My Version.. The A_A story...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Precap:
Arjun wakes up with a satisfied smile, luks back at sleeping arohi with a beautiful smile.. and dwells into wat transpired betn thm the night tht passed..
The epi:
Arohi feels the pulling of her hand and opens her eye in displeasure.. and her eyes opens up wide in disbelief.. wat a beautiful smile.. she gets up and smiles at Arjun and appreciates his smile.. bt Arjun instead returns her compliment with his signature "sadu" miffed off expressions and rudely snubs her off .. the friendly smile quickly fades away from Arohi's face and she returns his gesture with equally miffed "watever".. expressions.. jst thn as she moves away her eyes 4rm him, she notices some red marks on his chest.. gets alarmed.. and asks him wat r they.. he tries to hide thm.. and acts all innocent.. Arohi.. dont believe him.. she probes further and demands and answer.. c-ing her so worried.. he plans to play along and teach her a lesson.. he provokes her by making her believe tht "something" really did happen betn thm.. tears roll out of Arohi's eyes she is afraid... really he has done something worst.. and she is so stupid how can she sleep thru all of it.. cursing herself.. jst thn Shefali comes with the keys and removes the handcuffs.. Arohi still bewildered ignores her.. and grabs Arjun's arms and again demands wat he actually did with her.. he gives her a smirk and turns away.. he is actually amused to c tht she actually fall for it.. jst thn Arohi pushes him hard unawares.. arjun loses his balance..and arohi grabs his collar and curses him hard.. Arjun gets angry at the sudden attack and pushes her away.. she again gets up quick and tries to pounce on him and scratches his arms.. Arjun gets really angry and this time and pushes her hard onto the bed.. and walks out of room leaving behind the locked door an angry, screaming, and cursing Arohi.... somehow he feels bad.. very very bad tht Arohi is blaming him and cursing him of something so cheap.. Makrand notices his bothered face.. tells him to laughs it off .. its not as if girls havent cursed him.. yeah, its not as if girls havent cursed him.. bt not for such a reason.. it hadnt bothered him least wat girls called him.. womanizer or a heartless playboy... he was yes.. bt he had his own priciples.. never wud he do something so cheap.... so despicable.. somehow he cudnt get off the hatred in Arohi's voice 4 him out of his mind.. it simply enraged him further.. he walked off into jungle to cool off.. billu asked him to come to market with him instead and get the breakfast...
they wer back, he took a bath.. and he seemed to have cooled off a bit.. and he came out to have breakfast.. and heard Arohi screaming again.. billu came running to him...informing tht Arohi threw off the breakfast, took a knife and threatenend him and asked 4 Arjun... the anger he was trying so hard to supress surfaced again .. and he banged his way in to Arohi's room and asked Shefali to get hell out of there... shefali tried to argue back bt he grabbed and pushed her out of room and closed the door behind her and turned towards Arohi in anger.. his breathing became fast and the rage was building up.. he closed in on Arohi who was holding the knife ready to attack.. tears rolling down..demanding again wat he did... did he give her something tht made her drowsy.. did he give shefali too something tht knocked her off so tht she wudnt know of wat he did.. she knew he cud b a very cheap guy.. he is married.. has 5 kids.... and yet he plays with her best friend Gauri's emotions.. he is so cheap tht he calls Gauri in his cottage the nite b4 her marriage.. and he keeps following gauri shamelessly during the marraige.. she was sure he cud do anything.. she fears he jst mite have done it.. she feels gross.. abt her body..abt herself.. she rubs off her tears.. and again demands the truth.. bt Arjun is mum .. and she fears for worst.. she threatens him tht she is going to kill him b4 she killed herself for wat he did to her.. goes near tries to attack him.. and stabs in his arms..Arjun gives a sharp cry, pulls the knife, and presses his wound to stop the oozing blood... Arohi steps back, shocked, scared, stares at the blood tht was oozing out quickly.. God, wat did she do?.. she had struck him deep this time..
Not tht she hadn't seen blood or tht she hadnt stabbed Arjun b4.. bt she cudnt believe she cud actually garner such an amount of hatredness for someone tht she cud actually stab him.. Never was she filled with such hatredness.. she did it.. for herself, for gauri.. for the pain.. for the shame tht he had brought on herself and Gauri.. y shud she feel guilty.. she was still staring at Arjun.. who now had his handkerchief out and was bandaging the wound.. luking really mad with anger.. he luked up at her and arohi had shivers down her spine.. she immediately broke the stare and luked down.. there was blood splattered on her hands.. her hands began to shake.. and she took a few steps backwards.. and accidentally hit the chest box she saw yesterday tht stood on the table.. it opened up as it fell and some letters flew off.. as it laid down on floor slowly.. a name from it grabbed her attention.. it was written.. eternally yours... Gauri... "Gauri" she uttered.. Arjun was up in a moment and quickly gathered those letters and grabbed the brown chest box.. Arohi quickly tried to pull back the letters from his hands... Arjun shouted.. "leave it" ARohi ignored him and continued with the struggle.. the scuffle grew as both tried to get hold of the letters till finally Arjun let go off the letters and pinned down Arohi on the bed.. struggling beneath him.. Arohi yelled.. "you scoundrel.. you cheap.. how low can u steep.. first, u ruined Gauri's life and now u want 2 ruin her marraige as well.. you bloody blackmailer..." Arjuns arm was hurting.. his ears wer filled with Arohi's hatredness.. and his rage was piling up.. "who said u tht i am blackmailing Gauri".. "tell me.. haan" shouting even louder into her ears.. "Tell me.." "i know it.. i know how low u can steep.. and these letters here safe in ur chest with u here rite now is proof enuf of it.. of ur dirty mind.. get ur dirty hands off me.. u disgust me.." "oh yeah.. i digsust u.. yeah.. i DISGUST u.... thn y the hell did u cuddle up in my arms last night haan.." Arohi was shocked.. "i didnt do it.. you.. you..." "Oh.. stop it.. you... who came up into my bed.. who.. you.." "who under pretext of feeling cold cuddled into my chest.. who.. you".. Arohi still dazed.. "wat do u think of urself.. u think u r very smart and i wudnt know of ur disgusting plans with shefali to woo me.. y wer u planning.. to prove wat a big womanizer i am.. tht i ditched Gauri.. and u despise me.. ht U despise ME.. NO.. NO... Ms. Arohi..Ii despise U... it was all ur planning rite.. u thot u can woo me.. with ur bloody cute face.. u think u can charm me by laying sweet and innocent.. u wud come near me and i wud fall 4 u... u wud fool me and take revenge 4 Gauri by demeaning me.. blaming me.. hurting me... and i thot u... u really felt cold... I .. I .... oh Y... it was all preplanned rite.. u jst wanted to take revenge 4 gauri rite... wat a fool i am... and now u r doing all this drama rite.. u r simply disgusting.. u r more MORE disgusting thn me.." Tears rolled down Arohi's face.. she closed her eyes.. she didnt believe wat she heard... bt he HAD those letters y thn... "no.. u r trying to play with me like u played with Gauri.. u r maangi raam.. u have a wife and five kids and still u keep those letters with u.. no i m not disgusting U r.. " Arjun smirked.. still playing smart.. arnt u.. he closed in on her face.. she tried to press down her head further deep into the pillow.. there was fear in her eyes.. he released her and got back up..."I am not maangi raam.. i am Arjun" there is lot more u dont know about me.. and u better not know.. u will regret it.. now give me those letters.." i knew it.. u.. u r not wat u seem.. and no i will not give u these letters.." "I said give it back" "No.. y do u need thm.. " thts none of ur bizness.. "It is my bizness" "she is my best friend and now she is married... and u know it very well wat havoc wud it create for my family and for gauri.. shud these get into bad hands..." i dont believe u a bit.. "I dont care wether u believe me or not.. i dont care wehter u like me or not.. jst give me those letters...Arohi" "No.." yelled Arohi.. there was again a scuffle and he pushed her onto the table.. arohi fell backwards and hit her head on the edge of table.. Arohi felt the room spinning and the next moment her eyes closed down.. she fell unconcious and the letters fell from her hands.. "arohi" screamed Arjun... he took her head on his lap and tried to wake her up.. "Arohi" said a worried Arjun... "Arohi..Arohi" her head fell limp.. a sense of urgency struck him.. he quickly picked her up and laid her on the bed.. got some water and splattered on her face.. "Arohi.. wake up.. Arohi".. she slowly gained consciousness back.. bt her head was hurting bad.. she opened up her eyes and saw two very concerned one staring rite into her.. for a moment, she felt something.. something in those eyes.. bt thn it dawned it was Arjun... she tried to sit up.. bt Arjun made her lie down.. and shouted 4 Shefali.. as he stood up and walked to the door...

