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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no the inevitable has happened maan met geet..............patha nahin ab kya hoga...........
maan wont leave a stone unturned to make sure if its his geet and he wont leave her either..........bechari abhi toh apni zindagi phir se jeeney ki ek mauka mili aur yeh aa tapka...........
loved the update the way u hv correlated the past and present.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!
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Edited by pp1980 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Flashbacks with Maneet moments nice. So finally Maneet met.
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Posted: 14 years ago
WHOA!!! And so they finally meet....it's getting so good!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls add me inur pm/i like ur ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys!!!

I am back with my update!!! heheh Sorry it took me such a long time to update been super super super busy 😆😆😆😆 I hope you guys like this update...idk I am not feeling it but i hope it is interesting.....😳

P.S. I want to say special thanx to Hina.Khanxxx...thank you
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Chapter 12

Geet (crying): Mmmm mmaaaaaannnn

Maan; CHUP! (She flinched....) I will not let anyone take you away from me....God has already taken my parents from me...and now I won't let anything or anyone repeat the same mistake again...

Geet (with her free hand tries to touch his face...Maan holds it before it touches him): Maan am not going anywhere....

Maan (looks at her hand): Is this the hand that you shook with Armaan? (he holds it tigthley...she screams in pain...her bangles were breaking with the force...)

Geet: Maan please leave me...I won't do it again....please (crying uncontrollably) I only love you....please understand

Maan lets go of her hand..she looks at hand...the wrists were bleeding...she falls on the floor...here hands were shaking out of fear...there was piece of broken bangle stuck in her wrist..she takes it out and screams in pain...she tries getting up but couldn't her legs didn't have enough strength...suddenly she felt herself lifting off the floor...she looked up and saw Maan picking her up...he brings her upstairs to their bedroom...he puts her on the bed...he stops at the door...

Maan: After your dad's birthday...that will be the last time you would ever leave this house...

Geet (gets up and hugs his knees): Maan don't do this...I swear I only love you..Please don't do this...

Maan (picks her up and wipes her tears away) Crying will not go anywhere...it doesn't work with me....(Geet closes her eyes)

Geet: Maan

Maan: I will be back in a while...

He goes and closes the door...Geet drops on the bed and cries herself to sleep...after a while...Maan comes back in the room and picks up Geet and brings her to the bathroom...Geet wakes up and looks at Maan with fear...the bed sheet was covered with blood...she felt lightheaded and dizzy...she looks down...he is carries her inside the bathroom...

Geet: Mmmm Maan...why are you taking me here?

Maan (looks at her): Sshhh (He sits on the toilet cover seat and brings Geet's hand in front of the sink...turns on the tap water and washes her wrist with dried blood..Geet flinches in pain...and puts her head on his shoulder with tears coming down her cheek...) That's how I felt too when I saw you with him

Geet: I didn't talk to him....(crying) I swear....wwhheen I wwaass ccoming oout (crying uncontrollably) he came up to me aaanndd sstarted talking to me...I dddiin't want to be rruuddee beecausee he is your client

Maan: I can't stand you talking to anyone...it hurts

Geet: I only love you no one else...I won't leave you (Maan bandages her hand)

Maan: I will make sure you won't leave either.....(Geet felt sudden chill down her spine hearing that statement)

Geet: Maan...(Maan stands up and carries Geet to the bed...he lies her down) Maan listen...

Maan: Geet its late at night...I will listen to you tomorrow...now go to sleep (Geet was about to speak again when Maan kissed her with a force...he holds her wrists...she screams in pain while Maan was kissing her....here screams were unheard by Maan...tears escape down from her eyes....) I won't let anyone come near you....(Geet looks at him with fear...Maan looks at her...) Now go to sleep...Don't talk anymore...(Geet nodes her head and closes her eyes...Maan pulls her on top of him...she relunctently hugs him...)

End Flashback!
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Geet saw Maan standing there with arms crossed. Maan looked at her carefully.
Mahi: Do you need anything?

Maan: I needed a glass of water

Mahi: ohh I will get it (she gets the glass of water and gives it to Maan on a tray...Maan slowly takes the glass eyes still fixed on her...)

Maan: Thank you. So umm tell me about your family

Mahi: I don't think knowing about my family is any relevant (Maan looked at her curiously) Excuse me (Maan moves out of Geet's way but only a little...Geet had to squeeze close to Maan in order to pass by...Maan could smell Geet's aroma...he knew that this is his Geet... "Geet I know it is you...I will make everything better between us..that is my promise" he smiles and goes outside...)

Suraj: There you are...ok so Mahi likes the blue prints...this can be started as soon as possible...(he holds Mahi's hand..Maan sees...Suraj looks at Mahi...she smiles) Mr. Khurana if possible I would also like to have a house built..I want to gift it to Mahi as a wedding present

Maan (looks at Geet..he felt pain in his heart hearing about their marriage...he carefully looks at her..she seems happy): Maan...call me Maan not Mr. Khurana...umm we don't do houses but for you guys I will make an exception..when is the wedding?

