2nd May 2011 Written Update -Enter Murari & Ashtik

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all 😃

This is my first update...so be gentle with me 😛


So it starts with people entering the house with Matarani positioned at the centre. Mridala at the door, Veena walks down the stairs whilst Murli and Bharti come out of their room...and Murli asks Dhamroo what's going on...Dhamroo asks everyone to listen...it's for his pyari Bharti bhabi that they all wanted to celebrate her coming into the house...he gives credit to Jhumka for thinking of celebrating Mata ki Chowki in their house...Bharli all smiles!! Dhamroo asks for blessings to keep his family happy always
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Suddenly, Bharti 's eyes fall on her unlit diya, she's shocked and goes running towards it. Murli follows and asks what's happened.Everyone surrounds her.Bharti says it was meant to be lit for 10 days for our happiness...what a big abshagun 😔...Murli consoles her, says it's not your fault and that there was bad weather the night before and it's because of that the flame died, there's no such thing as abshagun etc. Gau pipes in to say think nothing of it, Mata ki Chowki celebrations is going on, everything will be alright, again crediting Jhumka for coming up with the idea. Bharti is still worried and keeps staring at the diya. Murli turns her round and dries her tears with his hands 😳 and says not to worry he'll lit it again,which he does. Everyone says not to think about it and leaves.

At that point, Murari and Ashtik enter dancing in and chanting 'jai mataji..zor se bolo jai mataji.'
Karthik hands everyone a red piece of cloth to tie round the forehead. Murli helps Bharti put her one on. Ashatami enters in a throne type carried by people...everyone sits down and starts clapping, Murari starts to sing... Ashatami acts like she's possesed and then gets up whilst Karthik is rolling on the floor 😕...everyone is mega happy and are donating money...with the celebrations underway Bansi, Kamla and Dhara enter.

Bansi looks somewhat confused when he catches a glimpse of Murari, he walks towards him...and finally comes face to face with his brother. Murari looks surprised, Kamla looks shocked and Bansi's got a smile on his face...Everyone else notices and are puzzled as to why Bansi is standing in front of Murari...whilst Karthik continues to collect money from the others and then pockets it 😡

Bansi is the first to speak...Murari...everyone are confused...who is Murari...

Flashback...a lady has a baby in her arms (presuming it's Murli with his mother)...Kamla is there saying how the baby has grown, Bansi has a big smile and a lil kid (think it's Karthik or Dhamroo?...) Murari enters annoyed...everyhing is ruined he says, drones on how everything has been lost etc ever since this baby has been born
😭 if he stays nothing good is ever going to happen...Murari then grabs MurliAngry, the mother is crying to let go of the baby, to give him back 😭 Murari doesn't listen..the mother is screaming what fault is his..Kamla and Bansi tries to stop it and then forcefully takes the baby back..Murari shouts what fault is his? Ever since he has been born, the band business has gone bust etc (how blooming lame, how is that a baby's fault you 🤬 man!!!) Bansi is just shocked...Murari continues to rant...what haven't I done to fix this...it's all his fault (pointing at the baby) he says a few other things...(all bakwas in my opinion) and then again grabs the baby to leave to kill him 😭. The mother comes in front of Murari and says what are you trying to do...you want to kill my child...Murari just tosses her to the side and walks out. Bansi runs out and grabs hold of Murari...do you realise what a big paap you're about to do.. the business went down because of you not the baby.. Murari is enraged and does not listen...it is his fault, spent money on him etc...Bansi stops and says I'll look after him, give him my name, take him far away...Kamla comes running and takes the baby from Murari's arms...Murari leaves. The mother comes and says please take him away otherwise he'll kill him, you'll be better parents...take him away far...flashblack ends

Back to present...Bansi is upset and happy? 😕 all the other guests have left...Murari touches both Bansi and Kamla's feet...Bansi goes up to Murli and says to Murari - you recognise who this is...Murli is just dumbstruck...Bansi gives the killer blow...this is your son!!! Murari doesn't look displeased...