Shefali ran in.. she was really worried.. she gave Arohi some water... ARohi's head was hurting real bad.. she held it for a while.. shefali had seen a first aid box in the room.. she quickly fetched it.. and gave arohi some pain killers.. she closed her eyes.. her head felt heavy and she thot 2 give it some rest.. she opened up eyes.. at the smell of nice tea... and stared at the ceiling blankly.. she felt fresh.. her headache gone.. she gave a light smile.. smell of tea lingered in the air.. she turned her face sideways.. and saw a cup of tea on the table and beside it stood the brown chest box... she sat up and quickly opened the box.. she was astonished to see the neatly folded letters in it.. her eyes searched the room for Arjun.. but could not find it.. instead she saw shefali smiling at her from the kitchen counter and saying something.. which she didnt quite listen to.. and jst smiled back faintly giving a nod.... she didnt knew wat to think of Arjun.. she remembered wat he said.. "u cuddled into my chest" aaah.. she felt shy.. wat did she do.. how is she gonna face Arjun.. she closed her eyes.. and the oozing blood flashed back in her mind.. she cudnt c it.. she threw open her eyes.. she felt ashamed.. she felt guilty.. shud she.. or he was jst simply playing with her emotions.. he was still a mystery.. he wasnt mangi raam.. thn wat was he doing here.. wat has he to do with the police.. was he really police.. jst thn it struck her.. tht piercing angry eyes had reminded her of something.. she cudnt quite get it wat.. bt there was something in those eyes.. which she thot she was very familiar with.. but wat...? She got up from bed holding the chest in her arms.. she again heard shefali calling her from back.. bt she ignored her and went out to look for Arjun.. she HAS to find him....

