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Posted: 14 years ago
!!!!!!!WAITING FOR UR UPDATE !!!!!!!
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Hey guys: Sorry to keep you guys waiting..here is the next part...hope you guys like it 😆😆
Enjoy
Chapter 5
Past:
Maan watched Geet and Rohit leave her house...he burned with anger and jealousy as he saw Geet running behind Rahul with anger while Rohit is laughing at her "Geet am sorry but you shouldn't cook..that egg of yours was so bad" Geet finally stopped running and leaned against his car..Rohit comes up to her and puts his arm around Geet while apologizing...they both looked at each other and started laughing....he wanted to kill Rohit for being this close to her.....he started the car as soon as Geet left her house...he went to Khurana Contructions afterward..as soon as he entered the office everyone stood up (similar to the way he entered Geet show) he walked past them ignoring their presence...behind him his assistant Sasha Kapoor followed him telling him today's agenda followed by his accountant Adi...everyone feared him and dared not to speak anything out of context....he went in his cabin angry....
Maan: Sasha I want you to cancel all my meetings for today and arrange my meeting with Mr. Ranjit Handa

Sasha: But Sir

Maan (shouted): I didn't ask for any excuse do as I say...

Sasha (in fear): yes Sir...

Maan: Good you two may leave...Sasha only come back to my cabin after you have arranged my meeting with Ranjit Handa...ohh and hold all my calls

Sasha: Yes Sir (They both hurriedly left his cabin)

Maan sits back in his chair and closes his eyes..he sees Geet with smile...there was something about her that made him crazy...her smile, her talks and her innocence...he wanted her more than anything no matter what..for the very first time he ever felt like that about someone...Defeat was not in his dictionary and knew many ways to achieve what he wants...his thoughts were interrupted by a knock on his cabin door...
Sasha: May I come in Sir

Maan: What is it! (he shouted)

Sasha: Well Si Si Sir...

Maan: Go on! I don't have all day to listen to you

Sasha: I had called Mr. Ranjit Handa and he left for home already as he decided to work from home today

Maan: hmm alright you may leave..."Even better" he smiled and left his office..no one dared to ask him any questions...he got in his car and drove to Geet's house...he rang the door bell...
Ramu Kaka: How can I help you?

Maan: I am here to meet Mr. Handa...tell him Maan Singh Khurana is here

Ramu Kaka: ummm sure..please come in (Maan sat down on the sofas with attitude and arrogance)

Ranjit: Mr. Khurana what brings you here all of a sudden? I thought we talked about this yesterday?

Maan (stood up): Please call me Maan..you are older than me...I actually came to talk to you about something important

Ranjit (was taken back with his new attitude): umm Maan...we can talk upstairs in my office....(both went upstairs)

Maan (sits on a sofa chair): Actually I wanted to ask your daughter hand in marriage Geet...

Ranjit (shocked): What!

Maan: I don't have any elder in my household to speak to you about this matter..so I am here myself (puts his one leg on top of the other and sits back relaxed..looking into eyes)

Ranjit (Gets up from his chair): What makes you think I will give my daughter Geet in your hand?

Maan (replies calmly): Well I am successful, quiet handsome, I own many different successful companies and I don't lack anything in my life that you should worry about

Ranjit: I don't know who you think you are but..

Maan (interrupts him): I like your daughter very much you should be lucky that your daughter is going to marry a rich business man

Ranjit: Is this a way to ask for girls' hand in marriage? (angry)

Maan: I am only stating some facts..I don't find anything wrong in how I am saying it...

Ranjit (shouts): Leave right now...

Maan (gets angry): Mr. Handa this company of yours I could buy it within minutes and leave you with nothing...

Ranjit: Are you threatening me?

Maan: Call it whatever you want...

Ranjit: Listen (there was a knock on his office door..he goes and opens the door and finds Geet standing there) Geet what are you doing here?

Geet: Papa I wanted to tell you that I am ready to marry him

Ranjit: But beta

Geet: Papa I know woh mujhe hamesha khush rakhege

Maan (smiled): Well than I will let you know the wedding date...I should take your leave...see you soon (Maan left the house)

Ranjit (angry): Geet are you crazy? Do you know what you just said?

Geet: Papa I am not a kid..I don't want to see you on the road..you have worked so hard to build your business and besides I have Ma (stops from saying his name) him in the morning he is a nice person..

Ranjit: Listen to me Geet...(he makes her sit on the chair) Maan is different from most guys (she looks at him) you have yet to experience the real world...not everyone is like me and your friends Rohit and Meera...I have worked with Maan and I have personally saw him how he works and how he behaves with others...you are very timid and always get scared easily because you never saw the outside world..(he sighs) it is my fault in a way that I always confined you to just home and college..you don't know that people can be very different..the way you are..I know you will never be able to speak up against anyone not even Ramu Kaka...

