~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93* - Page 61

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi007

waiting for ur update



just got home from work....going to be writing it right now...will send out pms once its done
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Posted: 14 years ago
do pm me
awesome writing.really liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey this is AWESOME!!
Please add me to your pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
when are you updating yaar

waiting for it since whole week

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

and since u made as waiti so long, make is longggggggggggg and and and ................ u know what we want right????


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Posted: 14 years ago
~*NOTE*~
Hey everyone...it's the weekend and we all know what that means!! update time....so here is the latest installment with Tu Muskura...i just want to apologize in advance...i know it's a short update....i got back from work and wrote it and am so tired!!...Christmas time so people are CRAZY!!..and i have a little bit of the flu...but tomorrow i have a day off so a long update will be done....so in the meantime....ENJOY!!!!


Part 15


Coffee Shop


Geet and Sasha where sitting in the coffee shop coming up with the final toucheS of their plan...Geet's heart was anxiously waiting for tonight when she would finally truly become Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana...in every sense

Sasha: acha Geet so I have everything planned out and finalized...I called MK and told him that I would be coming by the office tomorrow....so all I need for you to do is call him up and make up an excuses for not coming in for the rest of the day and we'll head on over to phase 2..ok

Geet: acha teek hai

Geet nervously dialled Maan's number praying she wouldn't mess up...


Khurana Constrictions


Maan sat there impatiently waiting for Geet to come back...his days seemed to drag on whenever he didn't see or feel Geet around him...he was lost in his thoughts thinking of Geet and thinking how his life had changed ever since meeting her....and now finding out that she too loved him....suddenly he heard his phone ringing

Maan HELLO

He yelled in anger from getting disturbed of his dreams

Geet: Maan (she answered hesitantly)

Hearing Geet's voice Maan's heart softened as his Pari was now calling him

Maan: woh Geet...actually I'm sorry for yelling I didn't know who it was

Geet: it's ok...I hope I'm not disturbing you

Maan: no not at all....was there something you needed is everything ok?

Geet: haan...woh...actually I phoned to let you know that I won't be coming into work for the rest of the day....I'll just met you at home

Maan didn't like the thought of not seeing her till he reached home.....he became worried as to why she would leave in the middle of the day

Maan: Geet sab teek to hai nah?

Geet: Ji Maan...woh I just have a headache...I'll see you at home bye

She said as she quickly hung up knowing she wouldn't be able to answer anymore of his questions and quickly left the coffee shop with Sasha.....Maan just sat in his office not knowing what to do with himself

Maan: Maan what's wrong with you? You used to work when you never meet her...just get through the rest of the day...you only have another 4 long hours before you can see her....

He said as he got up and grabbed his files and drowned himself into his work...an hour had passed and he still couldn't stop thinking of Geet...his eyes kept wondering to her office....he kept imagining her there...


3 hours later- 6pm


Maan: WHAT I STILL HAVE 2 HOURS

He said as he looked at his watch...he couldn't believe how slow time was going

Maan: this has to be the worst day to kill time, I have no meeting or any new projects to work on...

He said as he furiously was going through the files...just than his phone rang...he was hoping it would be Geet...he quickly grabbed his phone from the other side of his desk and looked to see who was calling him...he was disappointed to see it was not Geet

Maan: (not interested) hey Sasha

Sasha: (worried) MK Help

Maan: (concerned) Sasha kya hua...sab teek to ha nah?

Sasha: nahi MK kuch teek nahi hai....woh Geet...

Maan jumped out of his seat hearing Geet's name....

Maan: Geet? kya hua use? woh ek to hai na?

He said concerned for his wife

Sasha: pata nahi...actually I saw her in the mall today shopping and went to go say hi to her....but she didn't want to talk to me and was trying to run away when she slipped and fell down the stairs

Maan: KYA!

He said clenching his hands into a fist

Maan: I thought she said that she was going to go home and rest...is she ok? Where is she?...Sasha why are you not answering kasie hai mere Geet?