Suraj: We haven't really decided on the date but hopefully by this weekend we will let you know...

Maan: umm I have to go now...(he gets up and was about to leave..)

Suraj: I will drop you..I have to go back to the office...(They both left..Maan looked back at Geet before leaving...)

Geet Pov:
Geet quickly closes the door and leans against the door...everything that happened in her past started to haunt her again...the memories that she tried to block out in the past four years....she knew that she would have to tell Suraj the truth before it can be too late....there was something that bothered her....Maan seemed way to calm and different...he didn't get mad when he saw me with Suraj...why? Did he change? Is he planning something to get me back? Babaji please help me...I can't go back to that place...I can't....I know he won't leave until he has me back......what do I do? I don't have anyone to talk to.....(she hugs her knees) Mujhe Suraj ko abhi aur issi waqt baat karni hai...main aisa nahi hone doongi....(she wipes her tears and goes to the phone to call Suraj)

Suraj: Hello Mahi...kya hua?

Mahi: Suraj I have to tell you something important...

Suraj: kya hua...tumhari awwaz ko kya hua?

Mahi: woh sab choro...mujhe tumse bohut zaroori baat karni hai..abhi aur issi waqt

Suraj: ok I will be there in half hour...I have to drop Mr. Khurana off first

Mahi: Woh tumhare sath hai?

Suraj: Haan kyun

Mahi: kuch nahi...I have to go..bye

Suraj looked at his phone..it was cut off..."Wonder what happened"

Maan: Is everything alright?

Suraj: I don't know...she was fine when I left...I don't know what happened all of a sudden

Maan: hmm....actually you can drop me off here..I need to do something...(Suraj stops the car...)

Suraj: Are you sure I can't drop you off at the hotel?

Maan: yeah I am sure..since I am here..I am going to go see some places....I will speak with you tomorrow...

Suraj: Alright...bye....

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Geet impatiently looks at the clock...it has been more than half hour...
"Where is he....he should've been here by now..." suddenly, she heard a knock on the door...she quickly gets up and opens the door and was shocked to see Maan there with flowers....

Maan: I gave Suraj a little errand to run for me...Won't you tell me to come in Geet?

Mahi: I am not Geet...please leave...(She was about to close the door when Maan puts his foot at the bottom of the door...)

Maan (steps inside..he puts the flowers on the table and hugs her..) you have no idea how happy I am to see you alive (Geet was confused) everyone thought you were dead...

Mahi: Let go of me...get out of my house...I told you I am not Geet...

Maan: I know you are Geet...why are you pretending that you don't know me....

Mahi: I don't know what you are talking about...or who this Geet is...Please leave my house or else I will have to tell my fiance Suraj to break the contract

Maan: Maybe you remember this...(pulls out her mangelsuture...and their wedding picture from his wallet)

Mahi (turns her head away): No...she may look like me but I am not your wife

Maan: I know you are (comes closer to her...he touches her hair...Geet tries to move away but he holds her body in place) You smell like my Geet, your eyes are like my Geet, (holds her wrist) this mark on your wrist was on my Geet....(goes closer to her face..Geet gasps..) Aur these lips (whispers against her lips) are like my Geet...(he kisses her on the lips...Geet punches him on the chest....Maan breaks away) I know you are my wife...my Geet...

Mahi (crying): Just leave my home right now

Maan: Geet don't do this...I have realized my mistake...I have changed..I am sorry...please come back...your dad would be so happy when he finds out that you are alive

Mahi: Just leave...I don't know what you are talking about....

Maan (holds her hand and pulls her towards him): I know you are Geet...I promise I will fix everything between us....I have changed and I will prove it to you....(he caresses her face...) I can still see little bit of love you still have for me....

Mahi: Leave me...before I call the police....

Maan: Alright (he lets go of her....) I am going but I will show you that I have changed..and will win your love back....

Geet closes the door....
"how do they think I am dead? "How did Maan got my mangalsutre?" "Is this why he didn't search for me?" "Uss raat toh...."

Precap: Past: The truth behind Geet's "Murder"
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Posted: 14 years ago
i dont think his change at all his pretending to be wonder where is suraj i hope she tell him the truth faubulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan eise keise change hogaya...i don't think so....
ithni sick the vo hur ek rishthe me vishvas nehi hai tho us rishthe ka mathlab hi kya hai?
geet behuth zyada pain already peeli hai....so vo keise use vishwas kare?

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm is mann really changed or pretending only to win geet back well lets see u never know please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update simi............donno if maan really changed or not😕
lets see how he tries to win her

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