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The Romantic Voyage

Character-Sketchis as Follows:

Aditya Jhakar is one of the middle-class 25 year old guy.He is very enthusiastic,Passionate at the same time situation-balancer as well.He is very calm and composed guy.He has the passion to achieve his goal in life at any cost.He is very sensitive,quite but very strong and determined guy.He is very enthusiastic and Passionate ...his work is his passion.At the other side, he is very soft at Heart,cannot bear wrong things and complete follower of truth,Honesty.He is trust-worthy,dedicated with strong will-power.

Priya Raichand is Rich-class spoiled Girl.As a single Girl Child enjoys every bit of happiness in the Family .She is Stubborn,Shopaholic kinda Girl sought of very extrovert.
She has dealt a very pampered and sophisticated life.She has the funda of moulding the things the way she wants to happen ,a very stubborn Girl.She believes in the saying"Live life King Size".And she is treated as the Princess of Raichands.

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Chapter 1

Aditya's House:
Aditya Jhakar is a very normal middle class guy.He is very sincere,dedicated and hard-working towards each and every act of life.He live as a PG and three friends share the same room.He is in the Final year of MBBS.And to afford his fees,he works at the call-center at night-hours and if free in day-time has a DJ group owned by his friends as he is crazyyy for Music.He is the self-made person and has come from very small village near Jaipur where his Family is settled.Hey,Aditya aaj tu college ke baad seedhe Anjuna beach aa jaayeu.Kyu kya hua cheenu.Hey actually our band person is absent today to u have to replace him for today and party will be for around 5-6 hours.(Aditya thinking)OH Gosh!!!!! just after that i have to leave for call-center ,Matlab aaj no time for sleep.Koi baat nahi aditya for your parents mujhe ye sab karna hoga,i cannot back-off.Not an issue cheenu,I will be der for u.Thanks dost,agar tu nahi hota toh kya hota.

Raichand Mansion:
One day Raichands planned for Goa to relax and have fun as it was a very hectic March-end work schedule for Mihir and Tulsi.
Tulsi,Kyu na hum holiday par chale and ha hamari princess is bored to of the routine she needs break.Mihir...Aap na woh studies kitna karti hai ki she need break,Anyways apka hukum sar-aakhon par Sir,We r going!!!!!

Goa:
Anjuna Beach ...

"That?s cool. So you?are camping here?"
"Yeah, with our parents." Priya smiled with such unguarded friendliness it took my breath away. "Hum yaha har saal aate hai" Her lips were a soft, natural pink. "Its a family camp." Her long, Black hair shimmered as she combed her fingertips around one ear.
"What about you?" Vidya(Priya's Friend), asked, distracting him from his stare.

Aditya looked at the pretty girl again as Vidya continued to talk. When she fell silent He realized He hadn't heard a word she'd said, and now she was looking at me expectantly.
"Um, yeah," I said, non-committal-like.
Vidya smiled. "Me too."
"I'd love to live near the sea." The pretty girl looked into his eyes then glanced away, a slight blush coming to her cheeks. The skin of her throat down to her neckline was so smooth it shone with reflected sunlight. "It's beautiful here." She looked again into aditya's eyes, and this time she held his gaze. He was shocked at how pretty she was. They were just staring at each other, and He knew He had to say something, but the conversational part of his brain had stopped working. He swallowed.
"Tumhe Khelna hai?" Vidya called, looking past him.
Aditya was on an adrenaline high, it was such a rush talking to a pretty girl like that. He wonder how old she is?
He started replaying their conversation in his head, inwardly groaning that he hadn't even said one semi-intelligent or witty thing the whole time.
"Hey!"
He turned (his heart jumped like bubbles). She was right there behind him.
"Whats your name?" She asked.
"Uh . . . Aditya."
She grinned. "I am Priya." She stood there for a moment, just looking at him. "Well, it was nice meeting you, Aditya. Hope I see you around some time."
"Yeah. . ."
She whirled and danced away before he could say anything else.
(Aditya after looking the beautiful Priya just gone mad by exchanging the first glance)

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Chapter-3

Aditya was enjoying hanging out,giving them high-fives and encouragement. He kept glancing at Priya, and He noticed she was looking at him a lot, too.
He started showing off, acting like a professional tennis player, keeping light on my toes and grunting as I returned the ball. I did big tennis-like serves, throwing the ball into the air and whacking it as it came down. I was enjoying myself and getting laughs, especially from Priya, the crazy girl was giggling at everything. When I played her again, she beat me. She laughed at my exaggerated expression of shock.😆😆😆
Other kids in the room had noticed how much fun we were having, and the line became so long the people at the end could sit on the sofas in the lounge area. I went and sat down on one of the love seats and was soon joined by Priya herself.❤️ She'd lost to a little kid and everyone was teasing her about it. I wondered if she'd lost deliberately so she could come and sit with me.
A little boy nudged me, "Hey, you're sitting next to a girl. That means you must like her!"
"Yeah, she's my girlfriend," I joked, then glanced at Priya. She was blushing, but she grinned back at me. She didn't seem to mind that the boy was loudly telling everyone what Aditya Said.
When Vidya got out again, she came over and whispered something to Priya.
"Hey Aditya, Hume jana hai." Priya gave Aditya a cute, little pout.
"It?s okay, I better get going too."

