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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

I love the way you describe our nature... 😳
share some talent with me partner! 🤣

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Escapist

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Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
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Amazinggggggggg read! 👏

What else do I say, I dont understand. This piece doesnt require my "extra special and essay-like comments", it would just spoil it all. I am still in awe, ouch! You're a writer par excellence, and everytime I read some of your work, it seems absolutely flawless. Anything further I say would be an understatement.

I simply love reading your works, they're a treat to the soul. Lastly, I wonder if you make an author or you're the one of those who write what they experience (the ones with ultra-amazing vocab. 😆)!?! . . .

Take care,
K

Heya dear,

Thnks a ton for your comment dear....

ooo extra special and essay like comments...hmm Gosh that was too heck of a compliment !
thnx dear for liking them :)

Naa not to much of reality....I mean yeah it is reality but not mine though ! there is plenty in this world to take inspiration from ain't it ?
And author well I dunno in respect to that :) oh and about the vocab....ah had to work hard for it right from school 😉

Take care.

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Escapist

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Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: tasfia123
hey fatima
you are a awesome writer👏
mind blowing yaar
toooooooooooooooo good
i feel so happy whenever i read any of your post
you rock girl👍🏼

love
tasfia

Hey Tasfia,

Thanks a lot dear....for the compliment I'm touched
that some one is there who is happy reading my update :)

take care

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Awesome dear 👏👏👏
I loved the poem too.....still its wandering within my mind

Would you tell me if your jaded or waxed ?
Or rather you prefer calling me unique and whimsical ?
Ideas and notions, is that the reason ?
Build a shell around me and started believing in fairies;
Oh! dear child
Wake up, Wake up to the gory reality that hides;
Smiles and frowns are a part of life !

Loving each and every part of it!!!

Love,

Amrita

Thanks a lot Amrita,

Awee glad you liked the poem....
thnx a lot :)

take care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago

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Escapist

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Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
It's like i was so lost that i nearly forgot that it was going to end.......it was nevertheless beautiful.......extremely beautiful.....there was lots of calmness and serenity stored in there.,..proud that you r MY friend....keep writing more and more....and do scrap me sometimes....

love,
Mahak

Oh! you got so lost that you forgot its ending.....??.....thanks a lot dear !
for liking it and I'm glad you liked all this calmness :)

Even I'm proud that YOU are my friend !
I'll scrap you sure :)

take care,
Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: arunabehere
Shab,

This update has a pain of a girl who is not aware of her real mother
but thankfully she has loving mother
I feel bad for her
her pain is within her,she is hiding from all

I just loved it

Luv,
di

Aru diii....

hayee you commented finally :)
yeah thankfully I could portray all that pain that was challenging to me..coz I love my mom and ma loves me a lot too :)

thnx di :)

take care,
Fatima

Originally posted by: rose.three
wow u hav written vry well...
good.........👏

Thnx a lot Varsha :)

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

I dunno if this post is interesting or not but it is very necessary as this is an attempt to describe his persona...Hope you accept it !!! Will wait for your likes and comments as always :)

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Oh! How so I wish to embrace you in my arms,
Rest my head on your shoulder and forget all the norms;
And let out all the tears I've suppressed for so long.

The day has ended and the moon is up, the sky is pitch black and the stars adorn and lit it beautifully adding to the unending expanse of the ethereal beauty and the darkness that engulfs. I'm sitting by the window seating unlike other days when I'm on my study table buried into my books; nocturnal is what she calls me as I too bask in the moonlight like her and find solace in the never ending night, we are strangely similar yet dissimilar.

I being a studious and realistic guy to the core whose only passion is studying and scoring good grades and looking at life through the lens wherein she is an epitome of an idealist and saw herself as a free bird when the reality was stark opposite.

The November night was silent yet there is a nerve soothing melody in it that relaxes me and urges me to open the blind folds of my heart and peel a layer off myself. I being a loner most of the time prefer to dwell in solitude as it gives me a sense of tranquility, well my fellow class mates have a very different picture of me 'lonely' is what they feel I am; they have misinterpreted but I don't feel the need to correct them; my mother is the only one who truly knows me. Life at most times has not been easy it's still not as even the basic needs are hard to avail and there are days when basic necessities are lacking as mom is the only working member of the family. Not all know this fact but my dad is bed ridden due to paralysis, I don't like to let this out openly as then people pity us; hospital expenses, medicines and even my studies leave her in a lurch yet she doesn't utter a single word and continues slogging hard for us, somewhere down the line I know this is the very reason I've lost my innocence and embraced maturity, as I've to toil my way through the hardships and you have no one to open up too and comfort you. But life changes and so do people in your life; there was a time when only my mom knew my emotional state and now she too is there, the one who has carved a special place in my heart and is there with me to comfort me and to talk to about life and it's unruly ways, when responsibilities fall on your young shoulders and at times you feel like breaking down and escaping the clutches of this crippled life that has rendered you helpless, at one point of time I did feel so.

I stare into the black sky and look to the lord above as I'm tired of questioning destiny and God too; feel like I've reached the saturation point from where I can't help my mom nor reduce her woes and ease her financially nor can I emotionally complete my dad. I've stopped asking Why me? nor do I say Try me! as life has tried me more than once; death of my younger brother right in front of my eyes, dad suffering from heart stroke and being paralyzed, financial crises so much so that I even contemplated giving up my studies to support my family; had it not been mom's strong resistance and will power I would have crumpled to life's unruly demands long back yet I recoiled in my shell and became a loner and a melancholic soul. It was then that she walked in my life and awakened the long lost emotions which were seemingly dead, though it was just the arrogance and rudeness that took birth first as she tried to intrude into my personal space but slowly with the passage of time it turned into a beautiful friendship and now I call her 'my soul searched' friend. It now feels that my hope is no longer forlorn and it has re-awakened and goodwill is all around, mirth is taking birth in my gloomy home and life once again as mom too has started smiling and dad too is active though still bed ridden. Slowly things are seeming to change and sorrow is fading and joy is replacing and it's all due to her presence; she is truly 'Light in the Darkness.'

Life take me the way you want,
And lead me to a place where no one has ever been,
Hills and Plains I'm ready to cross,
With you by my side, I can forever trod.

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Hope you liked it, honest reviews are most welcome 😊

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Edited by Escapist - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

wow me first!!😎 wonderful one fatima di... luv it thx for da PM!.. keep writing

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Kankshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

*Edited*

This does not have anything to do with the last update, does it? 🤓

The piece was lovely. It feels like ages that I read or wrote anything, I feel sick! Umm, getting back to the point - I really appreciate your writing skills, you just get better every time you write something. This piece in particular has too much to tell, and the fact you like blue genre the best tops it all. I remember you once telling me this. I am quite sure these paragraphs and verses at the beginning and the end would have been mighty tough to pen, had you not been into writing blue.

I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff, probably something new. You must try your hand in other genres and styles too. =)

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago