lyrics ki jabani teri meri kahani plzread updated

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Posted: 14 years ago
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The words in the brackets are the thought or song playing in characters mind with changed lyrics

so the song ghotala begins
The sun is getting calm , spreading its golden lining all ovr the sky making the night dark
Abhay and piya are lost lost in each other unaware of whats happening around in the dark woods,coming closer and closer
Abhay :(tu mere kareeb main tere kareeb
iss baat ka vampirish jungle gawah)
Piya:(o jara jara kiss me kiss me
o jara jara touch me touch me
o jara jara hold me hold me
tere kiss kre liye sanam
hostel se jungle tak aaye hum)
Their lips almost touched but as good things dont come up so easily,Abhay came into senses
Abhay- Piya what are you doing
(nahi nahi abhi nahi
director ke script
changs karne tak ka intezaar)
Piya:main kya kar rahi hoon Abhay
(laage laage laaj mohe saiyaan
dil me jo baat hai kaise bataoon tujhko)
mujhe batao baat kya hai (if nothing then
come chiggy wiggy with me boy)
Abhay:leave me alone Piya
(becoz, roop tera mastana
pyaar mera deewana
hamare romance ko sid ki
nazar na lag jaaye)
Piya:main tumhari property nahi hoon Abhay
jise tum jaise chaho waise control karo
(dil chahe teri baat maanu phir sochu
main teri gulaam to nahi)
Piya eagerly waits for Abhays response but he remains silent like the deep ocean,hiding some stories of past,deep inside his dead heart which is back just like a cyvclone ready to destroy everything associated with him
and the song plays in background
(aankhon ke darmiyaan sawaal jawaab chal rahe hain
jane kya hoga ab
khamosi bani jabaan)
Abhay :(kaise Piya se main kahoon ki
kitna pyaar hai
hotho ko intezaar
lub bekarar hai
par karun to karun kya
kiss ka script nahi tyaar hai)
on getting no response piya leaves in frustration
😡😡😡
Abhay sings this song as Piya disappeared from his eyesight
chaand sifarish jo karta hamari
deta wo tumko bata
sid ke darr ko mita kar
dunga main tumko bata
zid hai ab tumko batana
hona hai tujhme fanna
hey friends this is my first try to write something . SO IF YOU LIKE IT PRESS LIKE BUTTON AND DO COMMENT YOUR VIEWS.
IF YOU LIKE IT
I WILL UPDATE THE OTHER PARTS LATER
EAGERLY WAITING FOR YOUR VIEWS.
PLZ DO COMMENT
link of the updated part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMGGG awesome kya imagination hai !!!! 👏 😃
I like this part

Abhay :(tu mere kareeb main tere kareeb
iss baat ka vampirish jungle gawah)
Piya:(o jara jara kiss me kiss me
o jara jara touch me touch me
o jara jara hold me hold me
tere kiss kre liye sanam
hostel se jungle tak aaye hum

OMGG soo funny !! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PKYEK-Abhiya

OMGGG awesome kya imagination hai !!!! 👏 😃

I like this part

Abhay :(tu mere kareeb main tere kareeb
iss baat ka vampirish jungle gawah)
Piya:(o jara jara kiss me kiss me
o jara jara touch me touch me
o jara jara hold me hold me
tere kiss kre liye sanam
hostel se jungle tak aaye hum

OMGG soo funny !! 🤣

thanks for replying it was my first try
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice and hilarious 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sur001

thanks for replying it was my first try


Ohh you are welcome !!! 😆
It is your first try ??? Because tt's a good start 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohhhhh my GOD....
its so funny...
how do u cum up wid these ideas.... it was SUPERB....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very sweet dear..I am a big fan of songs & dedications..But you have added fun to it..Keep it up..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Very sweet dear..I am a big fan of songs & dedications..But you have added fun to it..Keep it up..!!

Thanks alot 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: missglam

ohhhhh my GOD....

its so funny...
how do u cum up wid these ideas.... it was SUPERB....

long story in short words....... bcoz of you all
as everyone is supportive here
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wowww, very good , really cute n funny type , update soon.

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