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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!....
OMG!...maan was jealous like hell!...
love that scene wen geeet was clinging on maan most of the time!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
khoye hi rehte shayad humesha yun hi aapne bahoon mein..

yeah, we also want that.. with Mahi... background...

nakul knocked the door..maan opened & geet sat on the bed checking her saree
nakul - daadi ne yeh sandals diye hain geet maam ke liya
maan took it from him & closed the door

Yeh Nakul bhi na.. wrong time aate hai..


maan made her wear the golden coloured pointed heels
geet hesitated..maan inisited in a stirn look..she slipped in her legs

Maan ko kya pata.. pregnancy mein high heels risky hai.. :(

maan took his dress & went into the wash room & changed
geet waited patiently sitting in the bed..
after some time she walked to the mirror & tripped
maan held her from the hand & made her stand
maan stirn voice - tum chup chap mera wait nahi kar sakthi thi?
baby~abhi main girta..uff!!

Baby, darna mat.. tumhare papa hai na saath.. who tumhari ghayal rakhenge..

geet - mujhe yeh sab nahi pehanna
maan - kyun? itna pyaari laag rahi ho..pulled up her chin softly


Maan .. aap kitna sweet hai... kitna amer karta hai geet ko.. kaasshh sab ladke aapka tarah hota!!!! bhul ja febin, sab ladki geet ki tarah massom aur lucky nahi hoti!!😉😉😉


maan puts the earing moving the curls behind - umm!!
geet - pakka!!
maan opens her plat & leaves it open - pakka
geet turns to face him..checks his collar & closes the shervani's

neck button & kisses his nose..baby~papa is looking handsome👏
geet - aache lag rahe hoo!!maan & geet walk in togather to the hall

perfect hubby-wifey ki tarah!!!!!


geet was very conscious of the saree & walked close to maan clinging to him
daadi - beta tum sari main bhut pyari lagh rahi ho
geet - inhone pehnaaya hain (she bit her lips & maan blushed &
did'nt know how to react)
maan cleares his throat - iska matlab hain I told her how to wear

zyada safayi dene ki koi zarrorat nahi Maan ji.. dadi ko pata hai... 😆

engagement cermony starts & geet stands holding maans arms in a corner

yaar, muski, I really wanted to see one snap of this.. but we don't have any !!!!! 😭

baby~mujhe bhi deehkna hain

geet handed over the ring, pandit ji started the pooja
they exchanged the rings, geet looked restless & turned looking for maan
he stood in a corner, she slowly slipped close to him
dev & meera looked at each other & smiled
geet clinged on to maan..tighter..maan rested his hand on her grip
she slid her hand down his arms & entrangled his fingers & rested her head on his arms

so sweet !!!!!

geet - wow..15days of licensed dating..she giggles
maan - wat ???
geet - pata hain I really love this time between engagement & wedding
maan - why?
geet - there is so much of romance & passion
maan - that should be their after wedding too right
geet - haan but this is different!!!.
maan - woo kaise?

tho aap log ab kya kar kar rahe ho.. har raat ko kya kar rahe ho.. us rishtey ko kya naam diya aap ne????.. nafrat ka rishta 😃😃😃.. Geet ji.. nafrat mein aisa hota hai.. tho pyar mein kya karenge aap log.. kabhi out house mein, pinky ke ghar mein, office mein, mansion mein aur dress changing room mein bhi...😆

baby~confused😕
geet - engagement ke baad ..u still have to fear the parents ..chup chup
ki milna
..(baby~aap to pura samya papa se chup chup ki hi milthi hain

Hi-Fi baby... mein yeh baat tumhari mummy ko samjha rahi thi..who samjhe tab na..

geet ingnores the baby )kuch parents se keh kar milna..aur kuch bina kahe milna
its so much fun u know..main to engagement ke ek saal ke baad hi shaadi
karoonghi
maan rolled his eyes - tum pagal ho

ha maan ji.. hum ko jaantey hai kaun pagal hai.. kisiki nafrat mein pagal banna pehli baar dekha hai 😉

geet -main toh aisi hi hoon
maan - aise hi rehna..hate u
geet - hate u 2, 3, ...10
baby~lets try A B C next time!!😡

Good idea ( MSK style )

maan - tum itna chipko mat mujh se...tumhara raj dehkega toh
geet - mera raj yanha kanha hain..waise bhi why should he mind us
maan - nahi maan lo u like someone here then..like that guy..he points at dev's
friend Dr. rahul
geet - kaun..she looks curiously
maan - that guy in brown waist coat
geet - cute hain na..maan was taken aback

nice one 👏 Geet.. Maan tumhe kya laga..😉 chalo jaldi se jaakar Dr Rahul ke saath uski shaadi tyar kar lo.. bade jaldi tha na.. Raj se milwane ka..

baby~chi-chi bilkul aacha nahi hain

tumhare papa ka dimaag kharab hai... 😡

rahul - hi bhaiya
maan - hi rahul
rahul looks at geet & looks at maan awaiting for an intro
maan - this is geet, she works with me
rahul - can I take ur geet for a dance please
maan looks away..geet looked at maan ..he freed her hand

😡 abhi jalne se kya fayda.. i told ya na... try to understand now.. Geet is very sweet.. so don't set her free.. someoen will grab her ... hold her close to your heart liek a pearl on a string ...

😡geet mumers...main kaise dance kar sakti hoon woo bhi saree main heels ke saath!!
baby~mujhe nahi girana..papa plz..mama ko pakdo
geet walked few steps & tripped..rahul held her from the waist
maan looked at hand that rested on her waist & looked awaya

well done Mr. Maan singh khurana.. aisa hi karna.. who geet se shaadi karega .. tab bhi asia hi karna..kyun nahi roka usko?????

sine mein jalan aankhon mein tufaan saa kyun tha
maan se unki nasdeekyian mano bardasht nahi ho tha
phir dilko tadpne ki lagan kesa tha
geet kept looking for maan as rahul tried to dance along the music

rahul - I am a intern at sanjeevni hospital
waise I am from chandigarh

ha rahul.. trying to flirt with her...😆 free advise de rahi hoon... geet se door raho.. warna MSK tumhe dead body banakar interns ko study karne ko degi.. Munna bhai naam suna hoga aapne.. MSk ka dost hai who.. 😆😆😆

geet gets excited - tum bhi punjab se hoo
main HP se hoon

😡
😡

geet seemed comfartable now..maan kept looking at her
she laughed & their frequency seemed to be really in sink
uska yun hi has has ke baad karna mano maan ko aur bhi bechain kardetha
kuch deer taak bardash kartha..phir jab bardast nahi kar paya to
use wanha se leekar aagaya
..

👏

geet - bye rahul I will call u

You wanna see Rahul in hospital bed???.. No na..then drop that idea ..😡😡

maan - bhut dosti hogayee tumhari in stirn voice

Chup-bilkul-chup..eik aur shabd nahi.. shurro tho aap hi kiya..Raj ko dhoondne mein.. abhi kyun jal rahe ho..

geet - pata hain he is from chandigarh..punjab da munda hain
maan - to shaadhi karoo ghi kya use?
geet - aap aise kyun bol rahe hoon
maan fumbles - nahi u asked me to be with u in the whole party & now tumhe
mujhe chod kar chalee gayee

loved it... hearing those words from MSK

maan gets angry & leaves from there..he went to the garden &
just pushed his hair behind..becoming restless he immdiately went back..looking for

I know i know why you went back... just to check na if she is with Rahul..😉😉😉


Maan uthkeya chaley unki mehfil se, pichhey se usne pukara nahi.
fir khud he ruk gaye kadam, kyunki uske bin Maan ka guzara nahi.

geet stood there confused when few kids came & spoke to her

rahul comes from behind & says ..hi naam to suna hoga..rahul
geet laughs & chases him around the place

ha.. Rahul flirting.. and geet playinga long.. whats this yaar !!!!
she runs & bumps into maan..he holds really hard by her waist in anger
maan - I thought u were not comfartable walking in saree
geet - mujhe duhk raha hain..maan tightens his grip..mujhe bhi

koi root gaya mano , koi khafa ho gaya mano
na jane jindagi main unse konsa gunah ho gay mano
lakho sajde kiye honghe unho ne pane ke liye yeh saat mano
magar jis sajde me pana tha ek dosre ko mano
bas wo hi kaja ho gaya!!!


Muski.... waiting for the next update... awesome as always... Liked Rahul.. cool guy !!!! wanna see MSK more Jealous... 😆😆😆

Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 31

tears rolled down her eyes with his fingers pressing on her waist harder & harder
maan left her at once moving away .. she fell backward & held onto him
maan looked in anger
geet - aap itna naraz kyun ho rahen hain
maan glared back at her in fury
kya kha pata khud bhi to nahi jaantha ki kya baath use pareshan kar rahi thi
kyun itna jalan mehsos kartha jab koi geet ke aas paas hota
geet - ok baba I am sorry & hold her ears
alfaz kahanse laatha Maan chhale ki tapak samjhane ko,
izhaar-e-nafrat karte hain lekin ehsaas-e-mohabbat jithe hain!!
maan - umm!!
geet - kitna gussa karthe hoo
maan - main aise hoon
geet - aise rahena..hate u
maan - hate u 2, 3, ..10..held her closer
baby~i said we are trying A, B, C..this time
maan - waise u really liked him?
geet - he seems to be nice, lekin abhi to main 8 months ka liya kuch nahi soch sakti
maan - u can fall in love anywhere any time with any one right?
geet - lekin
maan turns to look into her eyes - fir abhi kyun nahi ..8 months ke baad kyun
geet - 8 months tak aapne mujhe band jo rahka hain aapne saath
maan moves closer embracing her maine kab bandha tumhe
geet pulls out his hands ..aise hi band leethe hoo phir poochthe hoo kab bandha?
maan snaps pulling her hardly - phir hamesha mujh se door jane ki
baath kyun karthi hoo
geet - baath hi karthi hoon.. kabhi jaa nahi paathi..moves closer closing her eyes
maan irresistibly...will u dance with me..
geet - umm with her eyes closed..then opens her eyes suddenly realizing what she just accepted
geet stepped into his arms scared & nervous, her body picking up the cues,
following him effortlessly..maan ki to har aahat pe woo jhoom utt thi...
phir uske saath madhosh hon kar nachna tho bhut hi aasna tha
she was trying to be vigilant, her attention on the steps,
he pulled her closer, nuzzled her temple and the feathery spikes of her hair.
don't worry main hoo na...But she did worry. He could feel the slight stiffness in her,
the fragmentation of her attention that made her oh so slightly resistant to the dance.
uska pal pal durna..sharmana..phir bhi maan ke bhaahon main jhoomna
maan ko aur bhi madhosh kar detha
..He moved still closer & danced lost in her
iskadar nach rahe the dono mano ek jism aur do jaan ho..
koya reha kuch pal..us madhoshi main..na loogo ki phikar na khud ka hosh tha
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjunNYYPyWc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