Geet: Papa I met him in the morning..he is really nice...of course when dealing with business you have to be tough...

Ranjit (holds her hand) Don't make any decisions in haste..It is not too late..I will talk to Maan and tell him that you said no...

Geet: Papa no..I have decided already...(She leaves the office and goes to her room..she lies on the bed and cries the whole day)
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The next day...Geet comes down for her breakfast...she knew her dad might be still angry with her from yesterday but she had no choice..she couldn't see her dad on the road for everything he worked hard for...she sat on the table thinking about what her tomorrow might hold...she didn't even realize when the door bell rang...ramu kaka went to get the door...Maan stood there...he came inside and saw Geet sitting at her table..he went up to her...Geet felt someone's presence right next to her..she looked up and saw Maan smiling at her...she dropped the food on the table and stood up
Geet: Ji papa ghar pe nahi hai (with her head down)

Maan: I came here to meet you Geet...I will drop you off to college

Geet: umm you don't have to...my driver can drop me off

Maan: No need...you are my responsability from now on and I don't ignore my responsibilities....

Geet (looks down): ji..I will get my bag...(she went upstairs to get her back...she felt nervous of going with him by herself especially when she doesn't know anything about him..she comes down after a while..Maan smiles at her as both of them make their way to the car)

Maan: Geet you don't have to be nervous around me....I want us to get to know each other better...(Geet smiled at him feeling better after hearing him say that)

Geet: Ji

Maan: So tell me your hobbies, your interests, and about your friends

Geet: My hobbies are reading...I love reading books especially thriller types...currently I am studying Business Management...and my two best friends are Rohit and Meera

Maan (only caught Rohits name): Rohit?

Geet: Yeah he is so lazy..I always end up helping him when it comes to exams...(laughs) you should meet him..he is so nice and sweet...you only after every exam he takes me and Meera for treats...

Maan: Hmmm (grips the steering wheel hard and tries to pay attention ahead)

Geet: Aur aap?

Maan (looks at her): me? Just work and nothing else since I live by myself..I don't have to worry about anything else.

Geet: Ohh am sorry

Maan: Don't be..I won't be alone soon (looks at her..Geet looks down while blushing) Well your college came...

Geet: Thanx..(she gets out of the car...)

Maan (leans toward the passenger side): Listen I want to take you out to dinner...

Geet: woh I don't know if I can come...

Maan: Why?

Geet: After college I usually hang out with my friends and plus my mid-exams are coming up I would need to go home and study

Maan: Alright cancel your plans with your friends and I will bring you home on time so that you can study

Geet: But ji woh

Maan (gets out of his car and stands in front of Geet..she moves back a little seeing him standing this close to her): But nothing...when are you done with your classes? (Telling her rather than asking)

Geet (looks down): at 5

Maan: Alright I will pick you up at 5 from here....(Telling her rather than asking) I will wait for you (Geet nods her head) now go in before you are late...(he saw her walking in college...he was about to leave when he saw Rohit coming from behind Geet and scares her..she runs after him...he drives off after seeing that upset and angry)

Precap: Past: Please mera haath choriye sab dekh rahe hai...
Well Maan certently asked for Geet's hand in his own style 😆😆 I Don't know if you guys came across such unsual proposal hehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update...well abt the style of proposal he s "MAAN SINGH KURANA" vo kuch bi kar saktha hai.....he seems to be more possessive abt geet....
Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update simi😳😳😳
maan does everything in his style😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved it maan cant stand anyone close to geet and poor her he told her to cancel meeting with her friends update soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by palak13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nicely written update! Wel tat was an unusual robotic proposal, ha! Ha! Ha! But it suits hs character so well. He's too possessive n scary, hun!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Definitely a different proposal ;-) Arrogant and full of himself....it would do well to see Geet bring him down hehe :-)
Update the next chapter soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved the update... what a possessive and controllable MSK
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow simi tht was Great..and stick to flashback till u tell us wht happned..i am gonna kill u otherwise..
Hay babaji jo ladka simi ko dekhne aaye woh bhi aise hi propose kare...imagine..
Main hoon XYZ and i am asking ur daughers hand in mrriage..
here dad says yes..
xyz: theek hai aap kal tayaar raheyaga main baraat lekar aa jaoonga..🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

wow simi tht was Great..and stick to flashback till u tell us wht happned..i am gonna kill u otherwise..

Hay babaji jo ladka simi ko dekhne aaye woh bhi aise hi propose kare...imagine..
Main hoon XYZ and i am asking ur daughers hand in mrriage..
here dad says yes..
xyz: theek hai aap kal tayaar raheyaga main baraat lekar aa jaoonga..🤣

ahhaha Shadi toh abhi ddoooorrrrr ki baath hai 😆😆
But gotta ttell you it is very unusal proposal 😆😆😆

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