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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful OS Fiza!

it was so sweet 😳
thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wow wow
aussum os
loved it...
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza

it was such a cute os

dumbo nupur n naughty mayank

so cute

n double meaning.......lol

I was like ROFLing

plzz do write part 2

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
awesome
fantastic
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG it ws sooooo beautiful fiza...Everything ws there, the nokjhok, cuteness, love, romance everything i loved it to the core !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

THNKU SO MUCH EVRY 1 FOR UR COMMENT AT LAST OS..

sorry i coulnt find time to rply to u all...though i even reserved ths for it 😭
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thodi se bewafi

I am alone but I happy'more over I am content in living with my self'laught..dnt laugh I am serious'I am ..i am living a life which I demanded. I am Nupur married n now almost divorced, just need to sign papers he have sended.. thn y u haven't yet'I'll soon'...how soon'cant u just shut up..

Marriage for a women is the most beautiful bond only if the person u are married to consider u as a human .

I was married to a practically perfect person, but emotionally complete imperfect. Mayank a very well settle , handsum, egoistic, self centered and a leader. Rather an emperor who just want to conquer brains nt hearts, body nt soul.

My life was all surrounded with his nagging n control

Don't do ths, don't o tht

Don't wear ths ,dont go out with thm,,,aaaaaaaaaaaaah,,,I was feeling suffocated 'locked inside a prison

Don't go in parites after 9..u know I dnt like it

y'if he cant enjoy ..have no social life..frnds..ahh'not a single one..thn y shud I don't go out on weekends'

don't wear anything except cultural dress

orthodox'I tell u

cant u make ur choices right'cant even pick right frnds

see whos talking ..who himself doesn't have a frnd'.

U don't have time for any1

U are evn no close to even my success

Ahh 'I so hate him..is there was anything he liked about my self. I was just sick.

Home was a place where I can never find peace at. But office was heaven for me. I use to enjoy live n have loads of fun. I have gr8 frnds there..one of them was Adi'

Adhiraj. Was my bst frnd, a companion whom I found peace with, he was a stud but always respected me. He came as a collogue and soon we become bst frnd. He to was alone like me.

I use to share my all pains with him but he always use to help me ..made me understand to try n fix this marriage.

Nupur: woh pagal hogaya hai..ab us ko mera ghar se nikalna bhi bora lagta hai..

Adi: oho..he was missing u n cares for u ..just because tht ..

Nupur: no he just want 'k mein us ki her baat mano..just like a stupid Indian wife.

He use to take care of myself.. always appreciated me when I get firmed at my point of views, always supported me whn I ask for my freedom

Adi: u look so hot in western outfits'.do wear them often

Nupur: thank god..atleast sum1 has a taste

Adi: hey sweety ..i wonder how ur huby resist u ..he is soo lucky'wink n left frm there

Nupur: n im so unlucky

Nupur: adi im fed up this relation now

Adi: dkho Nupur..u now need to take firm decision'.agar tumhai yeah risht itni takleef day rah hai tu thor doo..

Nupur: wht

Adi: ya c..u don't love him..tumhain bs uski adat hogai hai..islyan ur living with this dragged relation aur bs'.he puts hs hand over her to wch she was taken a back..n thn ur nt alone dear'I am with u ..we'll strt a new life

Nupur: wht ru saying

Adi: im saying right..just trust me..follow ur heart..once jan

Nupur: thinked abit 'I think ur right..i shud take a decion

Adi: yes ur..my home is witing for it princes to cum'.seductivly I am waitng ..just go n tell him tht u don't need him now

Mayank:

Throwing these stones in the lake , I wish sum can return back on my face to. Atleast sum one punish me physically for wht I have done. From past sum moth I wasn't able to realize wht was my mistake'why she is going away frm me. We always have arguments who doenst, but than I always use to compensate either by going out at her favt place aur by slightly flirting with her'her blush always made me go mad.

