fan fic- FOREVERURS.COM (updtd ch 4 pg 2)

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hey frnds.. this is my vry frst arjuhi ff.. hope u like it.. plzzzzzz comment if u do and dnt forget to push the like button hm? enjoy.....😊

foreverurs.com
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Arjun Verma- Karan Kundra
calm,cool,decent,gentle bt theres somethng abt him wich is vry mysterious.. as if he is surrounded by a dense cloud of mystery.. noone knows the actual man behind that dense cloud... evryone is curious abt him bt none cn get into any conclusion abt him...he is different,he is unique... yet among his best frnds,he is the most wanted.. he is fun-loving, caring,extreamely patient... anyone wud like him.. bt wen he alone...he is a deserted...lonely guy...whu is unsure of his own existence..... he loves his family lik crazy... they mean evrythng to him.. his mom,dad,his lil sis... and his frnds.... they r his world.....
Arohi Singh- Kritika Kamra
talkative,chirpy,bubbly,fun-loving, punjabi grl according to whom life is a non-stop TV serial where there are lots of twists and turns bt ultimately it has a happy ending.. she loves to make frnds bt feels lil uncomfortable with strangers... ultimately wen those strangers turn out to be nice people then she is vry comfortable with them and speaks out her mind... she is childish, somewat immatured, thnks herself to be a brave boss bt actually she is quite a CHICKEN... 😆 she gets extreamely frightened in the dark..and hates to be alone... always she seeks warm shelter,whether of her frnds or her family...although to the world,she is vry arrogant, big-mouthed, and loud bt only her vry close frnds know that she is a simple girl whu has the heart of a child.. whu only wishes to see good thngs and light in life.....
Shreya Patel-Mahi Vij
Mahhi Vij
arohi's scul frnd.. and a really close one.. she is a net freak... always chatting on the net through various sites and friendstars... and has gained numerous admirers in a vry short span of time.. she is soooooo cute and likable that guys become crazy for her.. arohi admires her personality and deep in her mind she wants to be lik her....
Soham Saxena-Jay Bhanusali
Arjun's best frnd soham is a charming personality,a funny guy... loves to chat and date grls... flirts harmlessly with them.. bt in all he is cute and cn be a vry true frnd.... he is shreya's net frnd and likes her a lot.. bt for the frst time in life..he is afraid to approach her.... for the frst time in life,he feels that he is serious... seriously in LOVE with her....
Manoj Singhania- Vivian Dsena
Vivian Dsena
(nothing cn be revealed of this person's character ryt now.. u will get to know him as the story unfolds.. he plays a pivotal role in the story)
THEME
" if i love her,and if this is true then her smile shud bring smile on my face too...." ---arjun
" why cnt i just be happy with watevr i have got? wat do i need more? what am i searching for?...." ---arohi
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chapter---1
arohi....arohi.. uuff.. tujhe sunayi nhi deta kya?--- shreya came running down the stairs,tripping on her way,trying to catch her classmate arohi downstairs whu was soo busy in chatting with another frnd that she cudnt evn hear her cries....
It was the last day of scul and the whole batch was feeling really sentimental.. after this there wud be no scul,no rules to break, no scul uniform,no blazer ties, and no punishment for late coming... nothing.. its true that the students always wanted scul days to end so that they cn move towards a new phase in life,college life wich means nvr-ending fun and enjoyment.. bt wen that hour truly arrived,somewhere deep inside their hearts they knew that they were going to miss scul life lik hell.....
