Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 49

Hay Fizza what u write is really a big truth of our socity

Shabash meri sherni...
Mujhe darr tha ki itni happy ending dene wali fiza kahin mayur ko mila na de...Honestly speaking this ws the first time when i wanted mayur to be separated (bolte hue bhi kitna ajeeb lagta hai)...And u just chose my way...

Par tumne ek kam baki rakha...Ek slap kyun nahi dilwaya mayank ko...He wants to make her married with an another guy and then remarried her...What a cheap and disgusting person...Iske baad ek slap to banta hi tha...But very well written...The dialogues r well justified...U didnt make nupur to let her self esteem go down...And i truly loved it...

I really appreciate ur epilogue...Thank god ki mujhe kabhi aisi line nahi sunne pari ki 'aab aur padke kya karoongi, abhi to shadi ki umar ho gayi' and all varna usse pakka i hour ki lecture sunni parti...Actually our society is not this much conservative...

And today i want to share u something...I hav an aunt (maasi) who got married in an age of 20. After the marriage my nanagi got to know that her husband is unemployed and all the information given ws fake...That time my aunt ws pregnant...In that state she completed her study and got a job...But her husband ws soo cheap that he suspects her and physically assaults her...That day she left him with her son, gave him divorce and today she is a successful woman...Not only that he also gave her son a secured life...I feel very proud of her and found myself lucky that im her niece...
I think all woman shud be like her and believe that women r not made just to praise her family...She has her own individuality and hold same importance in society that of a man...

Ok now i stop...Bohut zaida bol liya maine...I just cudnt help...Sorry...But im thankful to u that u wrote this story, also chose muslim religion and present nupur as a strong character...

Standing ovation Fiza...THE BEST ONE i came across till date...n ur best writing till date...!!!

PERFECT ENDING WITH PERFECT EPILOGUE...agar Nupur maaf kardeti to hum Nupur aur tumhe maaf nahi karte...i soo love u for u didn't make Nupur forgive...else WAJOOD ka matlab hi kho jata...WAJOOD har insaan ka haq hai be it a male or female...why to be this bechari types...rishta nata shadi in sab mein hum apne wajood ko kyun kho de...right sabko aisa supportive family nahi milta Nupur ko bhi nahi mila tha but woh unse alag apne wajood ko dhund payi as she had WILL...so according to me its WE who decides ki hamare saath kya hoga...agar hum chahe to apne status to banaye ya ek normal si ABLA NARI types zindagi chune...agar himmat ke saath aage badhe to KHUDA bhi madad karte hai...jaise Nupur ke case mein hua...this writing piece of urs is a WAKE-UP call...can't write more as im not a great writer as u but will say that i AGREE with every single word of urs...n want to hug u🤗🤗 for penning down this realistic ending n epilogue...n not fairytales ending...THANKYOU...!!!

perfect ending dear
thanks for the pm

fiza dear,,,,it was the perfect ending u cud have ever given to this story...

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Part 1:

I'm so sorry for commenting late

but it was absolutely amazing

loved it

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Part 2:

hmmm so mayank is her hubby

waiting for d next part

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Part 3:

amazing one fiza

so finally mayank is falling for her

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