Priya was waiting for me by the door. "That was fun."
"Yeah it was. We should do it again sometime."
"How about tomorrow?" She grinned.
"Main tumhe hain paach baje ke baad mil sakti hoo?"
"Okay." She nodded and smiled😊.
I walked home feeling light and happy. Priya obviously liked Aditya, and Aditya liked her. She was pretty, and funny, and . . . pretty. I couldn't wait to see her again.

The next day, after I got off work, I headed over to the games room. As soon as Priya caught sight of me she broke into a beautiful smile😃😃, and I couldn't help but smile too.
Vidya wasn't with her this time, in fact there was hardly anyone in the games room, and no one was playing ping-pong.
"Sablog kaha hai?"
"Mujhe nahi pata, there's no paddles, but I found this under the chair." She held up a ping-pong ball. "tum mere saath khelna chaoge?" She grinned.
"Without paddles?"
"Yeah, just use your hands." She giggled.
It was actually a lot of fun. The ball didn?t travel as far from our hands, but it made it over the net and was easy enough to return with a good slap. Priya was giggling a lot, and I soon caught her mood.
"Sorry I?m being so crazy."
"It?s okay, I like you like this."
"You do?" She giggled.
"Yeah."
They stood there grinning at each other.
"Let?s play a proper game." She slapped the ball at me.
We played a game up to 21. Vidya came in and watched us while we were playing.
"You guys wanna go to the beach?"
"You want to, Aditya?"
I didn?t want to. I was having too much fun with Priya all to myself.
"Let's keep playing for a while."
"Okay." Priya smiled at me, then gave Vidya her cute, little "sorry" pout.
Vidya slumped onto the couch. "When are you guys gonna be finished? I'm so bored."
We kept playing for a while, but it wasn't the same with Vidya there'Priya wasn't giggling anymore, the mood was broken.
I sighed. "Alright, Hum beach par chalte hai."
We hopped over the hot, white sand and found a place to sit. A couple of guys came and joined us, and Priya introduced them to me. One was Mishal, tanned, and muscular. Her friends didn't seem to mind me being part of their group.
"Let?s go swimming," Priya said, looking at me. She got up and pulled her t-shirt over her head, revealing a light-blue bikini top underneath. Whoa!
"Come on." She grabbed my arm to pull me up.
"I?m not wearing swim shorts."

"So?" She grinned and pushed off her shorts, revealing a matching bikini bottom.
Wow. I sat staring up at her, unable to take my eyes from that perfect skin, taking in every curve of her smooth, sculptured body. She just stood there letting Aditya look.
When his eyes finally met hers, she smiled and held out her hand. "Come on."
I didn't know what to do. I could swim in the shorts I was wearing, but for some reason I felt uncomfortable swimming with her like that. None of her friends were getting up either.
"Come on, Aditya." She tugged at my arm, trying to get me up, but He resisted, staying firmly seated on the sand. Aditya was feeling so awkward and unsure of myself.
She left me there and went down to the water's edge. I thought she'd given up on me, but she came right back, her hands full of wet sand, and splattered me with it, giggling with glee as she rubbed it through my hair. Her friends were all laughing as I stood up, shaking my head and feeling wet sand dripping down my back. I took off my shirt and chased a squealing Priya down to the sea.
She looked back to see me coming in after her. "I?m sorry! I?m sorry!" She laughed and screamed as I came closer. "Aditya . . . I?m sorry!"
Aditya was close enough to grab her, but I hesitated. I was still shy about touching her like that, especially when she was hardly wearing anything.
WThey stood there looking at each other for a moment, until a big wave broke over us, wetting the last of our dry skin, making Priya squeal. I laughed, and she lunged at me, but I easily resisted, grabbing her around the middle and lifting her up. Her screams were cut short as she plunged head first into the water. I swam away, and she gave chase, grabbing my legs and dunking me. We played in the surf, splashing and laughing and innocently touching each other as much as possible, and somehow we ended up holding hands and floating over the waves together.
Something was stirring in me. Don't get any ideas about her, Aditya, she's too young. But as I looked into those perfect, black eyes, I knew it was already too late.
When we came out of the water and joined her friends on the warm sand, there was another guy there with them. He'd been passing something around that they'd quickly put away when they saw us coming. I didn?t wanna hang with her friends, Aditya just wanted to be alone with Priya.
"Let's go for a walk," Aditya whispered.

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