But than tht when u opend up n say everything ..i hate myself'I love her..n ths is the only emotion left inside me after she left me'I cant hate her..no I don't'.i made her life hell..i was living n illusion, hallucinating her as the most happy person with me..but liitle I know she was living in hell

Mayank: raat buhat horahi hai Nupur..maat jao bahar

Nupur: tum her baat mein mjhy tokhty ho ..bs mayank'agar meray sath club ja nhi saktay tu kab as kam mera mood tu spoil na ker'if u cant b happy with my success'ahh ..actually ur jealous n scared of my success

Mayank: laughed pit fully..jelous ..of ur success..Ms Nupur ..ur no where evn close to my success..n I asking u nt to leave..as city situation is nt so safe..

Nupur: plz stop showing ur fake affection

I said tht because I cared for her, I order her in rude tone hoping today maybe she'll listen to it but no she doesn't. I don't went to night club , I cant , iam asthmatic..tht environment is suffocated n I just don't want to spoil her evenings. I am jelous..ah'u forget wife tht I was the first person who gave u the present even when ur promotion letter wasn't issue..i so knew u can do it..

The only thing I was wrong at tht u understand me n I have no need to explain things to u ..but I was wrong'

Mayank: sari k elwa kuch mat wear kiya kero

Nuppur: why'get sum thought mr. sharam..i m nt ur servant tht I'll wear do whtever u want..is there anything u liked abt me'

She left n I hate myself..i just love her in saries..i m soory I so wanna say'but I couldn't

Maynk: adi acha larka nhi hai..woh sirf tum ko use ker raha hai..bs..

Nupr: woh acha larke nhi hai..aur tum' tum itny saalo se jo mjhy use ker rahy hoo'.did u have evr considered me more thn sumthing like ur keep'did u'.mera bahar jana tumhain pasand nhi'western kapray behana pasand nhi'meray doost pasand nhi ..meri job pasand nhi..kyun'aur aj jab meray pass koi hai jo mjhy meri zinadagi meri tarah jenay dayta hai tu..tum ko insecurity ho rahi hai'.kyun' kyun k tum ko mjhy se bari pagal tu milay gi nhi'.kabhi pyar se baat tak nhi ke mjhy se'khabi koi appreciation ..khabhi koi fikar'tumhain itna sa bhi farq parta hai meray honay na honay se'.,mjhy pls meri zindagi jeenay do

Mayank: kya tum apni zinadagi meray sath nhi je sakti

Nupur: nhi

Mayank: thik hai..tum azad ho ..jo chaho ker sakti ho'.

Nupur: tumhain lagta hai k mein tumhari permission k wait ker rahi thi

Mayank: yeah ghar tum chor ker ja rahi hoo..is ghar ny tumhain nhi chor..jab chaho yha loot sakti hai

Nupur: asa tu tum sochna bhi nhi k mein phir looto gi

Saying tht she left..i still rember tht day.. iwas just watching her going in our room taking her things..wearing a lemon shaffon sari'I gifted her..but she didn't know..i put it in her wardrobes to gave her a surprise but she did notice as she have hundreds of such'.but that doesn't matter ..she wore it tht does..

She said so much I just kept listening numb..i made her life hell'such hell tht she found peace in adi'protected at his house..adi who even she knows have slept with god knows how many'but yes he has a charm'now how to express'can make life like a fantasy ..tht I cant

I didn't stop her ..first I was numb to hear wht she said..second I didn't want to'I have no right '.i didn't deserve her'though I need her terrible. I know my life will change in to hell without her'but tht would be small punishment for wht I made her life

Nupur:

I left my home n went to adi's house..as my parent even did excepted me..i knew he must have called them n told everything'

We started a new life..he treated me as princes..i stil remebr the way he decorated the house when I first entered..he welcum me with open arms'.

Though I was taken back whn he got intimate to me..but whn he said he loves me..my all apprehensions vanished'I felt pleasur but never let him cross his limit..though he was modern n felt it wasn't wrong

But things started to change when he try to get close to me ..extra close'I don't know y I was nt comfortable at his touch though I never felt like ths with Mayank'I asked him to get married but he refused..postponed it with a reson or other

I was out of city for sum work..n return 2days before to give him a surprise..n he gave me surprise when I found him on bed with sum1 from our office..

