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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww dat was awesummm awww geets family here to get geet for pagh phara and they all lookin for geet and maan gets curious aswell where is she
i loved wen maan tells brij that geet is her wife and i liked that shes half asleep and maan picks her upp
baby is cute as alwayss and wowww noww maan is goin to take her HP aaww bless geet shes very confused abt himm
cnt wait for more
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muski dear...!!! 🤗mindblowing update...!!👏👏👏👏
Geet bhi na sab tou pareshan kerki rahka hai...!!!😆😆😆😆
Maan is showing attitude now...!!!😃😃😃
Brij is being over protective...!!!!
pang phere ki liey ajj hi ana tha...!!!😕😕😕
Baby is so sweet n cute...!!😳😳😳
rite wala yeh left wale...!! hahaha...!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
im also wondering Geet ki help kyon kerega...!!! Maan yeh Meera...!!!!😳😳😕
Luv
Sugari...!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsssssuuUUUUMMM!!!!

maneet going to HP!!!!

looking forward to more cute maneet scenes!!!


update ASAP!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz ...........poor baby ...........actually i think that baby gives as good as it gets. .........
lmao....................geet murmered pareshan my foot
baby~which foot..left yah right

once again another brilliant update !!!

but yaar .........are Geet's mom and grandma suffering from selective amnesia ??
they never taught Geet how to cook, how can they expect her to make halwa ??

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Posted: 14 years ago
muski u havent updated 2 day ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayee....
i just loved it muskaan...!!!!!!!
awesome..............
i m speech less....
pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
wen is the next update?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey wat happened???? no update today...waiting :) update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
dat too i dnt understand wat happns wid his mood morning me kuch aur nigh me kuch aur

maan snaps his hand off the collar - aab geet meri patni hain just for words u draggded her out of ur bedroom 😡

geet wrapped her arm around him - sone do na waise bhi raat bhar aapne mujhe
tangh kiya tha, aab yahan bhi aagaye dhust dhanav
rano, daadi & thai ji were little embarressed & walked away to the hall 🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 wat wud dey have thot

daadi - yeh kya keh rahi hain aap, bache hain abhi masti nahi karenge to kya meri
umar main masti karenge cho chweet dadi love you ❤️

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this was superb update plz update next part soon .......

it was fantastic 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

some scenes were really funny nd some were so cute 😊😊😊😊😊😊



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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 58



