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radiant_raisa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wish Geet becomes strong and Maan realizes how much he needs her 😃

Thanks for the update Di! 🤗
pickachu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor geet feeling sorry for her.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Geet really wants maans attention
Continue soon thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww poor Geet 😆!!
Loved the update bajii poor Geet wants Maan's attention and he is trying to control himself for the baby!! 😳
Geet trying every way to be with Maan was really sweet!!
Wonder whose diary Geet was reading, is it Maan's?
Enjoyed it when Geet said " geet - mujhe nahi, ise chahiye "
Loved the updaet, update soon baji, thanks for the pm..xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!!!
baby again and again asking for kiss was so cute😆😆
aww poor geet...maan is acting like a jerk😡
"geet~tere kaaran papa mujse pyaar nahi karte, tum dono bure ho
baby~hurt

baby~mujhe bhi😳
geet~don't talk to me
baby~hurt again"
bechara baby..all bcoz of maan😡😆
"arrey rose teri kismat achi hain ki unho ne
tumhe nahi dehka...warna abhi tak tera antim-sanskar ho chuka hota"🤣
cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesun update i loved itt

aww blesss geet in so much pain and wat is this why is maan doin this to her she doesnt deserve it from readin the shayari towards the end makes me think that maan may have a past omgg dunt tell me sameera entering awww i hope imm wrong i just hope maan realises what he is doin
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

MA Muski dear...!!! 🤗

birllant n wonderful update..!!!!👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️
I realy luv those lines...truely magical...!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃
i wonder wat happen 6 yr bk..!!!!😕😕😕 between Maan n other girl...!!!!
Maan is stoping himself n controling as well ...he knw she got married cos of his child yet...he luv her bt he thinks she dnt...!!!!
uff yeh misunderstands...!!!!😕😕😕😕 plz jaildi khatam kero...!!!!😃😃😃
Baby is so sweet...!!!!😆😆😆😆😆
per Geet hamesha uski daanti raathi hai...!!!! poor soul...!!!!🥱
Muski dear...i wanted 2 ask u sumthing...!! kiya app shaiyaar ho...!!😆😆😆
kiya wonderful lines likh the hai app...!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
ma best n fav is dis...!!!!😉
naa chaho kisi ko itna, ki chahat tumari majburi ban jayee,
chaho kisi ko itna, ki tumhara pyar uske le jaruri ho jaye
waiting 4 more ....n more...!!!!😃😃😃😃
Luv
Sugari..>!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwww.....tat was soooo cute....poor geet,maan is staying away 4m her,n its hurting her too much yaar....at least,baby gets d kiss,m happy about tat...n wats this diary is all about???maan's past???😕 well,watever it may b,i was full blown by ur hindi again...
"jo hadd se na guzar jaaye woh pyaar hi kya.
jo pyaar karne pe majboor na karde woh ikraar hi kya.
intezar toh sab karte hai, saanse tutne tak jo saath na de woh saath hi kya!!"
"naa chaho kisi ko itna, ki chahat tumari majburi ban jayee,
chaho kisi ko itna, ki tumhara pyar uske le jaruri ho jaye"
loved these lines....awesome👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
That was fabulous update!
I pitty Geet, Maan is simply too much........
bechari ko tarsaake chod diya,
Well, Mujhe lagta hai, Geet ko strong banna chahiye,
as in shayari, she should compell him to love her,
All the poetic lines were awesome........
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 57

in the morning rano, thai ji & Brij came to Khurana mansion with some gifts & sweets
daadji welcome them & serve them tea & snacks
daadi tells nakul to tell geet
thai ji - we wanted to take geet to HP for pag phere if u all don't have any problem
daadi - yeh to riwaz hota hain, hamein kaise problem ho sakti hain
nakul comes down looking confused & wispers to daadi - maam sahab kamre main nahi hain
daadi - tum outhouse main dekh lo maan ke saath hongi
daadi was actually delighted that she was not in the mansion
nakul goes to the out house & looks around she was no where to be seen
he comes back & informs them. this was rubbing the wrong side of brij
he was getting restless & worried
brij - meri geet kahan hain
daadi - nahi beta, let me just talk to maan
she rushes to the outhouse, brij, rano & thai ji follow her
they wait down & daadi goes to maans room...
maan just comes out of the wash room wiping his hair


daadi - Geet kahan hain Maan
maan - apne kamre mein, kyun kya hua
daadi - woh kahin nahi mil rahi hain
maan - main ne khud use..he paused reminded of pushing her out of the room
he closed his fist & rushed out
brij stopped him at once holding his collar - where is my sister
he was clueless
brij - kya kiya aapne meri behan ke saath
maan snaps his hand off the collar - aab geet meri patni hain
rano tries to calm brij
maan shoots a glare to all of them & calls the security gaurds
asked them to check the CCTV & inform her past moments outside the mansion
nakul - sahab upar wale store room ka darwaza khula hain
all of them ran to the store room..to find her cuddled up on the bare floor
she had some book & the spread cluctched in her hand
brij hit the door in anger seeing her plight & ran to lift her
maan moved in & lifted her not letting him interfer


