Chronicles of an Escapist! #1(MN) ||Completed|| - Page 7

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

*Edited*

This does not have anything to do with the last update, does it? 🤓

The piece was lovely. It feels like ages that I read or wrote anything, I feel sick! Umm, getting back to the point - I really appreciate your writing skills, you just get better every time you write something. This piece in particular has too much to tell, and the fact you like blue genre the best tops it all. I remember you once telling me this. I am quite sure these paragraphs and verses at the beginning and the end would have been mighty tough to pen, had you not been into writing blue.

I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff, probably something new. You must try your hand in other genres and styles too. =)

-Kankshita

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

It does have a subtle connection to the last update....if you read precisely
the girl in question is Nupur...who Mayank was talking in the end...
the light in the darkness....

I don't consider this update as melancholic...it has a hint of hope in it...
see the girl has her own set of woes and she is not necessarily happy from your pov

but then shez bringing joy in someone else's life.
I like this genre of melancholy more than anything...joy can be of various kinds same here....
even my friends are wanting me to expt with another genres =)

errm no ..writing those verses was not that difficult also, infact I felt do they even look like verses was very apprehensive at the start..until a friend reassured.

well that's a compliment if you feel like I'm improving personally speaking even I find some changes in my style...and I was scared about this one...

And hey take care of your health....don't worry everything will be fine dear :)

Hoping to hear your take on what I elaborated :)

Take Care.

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Fatima,

The starting and the ending lines were very very sweet and so correct with the format of this post.. I coudl very well feel for the guy and feel his emotions.. The mention of how his mother slogs and father paralysied and younger died. it was heart wrenchign to read his conditinn..and it was nice to see that her presence suddenly made a breeze of happy air comign and makign them to smile.. the words verses were nicely felt ..

A good one this too.. dear.. keep writing and keep sharing.. I am sure u r a better writer than many here.. And take my word.. I feel u write better than me.. :D

luv u tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

I get that, you so enjoy writing such stuff. Dont you? And yeah love, you do improve all the time. Actually, nearly everybody who's into frequently writing does because through the course of time, as we write and read and everything, we gradually seek knowledge and hence improve!

Light in darkness? I might have noticed it, but erm - I am too absentminded a reader to recapiculate.

Am not physically sick, so you dont have to worry about me. Probably people around me and my hair. 😆 Thank you. =)