Harshini/Anita/Karthik's plan-Party

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi everyone.im new here n i thought id post my first topic with a fan fiction! WARNING- my hindi is really bad!!!

Anita Harshini and Karthiks plan to defame Kripa....

Angad n Mishti r standing 2gether flirting while kripa is watching them jealously. At tht moment Harshini cums there with a drink in her hand

Harshini-Kya hua Kripa?

Kripa (sighs) Kuch nahi Harshini, mein to bas jane wali thi.

Harshini-Kyun? Yeh party tho bahut acha hain-thori der ki liye rukh jao na.

Kripa-Plz harshini mujhe jaane do. (glances at angad n mishti) mujhe yaha nahi rehna..(turns to leave-harshini grabs her arm)

Harshini-acha agar tum jaana chahti ho to mein tumhe nahi rokhungi..lekin ek drink to peekar ja...plz..humari..dosti ki kasam.

Kripa-teek hain (drinks the drink-harshini smiles to herself)

Harshini-Yeh drink peekar tumne mera kaam aur bhi aasan kardiya hain kripa.

Kripa-kya?

harshini-uh..kuch nahi. (walks to the other side of the pool n watches kripa slyly. Kripa begins to feel dizzy and grabs her head. Harshini smiles and nodds to karthik who goes to a dodgy lukin boy n whispers sumink in his ear. the boy smiles

boy-aap fikar muth ki jiya-aapka kham ho jayega.

the boy wanders up to kripa and slips his arm around his waist. everything is blurry and the boy takes kripa inside the house.

just then karthik phones sum1 and says.."its time"

Anita suddenly runs outside the house n creates a scene in front of everyone.

damini n naina-kya hua?

anita-woh mein bathroom se aarahithi or meine kisi ki aawaz suni bedroom seh. mujhe lagtha hain ki koi musibat mein hai. aap log chaliye mere saath.

Anita leads everyone inside the house

MEANWHILE...

The boy takes kripa into the room and carefully puts her on the bed. he unbuttons his shirt and pulls a lipstick matching kkripas out of his pocket. he carefully applies it to his chest. kripa is still trying to c where she is. she looks around and sees the boys face. she gets up shocked

kripa-tum kaun ho?

the boy recieves a fone call. he listens, hangs up n without ne warning he hugs her.

Just then Anita and co. cum into the room 2 c kripa n the boy hugging on the bed. he turns around and reveals his open shirt with kripa's lipstick stains. kripa realises wot happened n staggers to angad.

kripa-angad mein...

angad looks at her. he smiles..turns around and then gives kripa a backhand! everyone is shocked..cept naina/harshini/karthik n anita who all smile...

ok i kno ur all prolly thinking tht itz really bad n most of u prolly neva understood my hindi!!

-Divya xx

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wells it just mind blowing please do continue it and yah my name is also divya
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lol we hav the same name-thanx so much-glad u liked it!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinky21

thats awesome...coolio..gr8 job!

Thanx so much Dinky!!!!! (i added the slap bit just 4 u!! lol)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Great job......you are making me cry............poor Kripa!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanx guyz! i feel so welcome!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinky21



awwwwwwwww!!! i love u awready!!!! heheheh!!! so shweeet tat part i enjoyed teh most!!!! 😆 😆 😳

👍🏼 lol (now u can just pray it'll cum tru!!)😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great job divya keep it going
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow man your story is mind-blowing.who cares tht your hindi is bad we all don care.


right guyz 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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im waiting when are u gone continue jaldi karo please please

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