Sasha: MK don't calm down...she's at my apartment that I'm renting out...I've called the doctor and he's already came and saw her but she's still unconscious....MK please come quick

Maan: haan mein aa raha hoon....what's your address...

He said as he frantically wrote down her address and ran to his car

Maan: Geet I'm coming....please be ok I'm coming


Sasha's Apartment


As Sasha hung up the phone she had a huge smile on her face

Sasha: GEET HE BELEIVED EVERYTHING!....he's so gullible!!!...ok let's get everything ready he'll be here in an hour..chalo

Geet: Sasha thanks for all the help...I'm so sorry I ever miss judged you

She said as they gave each other a hug

Sasha: Geet its ok...I'm glad that I came in handy....now let's get everything ready...I have to be out before he comes too!!

Geet: but where are you going to stay for the night

Sasha: Geet darling this isn't my apartment...I just rented it for you and MK...my apartment is on the 8th floor of this building

Geet: Sasha tum bhi na


Maan's Car


Maan was rushing through traffic trying to get to Geet he was so worried for her....he was afraid of anything bad happening to her

Maan: Geet you're going to be ok...you have to be....what am I going to do without you...you're my life now....NO MAAN stop thinking like this...nothing is going to happen to her....the minute she wakes up I'm going to tell her how I feel...enough of these games...life is too short

He said as he hit his foot on the accelerator and speed through the streets..


Apartment


Everything as ready...

Sasha gave Geet one last hug before leaving and wished her the best....

Geet was READY!!...she felt nervous but knew this would be the start of her new life....


Outside the Apartment


Maan reached the Apartment and ran upstairs to Sasha's room....he finally reached the room...before opening the room he noticed a red enveloped taped to the door with his name on it...time froze still for him as her reached for the letter and opened it to read it.

Dear Maan


The first time I met you I knew there was something special about you...after Ranbir's death you where the only man that as able to open my heart up again to the world...you showed me how to live life again...but mostly you showed me how to laugh again..you brought the smile back to my face that has been missing for a few years...and for that I wanted to thank you.

Par Maan mujhe aapse ek aur baat kahniye thi...woh yeh hai...you taught me how to love again. Haan Maan yeh sach...Main kuch main kuch dino se yeh baat aapko...I wanted to tell you this for many days but didn't know how to tell you...

Maan I love you with all my heart...and today I want us to have a fresh start in our relationship...today I want to become Mrs, Maan Singh Khurana in every sense..

When you enter this room today you will be opening a new door to our relationship...I'm sorry that I called you over here to meet me like this but I wanted tonight to be special..

I Love You Maan...with all my heart

Love always,

Aapke Geet

Maan stood there frozen reading the letter that Geet had wrote to him...in that one letter she had said everything that he was yearning to her..he read the letter over and over..."Aapke Geet" he read to himself with a smile on his face...

He slowly placed the letter back into the envelope..he slowly opened the door and was stunned at what his eyes saw...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwww....so cute...omg..i loved it but i know the next part is gonna be even better...hope u get well soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh am dead her and crying for ur stop moment am crying badly for ur next update plzzzzzzz update today agine plzzzzzzzzzz u have to see my face buz am all in tears and am crying badly plzzzzzzzzz update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago


Amazing update👏.......loved shasha.....but u stopped at the cliff point😡......plzzzzzz update soon......cant wait to read more😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..........
OMG OMG...
Loved the Update
Awesome..Fabulous..
PLS PLS PLS ..Update..
Pls i sooooooo want to read the next part
Cant wait to read a long update..hehe
Love this Ff:)
pls pls pls update asap..pls
Thanks a lot for the PM..
Cant wait..Loved it

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww such a cute update and beechara maan can't stay alone a second without geet but fikaar not there is a surprise waiting for you and awe loved how maan just reached there when he heard geet was hurt and the letter was too sweet and romantic and I'm hoping that when he opens the door it will be decorated all romantically and geet will be dressed beautifully right anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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