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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys! Thank you for your wonderful comments...everything will unveil slowly about Geet's past...and YES Suraj does like Mahi (Geet) 😆😆😆 but let's see what happens hehehe
Ohh and don't worry if the chapter is too short...in time the updates will get longer once I figure out where I want to take this story 😆
Enjoy!
Chapter 3
Flashback:

Geet was hanging out with her friends when a phone call came:
Geet: Hello papa...kya hua?

Rajiv: Geet aaj tum kitne baaje aah rahi ho?

Geet: shayd main 9 bajje tak ghar par hoongi

Rajiv: Alright beta..ohh haan I am having a guest over remember the business tycoon I was telling you about..he is coming over tonight

Geet: magar aap toh usse pasand nahi karte hai toh aab kaya hua?

Rajiv: haan main nahi karta magar mujhe laga ki agar main use ghar boolakar theek tara se baat karoon toh shayid woh meri baat sunle

Geet: hmm alright dad main aapse ghar aakar baat karoongi

Rajiv: Alright beta..bye..don't be late

Geet: Alright dad..love you

Rajiv: love you too betae

Rohit: Geet come on how long are you going to be on the phone

Geet: Shut up Rohit...waise you should be talking nicely to me

Rohit: For what?

Geet: I helped you with your exams..in fact you should owe me and Meera some treats..right Meera?

Meera: Of course...I don't even know why we help him all the time

Rohit (puts his arms around both girls): Because you guys won't last a day if I am not with you guys and brighten up your dull lives

Meera: Shut up....in fact it should be other way around..if we weren't with you than

Geet (completed): Than you would have been a lost soul wandering around...anyway where are our treats?

Rohit: How about I give you treats some other time...that should give you both enough time to lose some weight..(both gasps) seriously, I have spoiled you guys with treats..Meera look at your stomach it is coming out and you Geet your cheeks are getting so big and puffy...(stare at him shocked) just think I am helping you guys..if I give you guys another treat than no guys will come near you both....I am helping you like a good friend I am...well than lets go and hang out we don't have all night...(Geet and Meera looked at him with anger)

Meera: My stomach is coming out huh?

Geet: I have big puffy cheeks huh?

Rohit (walking back): Guys I am telling you the truth so that you guys can work on your flaws..

Geet: You know what Meera...he is right

Meera: He is?

Geet: Yeah since he helped us by letting us know our flaws we should be good friends and let him know his flaws as well (winked at her)

Rohit: What flaws do I have? (looks in the mirror) Girls die for me

Meera: Yeah am sure they do that is why you are still single (laughs)

Geet: Anyway...Rohit hmm (looks at him from top to bottom) your height...you are short .no girl wants a short guy

Meera: Your face..you have a crooked nose which will scare any girls

Geet: You need to build some muscles...you know Salman Khan type...a girl likes a guy when they have nice and tanned body

Meera: Yeah and

Rohit: Ok ok stop you guys! Alright you guys won..I am sorry for saying..now you guys want treats or not

Geet (and Meera high-fived each other): yeh hui na baath

Meera: Don't mess with us

Rohit: Alright ladies lets go (he puts his arm around them and start walking to ice cream shop) did you guys really mean all those stuff about me (Geet and Meera laughed and ran to the shop) Guys tell me! (ran after them)
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Geet came home around 10:00 pm...she hoped that her dad won't be mad at her...she went straight to her kitchen...
Geet: kaka papa kaha hai?

Kaka: woh apne study mein hai apne guest ke saath kuch discuss kar rahe hai

Geet (shocked): abhi tak?

Kaka: haan woh bahut ziddi hai..maan nahi raha

Geet: hmm alright kahane ko kya hai aaj? Bahut bhook lagi hai

Kaka (laughed): maine kaas tumhare liye kheer aur puri chole bacha kar rakhe hai...

