hidden emotions- sajan os-updated page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwww the scene is really nice...keep it up!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
awesome part yaar🤗
u wrote it really well........
im speechless......hat's off dear👏
loved it totally
do continue soon!!!!!!!
can't wait for the last part!!!!
n thanx for the pm!!!!

luv ya
deepti
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
wow
u wrote it sooooo well
thanks for updating
aw gunjan is sooo cute and caring
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww lovely scene😍

u r really gud at writing👍🏼 doesnt luk lyk its ur first!
do cont soon :)
n Keep Writing!

thanks for the PM

-ZJ:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow great os🤗plzz pm me when you update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its awesum dear realy luvd it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊thank u soo much guys for appreciating my humble attempts..here goes the last part-

while gunjan made him lie down samrat was lookin at her weakly but lovingly😍..there was too much loss of blood then gunjan tore her sarees pallu a bit and tied it to samrat's wounds..it pained him but but it hurted her more 2 c her love like that but she was firm in taking care of sam..

so she applied medicine,bandaged it and kissed it softly,samrat felt relaxed and felt that he has reached heaven with his chashmish and he was abt to speak wen gunjan stopped him and said"kuch bolne ki zaroorat nai hain..aaj sirf main bolungi or tum sunoge..itne dino se main hi bol rahi hoon aor tumhe bolne kaa mauka hi nai diya..toh 1 din or hi sahi😆..

samrat just looked blankly at gunjan..gunjan started to talk"i want you to leave me forever samrat as i dont deserve u.. u ll find sum1 better than me..i ve punished u 4 a crime u didnt commit..it was all coz of me that u became a dead living being who forgot to breathe,smile and have fum all coz of me...u always wanted 2 kill urself u either participated in the bike race or sumthin dangerous..samrat was hurt seeing his chashmish like that..he pulled her close to him and kissed her head and said"chashmish i love you alot..how can u think of going far away 4m u..and u think i can find sum1 better than u no chashmish its u who has always been there with me as my support and my pillar...how can u just simply smatch them away?though u were very harsh to me bt i noe even 1ce u didnt forget me u included my name in ur every breathe so how can i believe that u do not love me?its not the fault of us chashmish bt the fault of the fate who played a dirty trick on us bt c it has again united us again..soo y r u cursing urself my lovE?I Cant live without u coz u make my life worth living and thats the deadline...he loosened his grip as he 2 was 2 grief-stricken seeing gunjan like that..she said to herself"ohh godd this guy is crazy he loves me soo much how ll i ever return this back to him?

an idea clicked her mind and pulled samrat closer to her and said"dare you ever leave me again mr samrat shergill..even if i insist u ll not let me goo otherwise ill surely kill u"😆.samrat gt confused..

"yes yes MR SAMRAT SHERGILL WILL U MARRY ME AND MAKE MR YOURS FOREVER?WILL YOU DETACH MYSELF FROM ME AND ATTACH MY SOUL TO UR SOUL?YES WILL U MARRY ME?"gunjan said to samrat bending on her knees and proposed ti him..samrat was too shocked and happy..he just pulled her and locked her lips with his..the yearning for each other was clearly visible..and then they hugged each other tightly after a long time just to find their lost solace which they used to find earlier....

the silent moon witnessed their love for each other and smiled brightly..


soo guys this was the end of this os..hope u all liked it..plz do give in ur views..😊i hope u guys njoyed readin it as me myself enjoyed doin it..waitin for ur precious and valuable comments-----

palak
lov u all

Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic yaar
really fabulas part
muahhhh
hugssss
really loved itt
write more os
really love 2 read ur os

Love
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW!its really wonderfull...why are you ending it so soon...if you wan't then plzz cont love it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --brownies132--

WOW!its really wonderfull...why are you ending it so soon...if you wan't then plzz cont love it!!


even i wish to continue it dear..bt i ll take alot of time 2 update and mah preselections are on its wayy..so that is yy..bt once it gets over,,i ll surly cont n let u noe alrite sweety?

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