the gathering stopped for a while to watch them dance so passionately
geet got lost & rested her in his embrace when the next song played on
Maan stepped back and said challoo she gave him a long look.
geet ' aap naraz ho?
she was right. challoo yanha se in stirn voice.
then he took hold of her hand and led her into the garden.
they walked the paths in silence for a while, the music from the hall growing fainter
in among the trees the night birds sang from the darkness.. falling silent.. briefly
as they passed.. white roses glowed in star and moon light
the big leaves of the trees on either side looked moist in the darkness.
small twinkling lights on the ground lighted their way..
geet - hum kanha jaa rahen hain
she asked, pointing roughly in the direction they were heading
maan - tum chup chap mera saath nahi chal sakti..
she followed him silently. The walked on to a small bridge which was over the pool
plants hanging over it...maan pulled her closer slipping his hand into
her bare waist she rested her head back on his chest
she could feel maans heart beating faster & harder ..she didn't say anything
just let him calm down..just let the moment pass by.....kaise bechani thi maan ke man main, khud se kafa tha yah geet se, is tarah use aghosh main leyea koiya jaa raha tha mano pura zamane se kafa tha...kaise dard tha jise ki aahat geet samhj pathi..jo shayad muskan ne bhi labzoon main, bayan nahi kiya tha...
they were probably like this for more than 30mins...
maan was calmer & breathing in rhythm with hers
geet - suniya
maan - umm
geet - woo daadi pareshan ho rahi honghi..hum aise he wanha se aagayee
maan hugged her tighter & kissed her head challoo
they walked back into the hall & stood near the pillar ..
they stood with their fingers entangled in the corner & watched dev & merra dance
geet was delighted to see the love in their eyes..
geet - they look good together
maan - aacha tum kyun kha rahi thi, tumhara raj will not mind us
geet - he would know about us right(still looking at dev & merra)
maan looked at her in shock - what r u saying?
geet - why will hide anything from him
maan - but
geet - woo mera raj hain to use meri har baath se pyar karna hoga
mujh se..meri pasand na pasand..humari nafrat se..aur humari usdine ke saath ko bhi...& she pauses
maan hugs her & admires her innocence...
kyun lagne laghi thi kuch aapni kuch jaani pehchani si...
yeh ladkhi anjani si..phir bhi lagthi thi jani pehchani si
sab se alag jasi.. phir bhi lagthi aapni si
hasti thi to lagthi hai mano kisi pari jasi
nazron main sharat hain, itraathi har adda uski
kuch aapni si, kuch jaani pehchani si...
maan ke nazaren sharam se jhuk gayee...uski masoomiyat ki samnee..
aapne aap ko uska ghuneghar mane ne laagha woo...

precap
maan leaves geet!!!😲😲

my new ff -truely magical-
Thanxs guys for all ur love & support..hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!
hey Muskan di ..fab...superb update...just loved it..
and we have jealous maan...how possessive for geet I wonder after dance what maan will do?
me really loving it...great update...do keep writing...
love u shayri
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
for u r wirting
he di if u feel better pls udoate 2 parts for this weekend n give us a treat I know u also update other two ff but what can I do I m just addict with u r ff I hope u understand my feelings
plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
di update soon
love u

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGG! I LOVE how maan was jealous! pg90 WAS AWESOME! you updated soo fast! yayy! I m soo soo happppy!
THEIR DANCE WAS SOO intense! ;)) eheh! I LOVEED IT! <333
how he took her to the bridgee! AWWWW! <33333333
PRECAP LOOKS SCARY! MAAN LEAVES GEET? WHY? :O omg! update sooon. WWHY CANT we GET two updates on weekends..? ;p
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mind-blowing... every part from 30 and 30 itself is the best... I enjoyed every part... I am liking the fact Maan is getting jealous of Rahul... I hope Maan come to know about his Baby soon... because I want to see some father and son bond before he's born. Please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
^I agree! ;) maan should knw now! so he takes extra care of geet..
your precap is scaring me..he shouldnt leave her in that state! ;(
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Di,
Maine to aapko maaneet ke cute scencs ke liya reqst ki thi but
yeh precap looks SCARY I m realy scare why maan leavs geet ek to serial me bhi dono ab satth nahi hain yaha to main aapke ff se hi apna nahna sa dil behla lethi thi kush hothi thi but what is thsi di?
plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
di update soon atlist this next part di
plssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I m so impatiences now pls update soon n bring maaneet closer n together
update
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pls
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago

🤗🤗🤗🤗

Lovely update again....
Shayari bahut acchi hai...
alfaz kahanse laatha Maan chhale ki tapak samjhane ko,
izhaar-e-nafrat karte hain lekin ehsaas-e-mohabbat jithe hain!!

(amazing line)
I was lost in their romance & passion for each other....
However precap padhke Im worried...
Jaane kya baat hogayi jiske liya Maan ne Geet ko yu tanha chod diya... Aakhir kis baat ki sazha de raha hai woh... aakhir aisi kya khhata hogayi...
Jaane k liye ... Please update soon Muski
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Posted: 14 years ago
welll muski it was too gudddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd but the precap is shattering plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
don't do that ?

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