Together Forever~FF (PART FOUR ADDED) - Page 3

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I might be able to do it tomorrow!

good part panda...keep continuing...😃

Part 4

One week later it was Suhana's birthday, and she got a special surprise-Ishaan made breakfast for her! Usually it was mamaji or one of her sister in laws to make it. It was the first time Ishaan made her breakfast. "Happy Birthday to you" he sang. Suhana's then noticed the bag on the floor she forgot to pick up the previous night. "Ishaan look-"oo late, he tripped on her bag sending food flying everywhere, including on Suhana! "Is-haan!" she complained. Suddenly they both heard laughing from somewhere and were mortified to see the rest of the family at the door. They had seen the whole thing! Suhana was mortified. Ishaan said "Mamaji, you too?" "Now Ishaan, consider this as your payback for waking me up early and making me help cook the food-especially the eggs, which you burned a few times" she replied curtly. Which of course, made everyone laugh again. This time Suhana joined in, making Ishaan redder then he already was. He mumbled "Sorry" and run out of the room from embarrassment

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"This present is from me!" Suhana's niece said, as she thrust a present with red wrapping onto Suhana's hands. It was evening, and Suhana's party was at full swing. Ishaan was back to, but he made everyone swear no one would talk about this morning. Suhana opened the present and it was a brown bear identical to the white bear she had. "I love it!" she squealed as she hugged her niece. "The last present is from…Ishaan!" said Inder. Several people wolf-whistled making Ishaan blush again. Suhana gasped as she opened her present, it was the bracelet she wanted! "Thank-" Suddenly Suhana felt dizzy and light headed. "Are you ok?" Ishann asked concerned. "You look pale" The last thing Suhana saw was Ishaan's concerned face before she passed out.

(A CLIFFHANGER! 😲)

I shall have the next update my Friday...stay tuned!

Very nice...d last part was rly touching suhana's b'day n ishaan present for her bt suhana passed out no she cn't......she will b f9 at d end.

hey nice and interesting read👏.. very touching... continue writing

Originally posted by: aneesha_sahani

Very nice...d last part was rly touching suhana's b'day n ishaan present for her bt suhana passed out no she cn't......she will b f9 at d end.

You have to wait and see what happens...😉