Together Forever~FF (PART FOUR ADDED) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superbbb Writing Yaar👏........I will too try My Hand at FF in coming future and that too inspired by U Guyzzz😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good wiriting... Keep writing ..Waiting for 2nd part ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aare......................come...up.........................bhai..............👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good going,Waiting for 3rd part
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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panda...its very nice....and interesting...do continue..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very well written panda...keep writing waiting for part-3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rocking part dear..👏👏
this part was soo soo cute..

SuShaan are made for each other and Ishaan is the best hubby in this world..
i liked the ending part the most when he makes her blush
and Suhana gets annoyed..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3
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The next day, Ishaan left early for work. Suhana went to the kitchen after saying goodbye. "Be a good girl" he had said. She smiled as she made breakfast (Ishaan had already eaten something) thinking about Ishaan, she did not notice as her mother-in-law came in. "Hello" she said, startling Suhana and causing her to drop her egg shells onto the omelet she was making. "Oh, it's you mamaji..." Suhana said embarrassed. "I didn't mean to scare you-oh I ruined your egg" mamji (I forgot her name! lulz 😆) explained looking at the ruined eggs. "I will make them over" she continued. "No, you won't, I will" Suhana replied. Her mother in law looked at her, "You already have a lot on your plate, especially with your-" she stopped short. Then she bent down, seemingly to pick something up. It was only luck that Suhana was able to see her tears. "Mamaji" she beagn softly, but was interrupted by some yelling. The older women wiped her tears and with Suhana looked at the door. Suhana's niece came running in, followed by her sister in law. The niece wrapped her arms around Suhaha and looked up at her. "I don't want mommy to feed me, i want you to!" she said in her most innocent voice. Her mother looked at Suhaha apologetically, Suhana just smiled and said "It's ok""Auntie?" queried the niece, "Hmm?" mumbled Suhana. "I want to always be with you! Don't ever leave!" she said and planted her head unto her auntie's body. As soon as she said that tears came up to everyone in the room, due to the unfortunate event that happened in Suhana's childhood (See part one) Suhana insisted her niece won't be told of her brain tumor. "No, I will always be with you forever...." Suhana said as she gave her niece a tight hug. Her niece felt warm water drops on the back of her neck, but wasn't sure where it came from....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice ....................gud writing with thoughts....😃⭐️just keep it👍🏼

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