brij still looked worried for geet
rano - geet rasoi main ja kar jaldi se kuch bana do
geet gets up mumering inhe to pata hona chahiye mujhe kuch nahi banana aata,
maan looks at her & then leaves to the study
daadi - nahi beta rehne do
geet comfortably sits back..mumers bach gayi
tai ji wispers - abhi jao
geet clutches her duppata and walks into the kitchen
she looks around takes a vessel
baby~mama😛
geet~kya hain
baby~kya bana rahe ho
geet~tumhe use se matlab
baby~jo bhi bana rahe ho taste mat karna
geet~kyun...she wondered
baby~aap ke chakar mujhe bhi taste karna padega
she lifts her hand to pat her stomach
maan holds her hand back & bends down to kiss her stomach
she pulls her duppatta down & turns to look away
baby~love u papa😳
maan~mama itna bhi bura nahi banaati, mujhe toh unke haath ka sandwich best lagta hain
geet blushed - babaji yeh itni meethi meethi baate kyun kar rahe hain
maan puts the kadai on the gas, she sits on the slab
reminding them of her first visit to mansion. he adds the flour & fries it in ghee
maan takes a apple washes & gives it to her
she makes a face & eats, he adds sugar & then water & stirs it
she tries to take it from the kadai to taste it, he holds her hand back
she pulls her back mumering taste bhi nahi karne de sakte
maan - garam hoga, tumhara haath jal jayega
baby~hamesha papa ko galat samjti hain
😒
she tries to get off maan rushes to lifts her down
maan - yeh kya kar rahi ho
holds her from the waist & slides her down. her cheeck slides his stuble, she lets a moan and she rests on him lost in his touch. his hand slide around her waist holding her hugging her,
maano phir se ji utha hon madhoshi ke saare pal
ek doosre ke itne kareeb ho kar yeh doori sahi nahi jaati
saansein is kadar ghul se jaati, jaise khushboo hawa mein
daadi & meera comes in - halwa ki mehek... & turns back
maan slips his hand back in his pocket & leaves, geet rushes out holding her duppatta to the hall
they giggle at them & look away
meera stirs the halwa & adds dry fruits & serves it in the bowl to every one the hall
daadi - really nice beta
geet kept quite & looked down
baby~mujhe bhi papa wala halwa khaana hain
daadi gives a gold kada to geet... she took it & went to the kitchen
baby~mujhe abhi halwa khaana hain
geet~mujhe bhi
geet served the halwa in a bowl & was about have bite maan walks in
she puts it back & turns her back
maan comes to her takes the kada from her
geet mumers pehen lo waise bhi jisne halwa banaya hain usi ke liye hain
baby~mujhe halwa khana hain
maan lifts her hand in his & slips the kada
she looks at him lost, admiring & mumers itna khush mat ho geet yeh wohi das sar wala dhust dhanav hain ab bhadke ga....babaji yeh kya kar rahe ho mere saath
maan takes the halwa & feeds her, again kisses her tummy - u like it
baby~i love it🤗
geet mumers mujhe nahi poocha
baby~I can smell something burning
geet looks around~nahi to
baby~mama aap jal rahe ho papa ka mera pyaar deehk kar
geet~mujhe kyun jalan hone lagi, reh tu apne papa ke pass main ja rahi hoon
maan turns to give her a stern look - get ready we will have to go to the bank
first & then to HP
...geet nodes
maan to brij - we have some work in the bank first. I have arranged a car for u all
we will meet u in HP
brij - lekin...rano holds his hand back
rano - theek hain beta ji
meera gets her dresses from the mansion, geet smiles
maan comes in & notices her suitcases
meera leaves them alone
maan - I told u , not to stay in my room
nakul comes in - mam, store room saaf kardiya maine
geet - yeh suitcase wahan rakh do
maan closes his eyes - tum store room main kyun rahogi
she snaps his hand & leaves.
meera bumps into geet as she was walking out of maans room
meera - tum na saree pehen na
geet looks at maan - nahi nahi woh theek nahi hoga
meera - daadi ne kaha hai
geet - lekin....mumers ..meera ki bachi kahan phasa diya mujhe
meera - acha main chalti hoon, mujhe gift packs bhi ready karne hain, bye
geet~babaji aap to mera peeche he pad gaye ho na, aab mera kya hoga
woh to kuch na kar ke bhi sab kuch kar denge..ummm
...makes a baby face & changes
maan comes to her room & closes the door behind
geet mumers zyaada excited mat ho kuch nahi hone wala hain
she opens the suitcase & picks a red saree, he keeps it back & picks a blue one
geet mumers blue hi kyun...nahi pehanni mujhe blue..cribbingly she removes her kurti
not realizing she was facing him, she stopped mid way & stood rooted
he was dumb fold looking at her, holding himself back. his gaze travelled from
her face to her neck to further down...she could feel the heat without even looking at
him.. he moved a step closer & then snapped ..& turned his back
she turned her back to him & wore the blouse ..mumering kaha tha na kuch nai hoga
he does'nt like u at all, tu inki type ki nahi hain, samjhi tu
tu saare kapde utaar ke bhi inke saamne ghoomegi na, woh tujhe nahi dekhenge
she passed the saree without turning. he wrapped the saree around her, her scent
was driving him insane, his skin burned every time he touched her, caressed her
geet cluctched her hand side ways closing her eyes..
maan left envoloping her in the coldness of his apprehension
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vEFbWLiPUQ&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
tadap yeh madhoshi ki hadd se guzar jaati hain,
yeh bechaini uske daaman aansoonuo se bhar deti hain,
maano tanhaayio ka tikanaan hain iska dil
ke jisko isne chaaha wo wafaai se katraten hain

precap
geet lost in reading

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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