OS- Lag Ja Gale Se phir ye raat ho na ho

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anjali

@rosette80

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

awwwwwwww,,white..again u did..a very captivating and heart wrenching os..no this isnt any os..but has to be the futue scene in geet..yes..

just speechless and hope it goes this way..but yet i want some sizzling or romantic moments before the truth comes out! as i am soo scared that afterwards we wll be deprived of such...

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Shobha Shamanur

@shobhashamanur

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

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u r post is superb.....no words.....speechless !!!! i love ur post...plz continue

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Awesome... Pls PM the next time...

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

sorry for the delayed response, but i totally love the OS .. you brought out the pain as well as the nature of their relationship beautifully .. these lines caught my attention especially ...

"Geet tumhaare mann ki khoobsoorati ke aage bahari khoobsoorti mere liye koi maiyane nahi rakhati...main vo dekh sakta hoon jo tum is shringaar ki peeche chupane ki koshih kar rahi ho...bolo Geet ab koun sa dard chupa rahi ho?" Maan looked deep in her eyes and pleaded again.

these are totally Maan's lines ... awesome !!!👍🏼

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Lavz

@LavZ

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Loved it dear...lovely OS....ver well written!!!!

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