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AnonMSK thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan u deserve to get a good scolding 4m dadi:-(
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg...this is really sad...
Maan really deserves a blast from Dadi
Thanks for the update
and
Please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 36


Monday Morning
Maan gets back to the room ... mano geet hi geet samyee ho har ehsaas main
itna bechain kyun hogaya tha maan uske ehsaas se...mano geet ke
roona ke gunj aab bhi sunayee de rahee hoo
maan closed his ears & went into the shower..
got ready & was stepping out to the office
daadi - stop right there
maan - daadi abhi nahi..I am really held up I have a very important meeting today
daadi - geet hospital...her voice was unheard
maan sits in his car & leaves

HOSPITAL
geet third night no sleep & rest
doc - we are really worried now
can't even give her seductives because she is pregnant
brij - she did'nt sleep the whole night!
doc - yah!! is there any one missing from ur family
like whom she is very close to, I guess if they talk to her
or comfort her she may sleep..iske mama, papa.. anyone
brij makes a call to rano & suggest her to talk
rano - geet puttar...geet!!!
papa ji - geet beta..papaji bol rahon beta
raji - geet didi, aap kaise ho?
chitto - didi didi, aap kuch bolthi kyun nai
brij shook her & turned her in a jerk
doc - relax ..aap relax kijayee
we will give her mild seductive..they inject her the seductives
& waited indinfintly for her to fall a sleep
she still remained disturbed & concious
baby~papa pas jana hain
geet~mujhe bhi

daadi came to visit geet
brij - she has'nt slept a wink
daadi - kal raat bhi nahi soyee
brij - kisi baat ka respond nahi kar rahi hain
samjh nahi aa raha ki kya baat use itna pareshan kar rahi han
I am really tired of her chlidish behaviour now, pata nahi
kya iske dimag main gus gaya hain...joot..kya joot, kya gussa??
kya wajood? kya bol rahi hain yeh? mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aaraha
daadi sits next to geet & holds her hand
she slipps her hand out & turns away mumering..joot nahi tha
main nahi manooghi!!
daadi wispers maan office gayen hain kuch meeting hain
geet turns to look at her... u sleep now..he will come in the evening
to see u
...she snaps & turns away..wo nahi aayenghe
daadi wisper i promise
geet - paka baby~delighted
daadi - umm
geet - phir main unka wait karti hoon phir baby~main bhi
daadi - please beta zid mat karo
she turns lies down

aajvoo, ki meree jaan ko qaraar nahi hai
taaqat-e-bedaad-e-intazaar nahi hai
dete hain jannat hayaat-e-dahar ke badle
nashsha ba_andaaza-e-KHummaar nahi hai
giriya nikaale hai teree bazm se mujh ko
haay ! ki roone pe ikhtiyaar nahi hai
(galeeb's work)

Maan reached office & looked at her cabin through the blinds
rah rah kar uska intazaar kartha..
najane kyun use uska intazaar tha
jantha to wo bhi tha ki wo nahi aayee ghi
phir yeh kaise intazaar tha
shayad geet aa bi jaathi ..agar aana uske bas main hota
wo pagli to uske intazaar main sud bud koyee ja rahi thi

sasha - MK Ms.Ratode is waiting
maan - umm!!
maan & sasha walk into the conference room...
ek ajeeb se becahani thi..jaise kuch bekar sa raha hoo
jaise kuch teehk nahi hoo...
maan seemed really tensed
Ms.Rathode - so Monday it is!!!
sasha - maam we are done with most of the land that is required
two more properties will be aquired in couple of days, infact the
landowners are here in delhi
Ms.Rathode - this is not acceptable
the discusion went on the whole day
sasha looked at maan
maan realized it was no point discussing with her
maan told sasha - u handle it
maan took the files & walked out
Ms.Rathode - this rediculous, how can he be so rude
he will have to face the consequence