Geet: kaka you are the best

Kaka (confused): yeh besht kya hai? (pronounced best wrong)

Geet (laughed): iska matalb hai ki aap bahut aache hai..aab aap jaaye aur sojaye main kahana khud garam karke kahloongi..good night

Kaka: alright beitiya

Geet heated the food and quickly carried her plate outside to the dinning room table...she went to her bag and took out her favorite book she usually reads whenever she gets time..
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Meanwhile in her dad's study room

Rajiv: Mr. Khurana hum agle teen gante se wahi same baat repeat kar rahe hai...why don't you understand that I cannot give you of what you are asking I will be left with nothing...

Maan: joh aap mujhe offer kar rahe hai woh mujhe nahi pasand..joh main chata hoon wohi mujhe chahiye...

Rajiv: main aapko pura control nahi de sakta...I can only offer 50% that should be enough...

Maan (takes a sip of the wine): 50% percent is not good enough...in fact you should be lucky enough to work with Khurana Constructions...

Rajiv (angry): itna ghamand aacha nahi hai Mr. Khurana

Maan (gets up calmly): Alright it was nice meeting you Mr. Handa...aap nahi jante aapne kis ko na kaha hai...I will take your leave..good night (he smirks)

Rajiv (angry): Good night..am sure you know where the door is at..

Maan (smiles): Will do..good night

Maan makes his way down...suddenly he stopped when he saw a girl sitting at a dinning table..eating and reading a book with dim lights on...he found himself staring at her beauty..he smiled looking at the way she was eating and changing her face expression while reading...her smile was so magnificent...he didn't know how long he has been standing there seeing her...he suddenly came out of the trance after hearing his phone...Geet turned to see where the noise was coming from...she saw a guy leaving her house...she was about to get up when she saw her father coming down

Rajiv: Geet beta tum abhi soye nahi? (Maan heard her name before going... "Geet..hmm nice name" he smiled and left)

Geet: Woh actually papa main apni book parte parte pata nahi chala time kaha chala gaya...

Rajiv: maine kitni baar kaha hai tumhe yeh aachi addat nahi hai..go and sleep now

Geet: Alright papa good night...

End Flashback!
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Geet POV:

Maine aaj Suraj ko uske sawal ka jawab doongi..after a long time I am felling so happy..
I have every right to be happy as well...he wouldn't find me anyways...It has been so many years....magar main apna dil Suraj ko puri tarah nahi de sakti...pata nahi kyun magar Maanmagar main koshish zaroor karoongi...I don't know how he will react..I know I will be happy with him...he will never hurt me...I just hope babaji protects me and Suraj

Magar kya mujhe Suraj ko batana chahiye ki main Mahi nahi par Geet hoon?

Tears starts to roll down her eyes...my whole identity, my father and my friends were separated from me...nahi main Suraj ko kuch nahi baatongi...woh insaan mera past tha...aab woh meri zindagi main kabhi nahi aayega...

Geet POV ends

Precap: Past: Maan and Geet Meet
Present: Suraj and Mahi moment
If you have read my other fan fics....My character of Maan is different than the show...he is sarcastic, funny, down to earth, don't hate girls and is very protective of his family but at the same time serious about work...
Till I update next...any guesses on Maan's character in this fan fic...based on what you read??? 😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is so interesting!!!!!
so, geet has been hiding from maan for 4 years,
wen is maan going to show up in present and tell suraj to back off!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
All I can gather from this update is that Maan is Geet's past ! But what has he done to hurt her so much, of course won't be revealed so soon ! 😉
Edited by Dhara_s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the update...
i think maan here is controlling & gets what he wants.. i guess he asked to get married to geet as well but maybe she refused & ran away 😕 ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I think he kinda rude, arrogant, obsessive lover in dis fanfic...... But i think geet loves him dats y she said she can't love suraj wid whole heart but wat went wrong??????
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet is hiding from maan................great update
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting!
why wz she separated from her family n freinds.......something to do with maan right?!
really interesting!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yet another awesome FF by u Simi...i like it! No actually i love it!!! Cant wait to see how ur gonna unfold this and i really wanna kno wat Geet's past is...so plz continue soon!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update............i think maan is kinda rude and arrogant and gets wat he wants if not might take it by hook r crook.............
i just hope maan comes back in geet's present as well and their diff gets sorted..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it but im really confused that what did maan do to geet

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