Happiness IS just a STEP away... - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bri...

my comp is out..so using..hubby's Ipad..for this..
could not resist.. forgive me if..it does not..come out right... i hate using ipad..cant type...

Weakness

On top the mountain I stand

Surveying all that is grand

All the obstacles diminish

As I sprint to the finish

The heat of fire turns to warmth

The raging inferno reduced to amber hearth

Even the hell's burning is not fearsome enough

For I withstand all the burning in the trough

Just because I see you on the other side

Waiting with arms open wide

All my strength is as long there is you

At the end of every display of my might though true

Is only as strong as my will to see thee

My true weakness I smile with glee


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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Rush: not a word is amiss, I love every single word. How the hell well you do it, get into my mind and soul to pick out the right notes to resonate!! I feel like shedding tears of joy!!

I especially love these words "as I sprint to the finish" and you know your verses remind me of that hospital scene where she runs into his widely spread arms :-)

Lobe u,
Bri

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