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@Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Erm.... we talking abt a writer in here eh..🤔 ahem ahem.. culd that b u..😆 awesome once again...!! I luv how u describe the moments... ! Its a pleasure to read ur updates.. thanks a ton 🤗

hey tanu no we aren't talking about the writer here....😊
the writer is very much happy...unlike nupur..no where similar..just a figment of my imagination ..wanted to try a different story line, so this thing...but I take it as a compliment you see 😉

Thanx a ton for the comment...
It's my pleasure that you read and like my work ! 😳

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

hey tanu no we aren't talking about the writer here....😊
the writer is very much happy...unlike nupur..no where similar..just a figment of my imagination ..wanted to try a different story line, so this thing...but I take it as a compliment you see 😉

Thanx a ton for the comment...
It's my pleasure that you read and like my work ! 😳

-Fatima

hey dear... me was just teasing.. please dun mind it..!! 🤗🤗 n indeed u r a great writer... looking fwd to several more of ur updates...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

If this is going to be the result of studying excessively, I suggest you should do more studying.. ans we'll get more to read...

very nicely written.

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hiii yaar

mindblowing

2 good

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hi Fatima,

read the post 1 very beautifully mentioned a ray of things.. nature our emotions and how calmness and the other way around be showing reality.. i liked how u mentioned her face..the way many meotions and yet difficulto tknow the true meanign what she is feeling.. i liked htis bit of post.. short and so deeply told many emotions..:)
tc
Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

HI fatima,
read the post 2.. this one is very nicely written.. i can so very well relate to Nupur.. i mean i could feel her heart pai.. how it feels as u mentioned things so nicely.how she is not jealous of her sis but how she is made to feel the way her partenst aunts make to beliuve her.. the last lines were cutely written as if a small rhyme makign her to swing and know life is like that take it ... nice one dear..tc
Bhoomi

U surely r doign a great job.. never try to know whats wrong.. work on ur strogn points dear.. negative will fade away automatically..lol..

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

*Edited*

Amazinggggggggg read! 👏

What else do I say, I dont understand. This piece doesnt require my "extra special and essay-like comments", it would just spoil it all. I am still in awe, ouch! You're a writer par excellence, and everytime I read some of your work, it seems absolutely flawless. Anything further I say would be an understatement.

I simply love reading your works, they're a treat to the soul. Lastly, I wonder if you make an author or you're the one of those who write what they experience (the ones with ultra-amazing vocab. 😆)!?! . . .

Take care,
K

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey fatima
you are a awesome writer👏
mind blowing yaar
toooooooooooooooo good
i feel so happy whenever i read any of your post
you rock girl👍🏼

love
tasfia

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Awesome dear 👏👏👏

I loved the poem too.....still its wandering within my mind

Would you tell me if your jaded or waxed ?
Or rather you prefer calling me unique and whimsical ?
Ideas and notions, is that the reason ?
Build a shell around me and started believing in fairies;
Oh! dear child
Wake up, Wake up to the gory reality that hides;
Smiles and frowns are a part of life !

Loving each and every part of it!!!

Love,

Amrita

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: fariaa70
hey Fatima
haye mar jawa- awesome update re
totally rocking
the way u describe the whole thing- it was just amazing

u r a superb writer
loved ur update a lot

Heya thanks fari,

glad you liked that nature's description...guess it was too much......
but still thanks !!

keep reading :)

-Fatima