N to my biggest surprise he wasn't ashamed of it rather he answered me

If u can left ur husband for ur desire why I cant get them fullfil from sum1 else..when ur nt ready to give urself to me'

The day I realize wht I am ..a flith a peace of sh***t'

I was packing my begs ..he was still busy'. busy complete his desires..whn bell rung n a received a parcel..with sum stamp papers..one of wch was divorce..n a letter

"I knew I could'nt gave you everything but ths house belong to you. U made sum wall in to wht I felt heaven on earth..it was always ur s n will remain urs'I would feel sum burden less if u just except it'u will find me nowhere..i promise no where even close to ur life'I m soory for making ur life hell"

Mayank

I droped myself on ground.. iam flith, dirt..wht iwas doing. I man made a fool out of me. Destroyed my life. He didn't'. I let him do so..i hate myself no matter how long i stand under water..i cant remove the dirt off me'wht if I did'nt slept with him..i allowed him to touch me where ever how ever he wants'

I left my husband for ntthing special..my fredon though he never stop me of anything tht I found indifferent behaviour of his'.

My ego and my demand of being a leader at my house

I have no choice left I m living at the house wch use to b our home..and as he promise he is no where near my life

Hazar Rahein Mur k dekhi Kahin se Koi Saada na aai

Mayank:

I know he left her..n she is living alone in our house..thank God alteast she listen listen to me once..

I didn't return in her life '.nt because I haven't forgive her..she wasn't at fault'because I could'nt forgave myself'.i made her life hell..in wch she cant breath n rushed towards a man ..without even thinking once abt her life'.

I have no right on her..i wish she can find sum1 truly deserving her..who makes her life like heaven..i am living alone..i deserve it'I cant make sum1 else suffer agin ..if even try to get another relation ..i just cant I love her..i have beautiful memorized of ours..

jahaa se tum mod mud gaye the, ye mod ab bhee wahee pade hai

hum apane pairon mein jaane kitane, bhanwar lapete huye? khade hai

our togetherness, our fights, our love, ur smile, ur frowns, u sleeping near me with ur hand covering ur eyes'frowning on a slightest beam of sunlight'.. like n angle bestowed in my life..

I know u didn't find me worthy of forgiveness. Else u have just gave me a cal..i am at the most obvious place..but than who is tht stupid to return to person who has spoiled ur life's 5 years'.who want to repeat the same mistake'but I am changed now'I am changed now ..sachi ''just if once I would have given a chance'.i would have made it work.i wouldn't have stoped u, argued with u'even if u want will say nthing infront of u'just u infront of my sight was enough fro me to live'.i wish u can hear'I would given everything to make it just the way u want

tumhe ye jid thee ke hum bulaate, humei ye? ummeed wo pukaare

hai naam hothhon pe ab bhee lekin aawaaj mein pad gayee daraare

Nupur

I knew where u r'.you r always stupid'do obivous things ..no surprise no excitements'but I cant ask u to cum back..u don't deaserve a flith to live ur life with ..whn ur the most purest. At times ur blessd with eveythng 'but ur too blind in ur own way of making life the way u want'n thn evrythng just get destroyed'.all u have is a regret'sum guilts..a pitful..unblesd life

Hazar Rahein mur k dekhi khin se koi saad na aai

Bari wafa se nibhai tum ny humari thori se bewafai

PART 2

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fizaa it was awsome........
but too sad yar.......both were rite to their decisions but last decision made by nupue was incorrect........😭
it was touchy.....life sumtimes takes u to tht place frm where u cant move back although u want it but u cant...........😭

loved it......👏

u made me ........

love u .....




Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fizaaaaaaaaaa
its not fair
itna sad So
plz dont do this with my mayur
i want a happy ending of this OS
so make a sequel of it
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome os fiza.....both were right in their own places but nupur would not have been stayed in adhiraj's house.....

it was a realistic one dear..loved it though the os was a sad one...............
pls do write more mayur os dear................
Edited by achoose - 14 years ago

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