagement k…..

Mayank: wasy nice colour on ur hand hmm…he smile WININGLY

Mayank: uthoo…..jaldi…it must be first engagement jaha larka late hai

Nupur: tu jaoo na……

Mayank: nupur…plls aj na laroo…

Arriving house ……

Mayank: u have 30 mins…she glared oki ma'am u have 45 mins…per is se zayada im not gonna wait…

She smiled n left with disbleive…..

As u came out ..he was already waitng for her…

Dreesed in wht he selcted for her…she was looking his…only his…yes she was his bride… …..

Ya y aim nuts….yes heads over heel is an under estimation of wht I really feel for him…moreover wht he made me feel…his excitement his happiness just at the thought at finally im entering his life is amzing..though we have been in each other lifes from the day our life began…..life is amusing for us

The first amuse

We r twins…..no pls…im not getting married to my brother….. but yes v came in the world same day n almost same time…no he isn't im elder thn him….just 10 mins ….acha…so wht im elder thn u

The second amuse

We live our lifes together …being brought to orphanage on the seond day of our lifes …we have been together…..

Fought with life……held each other….studied together ..protect each other from the world…he being more possessive n protective to me…...not only from the world but from the life to… even at stage of life …payed for my expenses….whn I have nthing to gave..n anything in my hand…the only thng even at ht time I hold was firm griped fingers aroung my hand…a assurance in ur eyes…tht promised me not a perfect life but a life where we stod with ech other n never alone ….

Getting a job in our colloge days we shifted to our house ..this where vr strting our n other step of life…thought its on rent but who cares….life is perfect whn v r together….

Eating one time ….at times …he being more…..n more caring ..alwys lyed to me….me kahan kah liya ….rasty mein bhook lag rahi thi tu…ya there has been time whn we after spending our salary on rent, college n life…were did have money for lavish diner….but the happiness of shring a bread together…n make eat each other….amazing haina…

Ya..n my first kiss…amazing …..haina…hmm…

Shut mayank….

Y ur blushing finally my bride is behaving like one…thn u didn't blushed whn u ,,,u kissed me first….

Ya I did but ur gesture for me always made me fall for u again…..whn u lyed abt food…n thn even for my fees I just gotten resist but hold u near….mayankkk

Wht….u feel to hold me near….tht time…… now im feeling….

N thn finally after completing our studied we got the job at a good organization…with a ok salary wch time turns to good enough…

So today finalll my love agreed on getting married to me but instant marriage no no…first I want to enjoy my life as her fianc…n now its time to proceed further…common

Forwarding his hand he entwining his finger with her…proceeding to a the center of small hall…wch was beautifully decorated with flowers n candles all around…with a simple net red sari she was looking serene in candle light…..asking her hand ..she gave him n he sliped a ring in her finger….n so as she

Wait

He went to camera n switch it to auto…

Back hugging her he asked her to smile n face the camer….

There was no huge celebration nor a huge decorum….all was there was ther love n them …together …life for has always been like tht…not perfect…not imperfect…..ups n too low down….but wht holds us strong ..was this…our hands entwing perfectly with each other….defining perfection for each other ….

Making her face to him…he tucked her hair back ….his eyes were oozing out strange passion from them …wch was making her each n evry cell warm……feeling it hard to face his gaze she lowered her eeys …to wch he smile n cup her face….he slowly move towards her eyes n place his lips….geting lowered he kissed her cheeks n thn traced her lips lovingly with his finger..n looking at her passionatly n absorbing her seduced expression……slightly brushing his lips with her….to make her crave for him more….pressing her lips on his….he find her hands griping his hair tightly make him more near…..a smile appear in between his convey of passion to her…exploring her n making her believe he holds same for her …he move apart n was still caressing his cheeks with his thumb……

Maynk: tht was overwhelming ..he smiled mischievously …n she chuckled shyly resting her forehad on his…..

Hugging her tigh he kiss her neck …..sting on the floor …n making her sit on him ….back hugging her…he was playing n tracing each an evry curve of her hand….kissing her ring infinity….

Fitting his finger..entwingly with her…looking at the perfect match they have