she saw Makrand in the jeep.. she approached him and asked him about Arjun.. "dunno know... havent seen him since morning".. jst thn the cellphone besides Makrand seat rang.. he seemed alerted... feebly said.. "C he even left his cell phone here" as he picked up the phone, she saw her Daadu's number flashing on it... she asked Makrand.. "whose it?" "oh jst some regular followup from police..wanted to know how they wer doing"... Arohi was sure she saw her DSP Kartar Singh's name flashing... she was confused and suspicous.. who are they.. who is Arjun?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Manisha... i felt like i read a page or two of a beautiful novel😳... i loved reading throughout... but u kno for a TV serial it becomes excess...they look nice in novels.. if the creatives have taken a different turn then that only means they took it in order to make it convenient for the future tracks...dun u think where u left the end as, becomes a bit complicated considering how the track in KMH now should go...?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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din read it yet manisha. will read in peace tomorrow and comment.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shibz

Manisha... i felt like i read a page or two of a beautiful novel😳... i loved reading throughout... but u kno for a TV serial it becomes excess...they look nice in novels.. if the creatives have taken a different turn then that only means they took it in order to make it convenient for the future tracks...dun u think where u left the end as, becomes a bit complicated considering how the track in KMH now should go...?

thnx Shibz.. yup.. the end is different in my version.. and my Arohi is still suspicious abt Arjun.. thos she will feel the obvious attraction.. she swings betn trust and suspicion bcoz Arjun is still mystery to her and is still a questionable person..... Arjun has starting to affect her and vice versa.. for me the current track is inappropriate.. Arohi CANNOT trust such a dubious person.. if only Arjun had manipulated her unintentionally it wud have made some sense.. my future track was Arohi falling 4 Arjun's unintentional manipulation while planning his future move against police.. (4 the chor-police Ahluwalia-Arjun drama).. and Arohi starts to trust him.. and Arjun feeling something beyond attraction 4 Arohi.. they thn start to share a relation of understanding... its thn, she gets the jolt.. and comes to know the truth abt Arjun.. bt still due to innate gud nature of Arjun she cudnt hate him.. .. thn thers struggle betn her family values and fshp with Arjun .. coz Arjun was always a gud person 4 her and he actually tells her to chose wats best 4 her.. her family.. she plans to meet him one last time..she comes 2 know tht he is the guy who he met at 12 in tht party and wonders wat destiny has in store 4 her..
i wud've liked if Arohi-Arjun's track had been more layered and explanatory...Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
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manisha loved reading it šŸ˜› in the actual episode I didnot like two things, one is shefali's theory of arjun putting on the marks himself , it is so unlike him I hope it is wrong and somewhere sometime he confesses it is arohi's only , that wld be so romantic na. second is I din like the concept of letters at all, she already knew gauri's love is onesided so if she had accused of being heartless since he didnot come to see her when she attempted suicide and his explanation of why he didnot come should have made her realise that her impression about him and gauri is wrong . rest of the epi was fine .
I still think arjun will try to manipulate her even though he has developed feelings for her he will try to subside them and go ahead with some kind of plan and arohi is a happy go lucky girl she is going to trust him, since she thinks he is here to save her but will get a blow when she knows he kidnapped her. her fairy tale opinion about love will be changed.

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