HOSPITAL MONDAY EVENING
doc - seductives bhi nahi asar kar rahe
brij - how can that be possible
doc - it is possible lekin thats not the point
koi baat hain jo ise pareshan kar rahi hain, if she does't
sleep tonight, she may have a nervous breakdown
brij closes his eyes & pushes his hair back in frustration
brij - geet please thoodhi deer soja bacha
please aise mat kar
geet turns away from him..still mumering jooth nahi tha
nurse asks him to leave for the night
brij gets really worried & leaves his alternate numbers
just in case of any emergencies...which he did'nt even want to
think about

OUTHOUSE MONDAY EVENING

maan drove his car & went to his outhouse,
maan was getting restless..ajeeb se bechani thi..
pata nahi kya tha..uska dil dooba jaa raha tha
he threw his coat away holding the file in his hand
daadi - itne bechain kyun ho?
maan - pata nahi daadi
daadi - kya huwa?
maan cleared his throat - nahi office main kuch
daadi - ki uski siskiyun ki gunj pareshan kar rahi hain tumhe
maan shocked looked at daadi, his eyes pupils diluted & flutered...then turned away
maan - aap yeh kis ki baat kar rahen hain, mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha
daadi pulled him aside to face him - aap ko samjh nahi aa raha!!!
maan looks away - nahi samjh aa raha
daadi - geet ki bhai ko bhi samjh nahi aa raha
ki geet 3 din se sooyee kyun nahi, kya baat hain ki usne 3 din se khana nahi khaya
kya baat hain ki woh saree nahi uttarna chathi
kyun sudh budh koi yahi bolti..jooth nahi!..wajood hain!..
would u know kya jooth nahi? how would u know woh kis wajood ke
bare main baad kar rahe hain?
Maan main uske bhai ko kya jawab doon...ki geet 2 din se aapke room mainme
aapke shrit se simat ke kyun beehti the..jab ki uska
pura pariwar wanha use doond raha tha
maan closes his eyes & tears drop
kya jawab doon main doctor ko ..jo pichaley 24 gande se use sulene
ki koshish main hain ..lekin uske ankhee pata nahi kis ka rasthe deehkthi hain
would u know...aap aab bhi chup rahna chahenge
nahi daadi..he falls on his knees & hugs her resting his head on her stomach
daadi - yeh kya kar diya Maan aapne
woh pagli na kuch khati hain na kuch bolti hain
she stokes his hair backward
kya kahta maan...
mere nafrat ki rah mai dard ke purzay talaash karti thi
mere dil ke tukrhay talaash karti thi
ajeeb hijr parasti thi uski fitrat mai,
shajar ke totay patah talaash karti thi
tamam raat woh parday hata ke chand ke saath,
jo kho gay thy woh lamhay talash karti thi
duaaein karti thi ujray hoyee mazaron par
barey ajeeb ajeeb saharay talash karti thi
mujhe to aaj bataya hai fizaon ne ki
woh loot anay ke rastey talash karti thi
mera saath ek khwaab tha..woh us khwaab ko bhi talash karthi thi!!!

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4O_U-wiQgTI[/YOUTUBE]
daadi - please use jaa kar sambal loo warna pagal hojaaye ghi.. kanhi aapki behruki uski jaan na lelay.....maan hugs her tighter & cries

precap
confrontation!!!

CREDIT OF THE VM TO Angel101Anton
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
Tishuu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
i luv u muskiiiiiiiiiiiii thanks for the update FINALLYYYYYYYYYYY the long awaited confrontation
geet shudnt give up soo easily now
n the baby truth has to cum out!!!!!!!!
n brij has to find out its maan hu the father but still be positive
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks Di!! 😳 Was really waiting for this 😃

Edited by radiant_raisa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! soo so sadd! ;( poor maan! misses geet soo much! ;((
I m soo soo happy that the baby is OK...PRECAP looks intense..hopefully geet confronts that she is preg with his childd..OMG! that would be awesomee..
UPDTSOON! precap is killing me..
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved the update

muskan u r just superb dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!
finally maan gnna meet her!
:D

Edited by dimpzz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update... finally maan knws abt geet.. cant wait for the confrontation.... do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome & emotional i wish he find out the truth about Geet carry his baby pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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