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scorpiobhavika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: mrs.msk
hey thanx so much but I don't write the fan fic "a drink" that is someone else 😳

u dont !! shit

i.. im soo sorry ...gawd, this is embarassing

my apologies for putting u into a spot.. just forget about everything, okay

i love ur writing ..keep up the good work :)

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

add me to ur pm list n do continue

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: scorpiobhavika

u dont !! shit

i.. im soo sorry ...gawd, this is embarassing

my apologies for putting u into a spot.. just forget about everything, okay

i love ur writing ..keep up the good work :)

haha don't be sorry..I myself read so many fan fics that I get confused

no problem..I understand...fan fics are so addictive hehe

thanx so much..

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Interesting!!!

The prologue and the first part has made me so damn curious!

Update soon😳

And CYSF too😛

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Wow another FF Congratz
Love all Ur other FFz and dis 1 🥳 🥳
Cont soon Xx...

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namitasin

@namitasin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Lved the first part do continue soon.

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Hey guys: Wow thanx so much for your wonderful replies...Geet's past will be revelaed little by little ehhee until than enjoy! BTW Suraj is quiet young and not old 😆😆😆😆

Enjoy

Chapter 2

Suraj Pov:
He is droping Mahi home after work as usual..he glaces towards Mahi (Geet) who was sitting their quietly not talking as expected...I know there is something that constantly bothers her but what? Every time I ask her she always stalls the topic. In the time I have known her she has been so quiet and reserved but there is something about her that made me attracted to her..I love her and when I proposed her she didn't say yes or no to me..I don't know what to make out of that. I accept her no matter what..I don't care about her past or anything..I only want her...

The house arrived..
Suraj: Mahi I don't know what is it that you are always thinking about but sometimes in life you have to move on from your past if you want to live in the present

Mahi: I know Suraj

Suraj: Listen Mahi I want to marry you (she tried to interrupt) no listen to what I have to say..I promise you I will always keep you happy no matter what but I want to understand you completely and I want you to understand me and that won't happen unless you can trust me

Mahi (keeps her head down): Suraj I promise one day I will tell you everything..I don't want to say yes until I tell you the truth but (looks down)

Suraj (puts her hand on top of Mahi's hand): but what Mahi you can say it...

Mahi: But I am scared that one day this relation will also come to an end

Suraj confused: What do you mean?

Mahi (closes her eye in pain): Suraj I will tell you one day when I am ready

Suraj sighs: Alright Mahi whenever you are ready

Mahi: I have to go now

Suraj: Alright good night Mahi

Mahi smiled at him: Good night Suraj

Suraj: wow a smile...you look nice when you smile keep it that way

Mahi smiled: bye

Suraj: bye

Geet went inside her house...she looked around her small house that she called home...Suraj's conversation replayed in her head... "maybe Suraj is right..I need to move on..its been four years since..." She came out of her thoughts..quietly she ate dinner and went to sleep taking her sleeping pills hoping that the nightmares don't come back
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Flashback:
Geet went to her college she met up with Meera and Rohit her two best friends in school...she spotted them in the canteen....
Geet: Hey Meera what are you doing here? Where is Rohit?

Meera: Nothing just reviewing the notes from the class begins..did you study? I don't know about Rohit probably finding some new fish in the sea

Geet: haha for Rohit there will never be enough fishes in the sea I wonder how we both were spared from his hunting lolz...I am so tired...I stayed up all night studying for this exam and in the morning my dad yelled at me for waking up late

Meera: haha what else is new with Rohit...you know I think about the same thing..we are the only two girls that he doesn't hit on...

Geet: You make it sound like it is bad that he doesn't hit on us

Rohit: You guys talking about me? (Came up from behind and sat down in front of them..both Geet and Meera looked at him)

Geet: Please Rohit you are not that special that we would talk about you 24/7

Meera: Yeah Rohit get over yourself

Rohit: hmm it seems like I am special enough for both of you guys that you guys talk about me whenever I come (winks at both)

Both Geet and Meera rolls their eyes..Geet continued: anyway if you must know we were both thinking how we ever became friends with you

Rohit sighs: That is a million dollar question..I think the same thing...how I became friends with two langoors (Both gasps in shock)

Meera: What did you say? That is it...Geet hold him down (Geet goes near Rohit and holds his hands behind his back)

Rohit: What are you two doing? Let me go...ok ok am sorry I will take it back

Geet: Two late..you called us langoors now see what we do (Meera comes near Rohit holding glass of water)

Rohit: Come on I said sorry..please give me another chance..i won't say it again

Meera stops: What do you think Geet should we give him another chance?

Geet: hmm I don't know Meera..am confused what should we do?

Rohit: I will tell you what to do hold on...(he yanks his hands off of Geet and stands up just than the class bell rings both Geet and Meera runs off with their books) I won't spare you too

Geet: Yeah we will see..Good luck in exam bachu

Rohit confused: Exam?? Ohh shit...Geet! Meera! Wait for me..You guys need to help me out...(he runs behind them to the class)

End Flashback

Precap: Past: Maan sees Geet...
Present: Mahi's decision