shreya bumped into a boy whu was busy shooting a grup photo of his frnds,spoiling the image and his mood... and then ultimately she reached arohi and pulled her hand..----oye.... kabse bula rahi hu? sunti nhi hain kya?
arohi,quite shocked---kya? kabse? bula rahi thi? kyun?
shreya---baat karni hain yar.... zaroori baat...
arohi---to bol na.....
shreya glanced at arohi's frnd sheetal whu was standing and watching the fun quietly...
arohi to sheetal---oye tu aise kya dekh rahi hain?
sheetal smiled and her eyes sparkled.... she looked at shreya and she smiled back.....
arohi,confused pinched shreya on her arm----baat kya hain yar? tum dono aise ek dusre ko dekhkar istarah muskura kyun rhe ho? bol na... kya baat hain?
shreya giggled---tere liye ek surprise hain....
arohi---surprise? mere liye? kya?
shreya----tere ghar mein internet connection aa gaya hain na?
arohi---haan... wo to pichle hafte mein hi aa gaya tha... kyun?
shreya---yaad hain tune mujhse ek reqst ki thi? tere liye foreverfriends.com mein ek accnt khol dene ke liye? yaad hain na?
arohi----wo to maine aise hi... main thodi na net par chat karnewali hu...... papa mujhe ghar se hi nikal denge haan...... suddenly her eyebrows rose....----ek minute ek minute..... tum kehna kya chahti ho?
shreya hugged arohi tightly and said----maine tere liye ek account khol di hain... usika id aur password dene ke liye main tujhe bula rahi thi... aab hum sare dost kabhi alag nhi honge.. phone par nhi to na sahi..par waha hum sab eksath rahenge.. hamesha ek doosre se baat karenge....
arohi was too shocked to speak.... she didnt know wat to say... she had always been curious abt this net chatting process and making numerous unknown frnds...bt she had nvr gained the courage to try this out for herself... evn now,she felt awkward.....
arohi----par shreyu main kaise... mera matlab..maine ye sab kabhi pehle kiya nhi hain.. mujhe kuch pata bhi nhi hain.. aur agr mere gharwalon ko pata chal gaya na.. to quyamat aa jayegi.....
shreya----of ho pagal.....kisko ye sab pehle pata hota hain.... tu bas id password le le... aur sign in kar lena.. baki tujhe khud ba khud pata chal jayega kya karna hain... c'mon grl... have fun.... friendsforever rocks yar......aab chal chalke kuch tasveer wasveer khichte hain kyun? she winked at the confused arohi..... whu did nt at all feel relieved.....
late at night, arohi tiptoed towards her father's room.... her father was a sound sleeper.. once he fell asleep he wud nt wake at al before 6-8 hrs...evn if the house was on fire... vry slowly and carefully,she turned the knob and went inside... she switched on her cellphone's torch light as she knew that she cud nt turn on the lights.. she had to be extra careful.... following the faint light of her mobile phone..she approached the computer table and switched on the main power.... the bright start up light of WINDOWS VISTA almost blinded her... she turned back at her father... and heaved a sigh of relief... he was fast asleep..... then she unrolled the small piece of paper in her hand where shreya had written down her id and her password..... arohisingh@gmail.com... with trembling hands..she typed the letters carefully... then she pushed the tab button and typed her password beneath..... taking a deep breath,as if she was going to enter a totally new world..she clicked on the " sign in" button and waited,holding her breath..... for the first time in life...she was going to enter the cyber world..........
Edited by kasturika_kashu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz lemme knw wen u update
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Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

