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Palak

@mohit_rockstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

😊😊😊hello guys..while watchin fridays episode an idea clicked my mind and i decided 2 write it..it is d 1st time i m writing an os..so plz bear with me..😊it was after fridays episode wen sajan leave 4 their homes..

samrat and gunjan were about to get into sam's car when suddenly Dhingra and his goons attacked them..dhingra said"it was all ur plan no now just wait n watch how i snatch ur life from you..it is all coz of u that i ve lost all my possessions..u r dead"

gunjan hid behind samrat and was being very scared and samrat comforted her..bt soon the goons approached them and separated sajan😡 and start hitting samrat very badly😭...she couldnt c her love being tortured this way and the whole accident came into the picture and she realizes"what if it had been my love instead of my sister,i would have lost him forever and never get him back..i have given him the punishment for being away not for 1 day or 1 year bt 3 whole years..why does he love me so much?i dont deserve him,it was all coz of dhruv..he was not punished as badly as MY SAMRAT has been punished 4 a sin he has not commited"she was cryin very badly wen she heard samrats cry.HE was being hit so badly

she rushed to him and tried to get off the goons from him bt in vain,,instead d goons pushed her and she hit her head against the rock and it started bleeding profusely..😭samrat couldnt c this and started beatin the goons so mercilessly..gunjan cld c his love,his passion and his care for her and realized how can i be soo selfish he lovess mee soo muc..he cant c any1 touchin me also..oh god i v commited a sin not samrat as i sshld have been there with him wen he needed me the most..and i only lft him..mayank was there with me bt samrat was solely alone.i have insulted gods most beautiful creation that is love..the goons ran away and smarat walked towards gunjan as he couldnt see gunajn cryin bt a goon hit his head with his stick..he cried..chashmishh...and gunjan was shocked and her world came 2 a standstill...

i hope u liked the 1st part of my os...sorry 4 d errors..if u liked it plz put forward ur comments and let me noe if u want me 2 cont wid the os..if yes..i ll cont soon tomorrow and ll update..thanks 4 givin ur precious time 2 my humble attempt😊😊😊

part two-page 2

Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago

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deepti

@.VanishingDream

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful os dear

totally loved it

do continue soon

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-CreativeSoul-

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Posted: 14 years ago

this is an awsome os

plese do continue soon

poor samrat😭 i hope nothing to serious happens to him

do pm me when u continue

luv tanzeel

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Mystery

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Posted: 14 years ago

aweosmeeee os loved it poor samrat plzzzz continue soon and pm me wen ever u will continue soon

lov
--madiha--

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malika

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey dats nyc...do write more.

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey dear

Nice part, luvly take on the track...do cont soon :-)

thanks for the PM

-ZJ

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

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Posted: 14 years ago

really nice and continue soon

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Shafaq

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Posted: 14 years ago

Good one👏
do continue soon😛

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503046

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Posted: 14 years ago

fabolous os dear
do pm me wen u update
loved it
muahhh...
hope nuffin happens to sam...
and gunjan takes gud care of him!
love,
annie

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Palak

@mohit_rockstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thank u guys for ur wonderful comments...i m rily touched...here goes part 2

PART Two

her world came to a standstill.all the negative thots engulfed her and she began to think"what if anything happens to samrat,i ll never be able to forgive myself,i m incomplete without him, his love and his care make me complete..and i m so bad and selfish that i only cared about myself and jiju and not samrat as he was the 1 who has suffered the most-living alone for three years for the crime he did not commit only.."

samrat's wail made her come out of the world of negative thots and she ran to help him out..seeing him in this condition it pierced out..all she could c was the blood oozing out from samrat and she felt as if she had murdered him not the goons..the pain she had given him for 3 years was more than theese wounds...she controlled her emotions and said to herself"i wont repeat my mistake again..i ll not my love die ..i ll do anything to save him..even God cant take away MY LOVE from me...and she looked at samrat and said.."dont worry samrat ur chashmish wont let anything happen to u"

she became so resolute..seeing this samrat felt better and tried to give him a smile and took her hands in his..gunjan gave a smile and nodded in concern..ad softly said:dont worry..i m there..and i love you"

samrat became teary eyed and said "i love you 2 chashmish"

and with this she took samrat in a nearby tent and made him lie down comfortably..

hope u liked this part 2...😊the last part ll be updated soon..thanks 4 readin

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Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago