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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Aha.....poetry or music to the eyes.. wat a great update..! Luv ur work.. 👏

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

😃ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh at last finished reading

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar u write really well

it's just awesome

keep it up

do send me pm next time

love

khushi😳

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Awesome! I feel it more like viewing the whole scene while reading your posts coz of the descriptiveness in it....the depth and the hidden meanings as well

A great piece of work by you, dear! All the best!

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

awesome update fatima

thx alot for the pm

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -sam-
Hello Partner! 😃
I am here.....

Ok,
The first piece was exceptionally beautiful..
But was lil difficult for me to understand...
The girl and the boy and their silent talks...
Great idea!

loved it!

You have an amazing tallent Moon!
Keep it up!
Love yaa
take care!

OMG....Am I having an illusion ?? or you have really commented ?? lol
God....finally my partner got time to comment on MY work....whoa I'm relaxed !!!!!!

Exceptional ?? hmm...off course it had to be, coming from me right ?? 😉
jokes apart...that was something that was goin on between me and my inner self 2 days before exams....don't you think...we tend to write more well just before our exams ??
hmm....I feel so...this is so much better than studying at times.

Moon ?? I told ya na not Moon :( then too
next time I don't wanna see it okiez :)

thnx dear... :)

love ya too
Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -sam-
The second post was really beautiful..
something which reflected me..
I know its your own.. but I loved the way you wrote it
I could feel it..
My parents dont know that I write, I tried telling but I failed...
I just loved it Moon!
It was so good
I had tears...
Thats a reality my gal!
Sometimes we need to change..
and then everything sets in right place....
Younger sisters may get annoying but still they remain the source of happiness, haina?

It is my favourite piece of writing!

Take care
Love yaa 😊

Yupiee you even read the second part..now I'm getting a bit hint that as usual the comment on the third post will be late....

but nevertheless you commented..some people seem to forgotten me :(
you know rite who I'm talking about !!!

Yeah something that reflected many teenagers....you too somewhere
I mean yeah its like your living a parallel life outta here....
it's good at times but not so good too....

oki enough of sad talks...
I'm touched that this bought tears to your eyes....
I'm so sorry for making you cry...dil se sorry

And this is also true change in perspective changes many things.....
and when you can't change them its better to avoid or accept them :)

take care dear :)
Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: -BunnyGirl-
wow me first!!😎 wonderful one fatima di... luv it thx for da PM!.. keep writing

Awe glad you read it and also liked it....
guess you read something from my side after long..
good to see you back :)

Originally posted by: pallavihegde
Wow loved it dear😃

thanx a lot dear :)

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Wow Fatima
it was wonderful update
just too good
loved it to the core
keep it up

Fari...glad you read....
ek tu hi hai jo time pe padhti hai
baki sab toh :(

thnx a lot...glad you liked it dear :)

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Aha.....poetry or music to the eyes.. wat a great update..! Luv ur work.. 👏

well that only you know dear :)

thnx a lot....glad you like my work :)
no words to thank you !

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: khushi909
😃ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh at last finished reading
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar u write really well
it's just awesome
keep it up
do send me pm next time
love
khushi😳

Hey Khushi,

Good to see you here !
thnx a lot dear....for the comment
and also for liking them all :)

no words to describe what I'm feeling now :)

take care.

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Awesome! I feel it more like viewing the whole scene while reading your posts coz of the descriptiveness in it....the depth and the hidden meanings as well

A great piece of work by you, dear! All the best!

Hey Amrita,

Good to see you back after long :)

wow that was too much of a compliment...I mean 2 in a day and that too coming from you
means a lot :)

Glad you understood the hidden words and all :)
thnx a lot dear :)

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
awesome update fatima

thx alot for the pm

thank you !!
Glad you liked it :)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Hi Fatima,

The starting and the ending lines were very very sweet and so correct with the format of this post.. I coudl very well feel for the guy and feel his emotions.. The mention of how his mother slogs and father paralysied and younger died. it was heart wrenchign to read his conditinn..and it was nice to see that her presence suddenly made a breeze of happy air comign and makign them to smile.. the words verses were nicely felt ..

A good one this too.. dear.. keep writing and keep sharing.. I am sure u r a better writer than many here.. And take my word.. I feel u write better than me.. :D

luv u tc

Bhoomi

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