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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..this is getting intense yaar, I hope the baby is ok 😔

Thanks di! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
wonder wat
happened to
Geet
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOved the update😊
Beautifully portrayed!!!😭
Feeling sad for both Geet and Maan, but Geet ke liye zyaada😭 😭
Wonderful lines, again!!!
I really like Brij here. He is soo caring!😳😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 35

daadi kept the recevier down & called maan immidiatey
maans number was not reachable..she called munshi ji
daadi - maan khanha hain?
munshi - ji woo Land Owmers se baat kar rahe hain
daadi - humari unse baat karoo
maan - ji daadi
daadi - geet kanha hain maan?
maan - mujhe uske bare main kuch nahi sunna..& cuts the call
daadi - lekin!!!

daadi calls him again
munshi - hellow
daadi - humari maan se baat karoo
munshi - ji sir jeep lekar challe gayee

daadi gets really worried & goes to the out house

SUNDAY AFTERNOON OUTHOUSE
daadi sees around the hall & study
then closes the door was about leave when she hears geets mumuering
she rushes to maan's room...
geet was still sitting cuddled up mumering...joot nahi tha...
daadi was terrified to see geet in the same saree..red eyes.. pale face..
with tears trails on either cheek & looking so hurt...the brusies had faded was not very evident ...but she looked sick really ill !!!
daadi - GEET!!! GEET!! she did'nt respond
daadi shook her
geet cried - daadi woo kanha hain,
daadi - Maan to HP gaya hain na beta
geet - woo gussa hokar chale gaya...unho ne kaha ki sab joot hain, wajood nahi
lekin ..aap deehkoo na..mehendi laghi hain na
she shows her hand to daadi..
daadi takes her both hands & tries to comfart her phir joot kaise daadi?
dehko maine saree bhi pheni hain
..geet pulls around the pallo... daadi pats
her cheeks & wipes her tears...phir sab joot kaise daadi
she faints in daadi's arms
daadi takes her to the hospital with nakul's help & calls pinky on the way

doctor takes her in for check up ...
daadi - how is she now?
doctor - aise halat main bina khaya piya , bina soya koi kaise rah sakta hain koi
how could u be so careless..
brij - unki koi galthi nahi..she was just helping us
doctor - aap kaun?
brij - I am geets brother
brij & doctor go in & discuss
doc - she has not had any thing for last 2 days looks like she is deprived of sleep
and she is not responding
brij - kya matlab?
doc - she is blank..uttering some thing..gussa, joot..thats it
she is not falling a sleep, we have given her drips..but she really needs to
sleep...& take some rest
brij - how is the baby?
doc - baby is safe no problems...but if she continues like this then it a problem
brij - sigh is relief. can we see her now?
doc - she is unconcious now...u will have to wait
brij - ji

as brij walks out from dictors cabin
daadi - aab geet kaise hain?
brij - she has to rest doctor said
daadi - can i meet her
brij - actualy she is still unconcious
daadi - kya huwa use
every one looks little drawn back!!!
brij - doc said she has not slept for last 2days & not had her food
thats why some weekness..agar soo jayee to teehk hojayee ghi..lekin
daadi - lekin kya?
brij - so nahi rahi hain..kuch badbada rahi hain..kuch non stop
pinky - lekin abhi to so rahi hain na
brij - nahi pinky !!! abhi unconcious hain
sona matlab proper sleep. pata nahi kis baat se itni pareshan hain?
daadi feels guilty & leaves from there
daadi - call me if there is any requirement
pinky - ji maam


SUNDAY NIGHT @ HP
Maan was packing his bags
munshi - aap jaa rahe hain?
maan - umm!!! aab yanha rah kar kya faida
munshi - lekin land matter to abhi sort nahi huwa
maan - kal mera Ms. rathode ke saath meeting. I can't miss that
munshi - fir yeh land ka issue
maan - find out darji's number & address in delhi & leave it with
my secretary .
maan closes his eyes thinking about geet
grabs his bag & drives back to delhi

