Saavan ki Baat Pakki hai--A musings!!!

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello everyone

This is a new attempt by me writing about our beloved Saavan.Hope you all will like it..

Plz leave your comments without fail..Read on and you will see all familiar titles in Indian television..So enjoy this musings from Saavan POV..😃😃😃😃😃😃

Siggie courtesy Niru and Geethu(thanz to u two)

BTW I have taken liberty with the lang, so plz ignore grammatical mistakes

Baat hamrai Pakki Hai

Saavan ka Pyaar ki ye ek kahani hai

Holi ka Gulaal aur Rang badalthi odani

Jaisa rang bhi rangi kahani yeh

Hum dono Ram miye jodi hain

Mein Tere liye aur thum mere liye

Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai

Kahani ghar ghar ki hogi hai

Thumari Sapnon se bhare naina mujhe

Hamesha Zor ka jhatka detha hai

Hamara is Pavitra ristha mujhe

Bahut Maryada detha hai

Mere Ghar pe thum ek Choti bahu hai

Yeh Saas bina saruraal nahi hai

Is ghar mein Sasuraal genda phool hai

Yahan Hamari devrani pyaari hai

Hamara Kismat hai ki hum dono ki

Beech mein Kitani mohabbat hai

Doondh legi manzil hamein

Kya karna hai is dhuniya mein

Uttaran nahi hai mere paas

Par Pratigya liya meine zaroor

Dil se liya vachan ko

Zindhagi bhar nibhaunga mein

Gunahon ka devta nahi hai aap

Sab ki jodi wohi banaata Bhagyavidaata

Tere mere sapne ek hai Shravan ji

Hamara Pyaar mein twist khabi nahi

Choti si zindhagi hai hamara

Par usme Yeh pyaar na hoga kum

Bandhini hai yeh rista hamara

Rakt sambandh hoga baccha hamara

Baat hamari pakki hogai

Saath vachan se badkhar

Aathvan vachan nibha rahein hum

Saathiya hogai is zindhagi mein hum

Entertainment ke liye hum kuch bhi karegen

Indian idols bangaya hum dodno

Saavan ke Pyaar ka bandhan agni ki sakshi hai

Is kahani shuru with love guru(Ram ji)

Hamara Jodi kamaal ki hai

Hamara yeh Yatra hamesha chal sake

~~~~~~~~~~The end~~~~~~~

Edited by maris08 - 14 years ago

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

gud one maris. oh wat a connection yaar. luved it. the titles of each and every serial is suitin nicely. indeed i already knew before ki ur a great poet.👍🏼

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Aiswarya

@Aishu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

hahaha........awesme nd cool idea maris dii.........

wow.......it was like remembering most of the serials..........

toooooooooooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it.......

keep writing.........

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Mr.Zk

@Mr.Zk

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Maris, Lovely...U have put all the Serial or Show Names in this I think..Coz I dont Many of them...But They all are Very Well Arranged in the Poem...Superb...Good Keep it up..and Keep Coming more...

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ash91

@ash91

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

what a gr8 idea, Maris!!! loved it!!! must have taken a lot of effort to combine the names of the shows to frame them into a meaningful verse...hats off!!!👏👏

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Jahnvi

@-Jahnvi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Maris, your talent has no bounds. I am sure it takes a lot of hard work and thinking to be able to write something like this but kudos to you for keep bringing out the best. Loved this all the way. Keep it up. Very proud of you!👏

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ktms

@ktms

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Very nice maris!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.you keep reminding us how talented you are.👏

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Maris you have rendered me speechless. Words are not enough to praise you. Absolutely brilliant. You get better everyday. Keep up the gr8 work, waiting to read lots more.

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desigirl2

@desigirl2

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Oh wow maris! Only you can make all these shows into a beautiful poem that describes our dear saavan! Awesome job! Keep em coming!

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Dips

@Dips_Arhi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

WOOW!! the idea behind this poem is awesome, using serial and show titles and then writing it on Saavan!! u r extremely talented, and im really happy to be seeing it!!😳😊👏

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