geet wrapped her arm around him - sone do na waise bhi raat bhar aapne mujhe
tangh kiya tha, aab yahan bhi aagaye dhust dhanav
rano, daadi & thai ji were little embarressed & walked away to the hall
brij was still not convinced about all what he saw, tai ji pulled him to the hall
maan made her lie on the bed & tucked the spread around her
her hands & feets were cold lying on the floor
maan rubbed her feet & hands - kyun humesha aise karti ho
she turns around & sleeps comfortably holding his hand
uske sparsh ko toh woh dil se mehsoos karti thi
ajeeb sa sukoon sa jhalak tha uske masoom chehre mein

it was an odd situation in the hall
none of them spoke a word, brij crossed his legs & still tried to get a
clearer picture.
tai ji finally tried to break the silence - woh geet hamesha se aise karti hain
rano - kisi se rooth jaaye toh kamre mein jaakar seham ker sojati hain
tai ji - aur hum log use sab jagah search karte reh jate hain
rano - uski bachkani harkate ..actually uski taraf se main maafi mangti hoon
daadi - yeh kya keh rahi hain aap, bache hain abhi masti nahi karenge to kya meri
umar main masti karenge

after an hour or so, rano & tai ji went to their room
maan sat next to her & she was sleeping comfartably holding his hand
maan tries to slip his hand away seeing them, she pulls him back
he feels really odd infront of them
he snaps his hand at once & leaves...dus sar wale ravan ho aap & sleeps again
rano & tai ji look down & wondered wat she was upto
rano slowly rubbed her forehead, she held hand & maa & cuddled up into her
& a tear rolled down her closed eyes
rano - arey pagli itna pyar karne wala pati mila hain phir kyun ro rahi hain
geet in sleep - aap ko pata nahi mujhe bahut pareshan karte hain
tai ji & rano giggled
tai ji - chalo utho abhi
geet looked up to see herself in rano's lap she was so happy & kissed her
geet - mama aap yahan
rano - tumhe pag phere ki rasam ke liye lene aaye the
tai ji - we wanted to take u to HP, I hope maan won't have any problem
geet murmered unhe kya problem hogi, woh to waise bhi mujhse door rehne ke bahane dhoondhte rehte hain
baby~aise nahi hain
geet~tu chup kar
rano - GEET
geet - mama aap ise jaante nahi ho mujhe bahut pareshan karta hain
thai ji - aab tumhari shaadi hogayee hain, aapni bachkani harkate bandkar
rano - aur yeh kya, tum maan bete ko chodh kar store room main kyun jakar so gayi
maan just walked in then with a glass of milk... they looked at each other
geet kept quite & looked down...murmering babaji yeh aacha hain
woh mujhe kamre se nikaalte hain aur sab log mujhe galat samajh rahe hain
tai ji - kitna pareshan ho gaya tha bechara
geet murmered pareshan my foot
baby~which foot..left yah right
geet~tu chup kar warna pite ga
he kept the milk on the side table & left
tai ji waks geet - tujhe sharam waram hai bhi ya nahi
pati se kaam karwa rahi hain.. aaj to tujhe subha subha utth kar sab ke liye
kuch meeta banana chahiya aur tu so rahi hain
geet - mujhe nahi banana aata, aap log mujhe pareshan mat karo
daadi walks in - kaun pareshan kar raha hain hamari bahu ko
& kisses her forehead
geet - dekho na daadi & hugs her
rano - nahi hum to keh rahe tha ki woh rasoi wali rasam ho jaati toh
hum isse apne saath le jaate
geet murmers..gas toh on nahi karna aata ab sweet kaise banaoongi
daadi kuch nahi keh rahi meri maa hi mujhe phasa rahi hain
tai ji - maan beta bhi chalenge na hamare saat HP
geet - unhe rehne do tai ji, woh nahi aayenge
rano - kyun tum dono main koi fight hogaya hain kya?
geet gets confused
baby~kab nahi hota
geet rolled her eyes
geet - nahi unhe office main kaam hoga
she murmers woh hamare rishta ko nahi maante phir rishte ke rasmo ko kahan maanege
geet gets ready & comes down with rano & tai ji
where there was a cold war going on between Maan & brij
daadi - maan, they have come to take her to HP
maan - WHY
geet babaji inhe kya hogaya
brij - pag phere ki rasam hain
maan - theek hain I will drive her to HP
geet almost faints..babaji subha subha inhe kya ho jaata hain
aur raat main dhust dhanav
baby~yeh yeh papa ke saat HP
tai ji - jeete raho beta ji

precap
wonder how will geet make the halwa???😲

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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