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Sadaf

@kyphfanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

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i think its been a while since i commented, was really occupied with work and final papers in December!

The story is going amazing so far, Always had loved Geet, she is just soo stupid(in a good way) 😛

Nice update. 😊

Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago

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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

You dint pm me!!!! Awesome dear... Really loving the care that Maan has!😳

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Time for some comments😛

Part 56

Lovely part!😊

Geet has so many dreams, aspirations but they all came crumbling down due to Maan😒 Maan too loves her a lot but is too apprehensive that he might hurt her, may not be able to meet her expectations! Geet ne keh toh diya that he means a lot to her, Maan kyun nahi bolta apni dil ki baat usse!!! Why is he under-estimating himself?😒 Arre we have full confidence on him😉

Maan and Geet in different rooms, actually different houses-one in mansion and other in outhouse😒 Loved Geet's determination here, she went to the outhouse😊

Baby ko papa ka kiss mil gaya😊😛

Maan aisa kyun kar raha hai? Usne Geet ko room se bahar nikaal diya. She kept on knocking and crying but still he didn't move a bit. Aise khyaal rakhne ka vaada kiya tha usne??

Due to him, Geet ne baby ko bhi hurt kar diya😭😭

Geet in store room. Geet reading the diary, I actually got worried. Hope it doesn't create misunderstandings further! Related to Sameera, I guess. And Maan hasn't shared his past with her as yet!

BTW those diary lines were really very beautiful, full of deep emotions!!!

Part 57

Geet's family in the mansion, Dadi is happy that Geet is with Maan in the outhouse but little does she know what her grandson is upto!

I don't how many times I have said this, but I really like Brij here. He's so caring and sweet! 😊

He's also possessive about Geet and so is Maan😉 Do include some scenes in the future updates where there's a sweet clash of Maan and Brij's possessiveness😉 It would be really fun to read😆 Loved today's scene when Maan says ki ab woh meri patni hai and then, when Brij moves forward to pick up Geet but then Maan moves ahead and picks her up. Too good!!!😛

Geet neend mein kitna kuch bol deti hai😆 Maan ko embarrass kar diya sabke saamne😆😆 But I loved these scenes a lot😛

Rano-taiji-geet conversation was good!!! They were trying hard enough to knock some sense into Geet about being a good wife and a good bahu but Geet ko toh Geet hai😉 Lekin hamein toh aisi chulbuli, pyaari, bachkaani harkate karne wali Geet hi pasand hai aur Maan ko bhi😉😆

Love the baby a lot😊

He is witty and humourous-which foot-left ya right? 🤣🤣

Maan acting possessive again when he asked why she has to go to HP and then telling everyone that he will drive her to HP, geet ko bhi shock mein daal diya!😉

That was funny when she murmered-subah subah inhe kya ho jaata hai aur raat mein dusht danav🤣

Maan-Geet-baby going to HP together. Yay!!!

Halwa aur Geet?😆 Maan hai na😉😛

Too excited for the next part. Update it super-soon!😳😊

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

love geet 👏love u too muski ................ always keen to read your ff ......... thank for your sweet writing😊

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

AWESOME UPDATE DI... is maan having split personality...

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

superb update

love maan's caring nature at some points.
and baby is sooo sweet today

geet murmered unhe kya problem hogi, woh to waise bhi mujhse door rehne ke bahane dhoondhte rehte hain
baby~aise nahi hain
geet~tu chup kar

murmering babaji yeh aacha hain
woh mujhe kamre se nikaalte hain aur sab log mujhe galat samajh rahe hain
tai ji - kitna pareshan ho gaya tha bechara
geet murmered pareshan my foot
baby~which foot..left yah right
geet~tu chup kar warna pite ga

geet almost faints..babaji subha subha inhe kya ho jaata hain
aur raat main dhust dhanav
baby~yeh yeh papa ke saat HP

waiting for next

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Another lovely update Muskan...... 😉

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Muski,

I really enjoyed Part 57. I was a bit sad and upset with Part 56, the way Maan was treating Geet…I am confused as to why he is doing so…I know he feels guilty I guess about what he did with Geet. But at point in time, Geet needs his emotional support na, which is good for both the baby and the mother….

I loved when he carried her to the bedroom and tucked her inside the spread. ❤️

I loved how he rubbed her hands and feet…because she was cold….😳😳

I loved the baby when Geet said…pareshan my food and baby ~ Which foot, left ya right? Lolz….that was hilarious🤣….🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.and baby saying – fight kab nahi hota…lolz…amazing…updated…loved it…

I hope to see Maaneet moments…I mean where Maan is considerate of her feelings….

Love

Rachana