plz lemme knw wen u update

okayz dear...😃😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey loved reading it , pl.continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's amazing.
I loved the story as well as the characters.
Awesome work.
Please continue and let me know when you do.
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thnk u frnds for reading,liking and commenting my work.. love u...😳🤗

chapter---2
the blue screen flashed before arohi's eyes and she gazed at the pretty theme her frnd shreya had set in her profile.. she smiled.. shreya knows her choice vry well so she had set a deep blue background,the colour of the sea...
aab? aab kya karu?--thot arohi... she was actually new in this field and therefore her mind was totally blank... she picked up her mobile and msged shreya-- hey i have signed in.. now wat to do.. how to chat?
after two minutes of impatient waiting her mobile screen flashed with a new text msg.. it was written--- kya yar sone bhi nhi deti tu.. chal ok sun..tere kitne frnd reqst hain dekh ke.. kisiko add wad karke scrapbuk mein jake chat kar.. aur haan ek aur baat... plzzzz mujhe abhi sone de.......
arohi giggled in excitement and went to the home page of her profile.... alredy there were few reqsts.. she clicked on the accept button and started chatting in the scrapbuk....
at frst she was afraid to chat with a complete stranger.. bt slowly she became accustomed and vry frank.. the guy's name was Rishav..
rishav: so arohi tell me some of ur hobbies.. wat u lik to do in ur freetimes?
arohi: hobbies? umm nothing much..i just love to have fun with my frnds and chat for hrs and hrs...😊
rishav: accha? so r u ready to chat with me for hours?😉😛
arohi became a lil tensed.. now wat to reply? wat to reply.....?
rishav: c'mon arohi am waiting.....
arohi: ummm... well...u r nt my frnd yet...i mean am just chatting with u....i havent evn seen u...neither do i know anythng abt u...
rishav: usme kya hain..? baat karenge to jaan jayenge na ek doosre ko dheere dheere.. dnt wry abt dat....😉 dear..!!!
arohi gulped...---oh my god... aab ye sab kya ho raha hain...? kya ye thk hain...?
at frst she thot of saying goodbye and signing out bt then,she didnt know why..she felt a strange urge within herself to carry on chatting.... and thats what she did... gradually she opened up her mind to this unknown guy,told him abt her likes and dislikes and after abt three to four hrs of long chat..wen she felt really sleepy she signed out telling him goodbye and that she will agen come online the next day.....
too sleepy yet too excited,she returned back to her room slowly and dropped down on the bed.... then she thot abt wat had just happened with her.. she made frnds with a guy whum she had nt seen or met and she didnt evn hear his voice.. bt he IS her frnd now... she loved it.. she loved this thng of making unknown frnds.. arohi closed her eyes thnking abt how many frnds was she going to make by the end of this month.............
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arohi--haan shreyu... sacchi... mujhe itnaaaaaaaaa maza aya itna maza aya ki kya batau tujhe..... main to pagal hi ho jaungi.. abhi mere frndlist mein 25 new frnds hain.. jinmein se tumlogo ke siva 16 ladke hi hain...😆😉
shreya--tu fon par itni zor se chillana band karegi? 😡warna main baat nhi karungi....🤔
arohi--😆 ok ok.. thk hain aab bata... aab thk hain?
shreya---hmm... 😉 maine kaha tha na.. bht maza ayega tujhe.. lekin haan aab apne naye dosto ke saath itna mat busy ho jana ki jab humlog online aye to humologo ko reply hi dena bhul jaye.....
arohi---are hat pagal.. aisa thodi na hota hain.....tumlogo ko kabhi nhi bhulungi... is sunday ko sheetal ke ghar mein aa jana... masti karenge...
shreya---chal thk hain sunday sham ko milte hain... abhi rakhti hu bbyeee.... have fun in friendsforever...😊
arohi kept down her mobile and ran into her father's room agen.. she switched on the computer and sat down in frnt of it....
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arohi felt really tired after she returned home.. it was fun at sheetal's place and they had a good dinner too.... arohi thot tht she wud nt come online that day.. bt then agen... she had grown a habit of chatting in those few days... splashing water on her face...and cleaning herself a bit.. she switched on her pc and signed into friendsforever.com.... they were 8 new reqsts on her home page... shreya had forbidden her to accept each and evry reqst as all the people out there r nt good.. she had told her that before accepting a person she shud at least check his/her profile once.. therefore this time arohi did nt accept any reqst.. instead she started checking profiles of the people whu had send her frnd reqsts... she scrolled down to get a better look at the reqsts.. suddenly her fingers stopped at a particular name.... she looked carefully at that person's profile picture... it was somewat scary as well as attractive.. it was of an animation hero.. maybe a ghost... or maybe.. A WARRIOR... only one side of his face was visible and only one of his eyes cud be seen... the picture had a reddish effect and that single eyes of the warrior was blue.... for some moments arohi forgot evrythng else and gazed at that profile picture... it fantasised her... she clicked on the picture and that person's profile appeared in frnt of her at once..... his name was....ARJUN--THE WARRIOR.......
she scrolled down and stopped at the place where his intro was written..... it was really unique and wonderful.....
HATE ME OR LOVE ME BOTH R IN MY FAVOUR....IF U HATE ME I WILL BE IN UR MIND.. IF U LOVE ME I WILL BE IN UR HEART....YES THATS ME....ARJUN.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi thanks for the pm, nice part.
HATE ME OR LOVE ME BOTH R IN MY FAVOUR....IF U HATE ME I WILL BE IN UR MIND.. IF U LOVE ME I WILL BE IN UR HEART....YES THATS ME....ARJUN.....
nice lines :) ,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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n fynaly arjun aived ... thnks fr d pm :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hayee!!!! beautiful!!

i love the line.. hate mo or love me.. WONDERFUL!lol

cant wait to read more!

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