SUNDAY NIGHT @ HOSPITAL
brij - geet todi deer so jaavoo
geet does'nt respond just mumueres joot nahi tha, woo gussa
the nurse comes in & suggest to change her dress
geet snaps back & cuddles up on the other side...
darji - GEET !! in stirn voice
she still does'nt respond
darji tries again with striner voice but she does'nt seem to react!!
he breaks down seeing her in that condition
nurse - aap loog yanha shoor mat karyee
please bahar wait karyee I will atleast give her a sponge wash
pinky & nurse wipe her with warm soapy water & tuck her under the spread
brij & darji wait out...
pinky's father gets them some coffee
brij - aap loog ghar jayee. I will be with her
nurse - sorry hospital main koi patient ke saat nahi ruk sakta
brij - lekin
nurse - rule is a rule!!

all of them leave home half heartedly
brij - pinky! did she fight with any one
pinky - nahi veerji
brij - yeh kya karthi hain, mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aata
pinky - actually jab taak maan sir the to sab teehk tha
brij - kya matlab?
pinky - he was making sure that she had her food & all
use jaada kaam bhi nahi karthe the. aapne unhe kuch kaha tha kya?
brij - umm! mera jaana se phele unse baat ki thi. aab maan sir kanha hain
pinky - woo out of station gaya hain
brij - kab aayeenge?
pinky - kal unki impt meeting hain ... I am sure will be back tomorrow

geet did'nt cried ...Meri Duniya Mein Aa Ke mat ja...still not sure why was she missing him and not wanting to depart from him!!!

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cw1RycXFH2A[/YOUTUBE]
jane yeh kaise pagalpan tha jane yeh kaise khumari thi
ek traf Maan bechain tha ek taraf geet behaal thi aur ek taraf unke sare rishte
jane yeh kaise pagalpan tha aab to mano her taraf pareshani pareshani chayee thi...bass ek hi sawal tha ki aakhir kyun unhi ka khyal tha har pal har lamha

precap
daadi blasting Maan

CREDIT OF THE VM SuperMaryam2975
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hurray ..................i'm the first yes yes

MAAN !!!! 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 i din kwn i will tell this but i'm so angry on you
whta u just did with our geet 😔

i'm sure he wud have cried too jst lyk me if he had seen her in this condition 😭😭😭😭😭

OMG!!!!!!!!
thnk god brij reached on time otherwise wat wud have happend if dadi wud have known truth .....wat she wud have thot abt geet 😔

dadi bashign on maan .....yes yes go dadi go he derves this ..........give hima hard time ..............ho cud he do this to geet 😡

but this was most amazing update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏



"woo gussa hokar chale gaya...unho ne kaha ki sab joot hain, wajood nahi
lekin ..aap deehkoo na..mehendi laghi hain na
she shows her hand to daadi..
daadi takes her both hands & tries to comfart her phir joot kaise daadi?
dehko maine saree bhi pheni hain
..geet pulls around the pallo... daadi pats
her cheeks & wipes her tears...phir sab joot kaise daadi " this totally made me cry 😭
😭😭



Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops this IF problem ....... well koi gal nahi .........ur update is so mazing i can comment twice 😊

u knw wta i thnk wen maan will be beack geet will eb so angry on him beyond livid nd wont tok to him ..........maybe will give him ahrd timein pacifying her 😊
Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops muski !!!y is geet hospitalized ...maan ka jaane ka itna sadma tha use ..poor geet i feel so so sorry fr her
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh nooooooooooooooo - haiiiiiii rabba.............geet sojaaaaaaaaaaaaaa - omg omg teary eyes - i feel badd - muskiiiiiiiiiiiiii kuch karoooooooooooooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muski...I will be inactive on IF for a couple of weeks due to my exams. But please keep pm-ing me, i will read all ur updates the day my exams get over.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet ki madhoshi behoshi mein badal gayi.😭

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