Flashback on when Murli found out that he was not Bansi&Kamla's bio child...Bansi saying that he's the child of a purana chacha and gomti chachi...Ends on Murli upset face

No precap


Comments...It was an ok epi...half of it went on the celebration and it was only when Bansi & Kamla entered that it became interesting. It was sweet of Murli to reassure Bharti that there is no abshagun with the diya unlit and to prove it he just lit it up again 😊...with Bansi coming face to face with his bro, he seemed happy as if there was no animosity towards Murari and then he introduces Murli...why do that!!!??? it's not as if Murari would care especially as he gave him away 😡...and the flashback of Bansi saying it's a purana chacha...why couldn't he say that my own brother didn't want you ❓

Sorry if there are any mistakes, please do feel free to tell me to rectify anything!! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rae, great update 👍🏼

I agree w/ your comments @ the end - if Bansi is happy to see his bro, fine, but why bring Murli into it? Particularly since Murli would understandably be resentful towards Murari, even if the latter's attitude may have changed. Not to mention that given Mridang's attacks on Murli in the past as a step-bro/step-son, Murli is likely to be even more sensitive to all this, since it was those sentiments that drove him into marrying Bharti the first time.

Somehow, I just cue the Dumroo scenes. Ashtami looked like she'd explode any moment. The whole entry of Murari's family looked bizarre.

My prediction - Murli will refuse to accept Murari as his father, and Bharti might try and persuade him to be more forgiving.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi rae congo on ur first update


looks like vrish has settled all here finally.


and another episode to be missed and not regretted

what nonsense this show has become now

more and more conspiracies

story of dwarf or politics cant make out now

sorry goofed up with names here😳
Edited by chatterbox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the fab UD :)
Why do most of the shows deviate from their original tagline?? From when did Bharthi become so superstitous??!!
Well, overall an okay epi!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the Update :)

I liked the epi but they were maybe too into the religious thing... But I don't judge of course.

As everyone , I think that was a weird reaction to introduce Murli like Bansi did. It sounded like "get it back, it's your son" 👎🏼

One thing was also bizarre :when they tried to console Bharti, they were all acting as if she was a kid, particularly when Murli put his hand on her head and said "come" ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi rae gr8 update!👍🏼

sorry late in replying as my internet connections have been killing me from the past few days! 😡

boring epi. i don't understand bansi's excitement at all. looks as if he wants to get rid of murli & that's why he's telling murari that murli is his son🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi thanks everyone! It's certainly harder then it looks respect to all updaters!!! 😃

It was not the greatest entry...And seriously what was up with Bansi pointing out Murli soo did not get that...and I don't think bharti was treated as a kid...he was consoling her as you would if someone was upset...@cb didn't see any goofness if so you've hid it well 😊

Agree with you Vrish - Murli wil probably won't want to forgive - Bharti will persuade him otherwise...

Ashatami looks like a force to b reckoned with...Gau defo needs to keep a close eye on her...as the saying goes keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Update Rae 😃

Well if Gau wasn't enough now Bharli will have another scheming sister in law. As for Bharti what's with this superstition,😳 we make our own destiny!

Although the episode was boring I notice a blooper because when Bansi was telling Murari that Murli was his son, he wasn't wearing the headband but then all of a sudden it was on Murli's head 😆
Edited by fuzzyface - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rae24

Hi thanks everyone! It's certainly harder then it looks respect to all updaters!!! 😃

It was not the greatest entry...And seriously what was up with Bansi pointing out Murli soo did not get that...and I don't think bharti was treated as a kid...he was consoling her as you would if someone was upset...@cb didn't see any goofness if so you've hid it well 😊

Agree with you Vrish - Murli wil probably won't want to forgive - Bharti will persuade him otherwise...

Ashatami looks like a force to b reckoned with...Gau defo needs to keep a close eye on her...as the saying goes keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer! 😉




rae actually i had put name fuzzy there thanking fuzzy for update

when it was actually urs

so i re edited it and later also had to write murli and wrote somethng else there

thats what i goofed😆😆

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